The forbidden children~Chapter 1

[GhostBoy]

One day in a hidden village called Clan Of The Jinchuuriki,this village got it's name from the two children born up to 11 years ago.They were called Ghost ,and Blaster.
The child named Ghost was born March 7,when he was born his
destiny was writen.His destiny was to become a Jinchuuriki.(of a twin tailed werewolf)He was cursed with it,when his father defeated it and used a jutsu to preserve It in Ghost's body.A month later Ghost had more rage than ever and was able to destroy a building on seconds,even with his young age.Ghost trained for another month and during that month the second child was born with his jinjuuriki.
Blaster's jinjuuriki was made when his father passed it was transported to Blaster's body.(jinjuuriki was of the four armed ape.)Within a month Blaster was able to use strength like no other.Blaster's mother was amazed just like Ghost's mother was.
9 years later that is when they met,at the academy.They bumped into each other and then something sparked when they touched.They yelled and they became the best friends ever since then.

Ghost's childhood friend Mixed came over she said"Ghost your house is on fire!!!"


To be continued..........

 

[Eickles]

Not bad....

 

[SageBase]

That was...decent.

It was not formated and it looks like you just took it from Naruto and changed a story and names a bit..

At least you tried.

 

[Magic..]

nice one dude keep it up

 

[GhostBoy]

Thank u u guys are nice oh and I realize it sounds like naruto but it just poped into my head.

 

[gamahiro]

Can I be Blasther?

 

[GhostBoy]

Alright if u want but u promise to read my NeXT chapters when i make them

 

[Christolo]

I think it's preaty good

 

[GhostBoy]

Re: The forbidden children~Chapter 2

As they all hurried to Ghost's they began to feel the heat of the flame.With every step the heat got more intense.Ghost's mom told him"The evil clan of the dead,did all this!! "Ghost was inraged,he couldn't control it and started to transform to his jinjuuriki.Blaster and Mixed tried to clam him down,but as soon as they touched Ghost he couldn't hold back and he hit them both.Running away to distroy the clan ninja's who did this.At the moment Ghost only has one of his two tails which means he is at half power.

Ghost was missing for a week...
Until it was reported that a short child raged in a clan and destroyed everything within sight.His two best friends came an hour late to only find destruction.they left looking for the clan of death.
Blaster and mixed found ghost resting and calmed down. As he awoke he saw the and said"I'm going to destroy those ninjas."The oter two said"your not going alone were coming too,so let's get going."
When they reached the hidden clan they searched every house for the two ninjas.
They reached the house and found the two brother ninjas.by the name of horo and ikuto toshiyomi,they were frightended by us then shot shurukins at us.The battle has begun.
Ghost and Mixed rushed at the enemy throwing punches and kicks.The two kids were pushed to the wall and knocked out.The two ninjas were gravely injured.Blaster was not sure what to do,as soon as he saw his friends he became An ape with only two arms he let out a screech then punched horo out of the house to fall into a river near the house.Before Blaster could realize Ikuto had a knife to Blaster's neck.Ikuto said in a terrifiying voice that said "with a push you are going to die."


To be continued........

 

[Christolo]

This one looked awesome! cant wait for the next one

 

[GhostBoy]

Thanks Chris your nice