The Golden Legend: Early Light

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Hello everybody! My friends call me Raizen which is why I chose this as my nickname. I currently live in Belgium. I like writing fics and listen to music in my free time.

Well Thats all I have to say, please review after you read, if I don't get reviews It makes me think that people don't like it, so therefore no since in writing.

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Chapter 1

The Golden Legend: Early Light



Somewhere in the Fire Country...

The darkest of nights... For the few Light Shinobi, who were one a recon mission in Fire Country, would describe it to be much more. To the survivors, the night is filled with horror. Four of the remaining fifteen survivors found themselves running through a forest in hopes of salvation; salvation from the murderous men in black cloaks with red clouds.

?We have to get out of here! They?re not normal shinobi, we can?t deal with them.? The younger green-haired girl of the bunch stated as tears were streaming down her porcelain cheeks.

The only remaining Jounin, Samaro, who was bald sported a beard, and looked to be in his 30's couldn?t agree with the girl more. The situation that they were in was very grim. He knew that this was going to be his last night alive. He only wished he could see his beautiful wife and two daugthers once more.

Skidding to a halt, the Jounin stopped. The three remaining Chuunin stopped as well. A male by the name Miyamoto, who look to be no more than 20 years addressed the captain, ?Sir? We?re completely surrounded.?

?I know. Well everyone? I don?t know about you guys, but I?m not giving up till the very end. If they want my life they?re going to have take it!?

The last Shinobi, who was a female in her mid-20s, Ayaka, who had a weird symbol on her face smirked, ?Damn right. Why don?t you 'black cloak red cloud' bastards come out!?

Soon enough, the group was surrounded by seventeen shinobi in the 'Akatsuki cloak'. With a hood covering their face, no one could make them out. It didn?t matter really, what mattered was trying to get out of here alive.

The remaining light nins were preparing itself for their last stand. The younger female of the group, was nervous to say the least. ?Okay Yuuka? You?re 16, you never kissed a boy and you?re about to die. This can?t be real. No, I?m a shinobi of the Light, the strongest village in the world. I can?t die here. I don?t want to die here.?

One of the Akatsuki Cloaked Shinobi stepped forward. Focusing his gaze on Ayaka, he addressed the rest of the members of his group, ?Kill the girl.?

Was all anyone heard before slashes of Chakra tore through the Akatsuki shinobi. The one, who gave the order to kill the girl, avoided the technique. Jumping back to create distance between himself and the remaining Light nins. He glanced up to see the source of the attack.

Standing on the branch of a tree, dressed in a blue spandex body suit, with the chest area covered by a familiar black vest and the light headband wrapped around the bicep, the group only knew of two people capable of that jutsu. One was their Korukage and the other was an heir to the Mizutoki Clan. It didn?t take long for the wind to stop and when it did, the face that was covered revealed familiar emerald eyes to the shinobi from the Light.

?Natsumi-san!? Yuuka shouted.

The cloaked enemy narrowed his eyes under his hood. He could not take his chances with this girl, she quickly dispatched all 22 of his minions. ?This girl is dangerous. I have too??

Before he could finish his thoughts, He found himself falling to the ground. ?How could she have moved that fast? I didn?t even see when she moved.?

Slowly placing her sword back in its sheath, Natsumi, who was now behind her enemy, slowly turned and walked up toward the man. Her intentions were to gather as much info from the man as she possibly could, which is why she left everyone alive. However, the shinobi had other intentions. Performing a hand sign to invoke a jutsu, the Akatsuki member blew himself up. Natsumi noticed that he set off a chain reaction. All of the shinobi that she left alive did the same.

?Sheez? Now I can?t get any information from those guys. What the heck is going on here??

Yuuka ran up to the girl and embraced her, ?Natsumi-san! It is so good to see you! It?s been what two-years since you left.?

?It has Yuuka. I was actually heading back to Flame Country. I wanted to surprise Naruto-niisan before he woke. Well what matters is getting you guys to?? An explosion behind the group caused everyone to fall to the ground. Jumping up quickly, Natsumi turned to the direction in which the explosion occurred.

?What the hell was that!? the captain of the group said with a bit of curiosity in his voice.

?We should head home captain? Yuuka?s fear grabbed hold of her. She wanted nothing more than to get out of there. Natsumi on the other hand couldn?t place it, but something was off. Everything in her instincts was telling her to find out what was going on. Without hesitation, she took of in the direction of the explosion.

?Natsumi!? yelling her name to come back was an exercise in futility. ?Shit, she?s going to get us all killed!? Refusing to leave her to her devices, the Jounin took off after her, the rest followed suit.

To Be Continued?

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<div class="bbWrapper"><blockquote class="bbCodeBlock bbCodeBlock--expandable bbCodeBlock--quote"> <div class="bbCodeBlock-title"> <a href="/goto/post?id=750372" class="bbCodeBlock-sourceJump" data-xf-click="attribution" data-content-selector="#post-750372">punk365 said:</a> </div> <div class="bbCodeBlock-content"> <div class="bbCodeBlock-expandContent"> dude this kicks @ss </div> <div class="bbCodeBlock-expandLink"><a>Click to expand...</a></div> </div> </blockquote>lol it does <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick out tongue :p" data-shortname=":p" /></div>
 
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