[Other] The Flame

[Ryu Kishi]

The light flickers in the wind, a flame caught in
A tempest of pain. No shield
To save it from death.

Swaying to the left,
Swaying to the right,

The flame fights for its life.
It holds on tight to memorys
Of windless nights, but the wind,
It blows beyond its might.

Hold on! I will;
Hold on i must,

Can not give in to the winds fiery lust.

But the wind howls, with
A greed that cannot be met.

And so the flame slowly
Fades, its light lost to the winds
Of fate.

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[Pyro NB]

Very nice!

 

[Wparker6804]

If I was a troll I'd post "let it go"

But good job. Poetry has never been my forte

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Good poem Ryu !!

 

[fiend]

Beautiful poem dude totally beautiful .

Especially these lines:-

The flame fights for its life.
It holds on tight to memorys
Of windless nights, but the wind,
It blows beyond its might.

Loved it Dude .

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Very nice!

Thank you

If I was a troll I'd post "let it go"

But good job. Poetry has never been my forte

Thanks

Good poem Ryu !!

Thank you :bouncy:

Beautiful poem dude totally beautiful .

Especially these lines:-



Loved it Dude .

Thanks fiendyXD

 

[Hotaruko]

Beautiful poem Ryu also love the gif that you added

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Beautiful poem Ryu also love the gif that you added

Thank you hoto glad that you liked it :bouncy:

 

[Ryóma]

This is pretty good. Reminds me of a humans life.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

This is pretty good. Reminds me of a humans life.

Thanks fujiXD

 

[FunkyFatal]

Good poem liked it

Keep it up.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Good poem liked it

Keep it up.

Thanks