The Final Fight Chapter 4

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Chapter 4 Two Wills

Inside Naruto's subconscious-

Kurama: i'd advise you to try and end this quickly, Naruto. Our link will only allow us to be in this form for 20 minutes.

Naruto : i know.

Kurama: also dont forget about those black flames . If you touch it even slightly, the fight is over

Naruto: right!

Naruto creates 2 shadow clones . Both in bijuu mode

The clones enlarge their chakra arms and charge at susanoo

Sasuke : (so naive)

Susanoo raises it's sword / large arrow and slashes at the clones. They quickly vanish in blinding speed.

Sasuke: !!!

Naruto's clones appear behind sasuke

They each thrust their chakra fists into susanoo's back..

Susanoo is pushed forward and a small opening is opened exposing it's spine

Naruto: There!!

Naruto's clones begin to run toward susanoo's back. Aiming for it's spine.

Sasuke: Amaterasu!

Amaterasu forms around the spine of susanoo.

Not able to react in time, Naruto's clones get burned by amaterasu during their attack

The clones are burning on the ground behind sasuke

Sasuke: You're gonna have to do beter than that.. Naruto.

Naruto: ....

Sasuke forms 6 amaterasu projectiles out of susanoo's sword. They float above it's right hand

Sasuke shoots three of them at Naruto in rapid succession.

Naruto: (can't let those hit!!!)

Naruto dodges all three with blinding speed

Naruto : heheheh that wont be enough!

Suddenly..all the projectiles that naruto dodged are shooting back toward him

Naruto: ( what !!!)

Naruto jumps in the air dodging them once again as they follow him.

Naruto : Dammit!

Naruto creates a chakra arm and grabs a nearby cliff .. pulling himself away from the assault.

Naruto : (How is he doing that)

Kurama: his amaterasu is not like any other ninjutsu. He can control the angle and projectary with his eyes! Dont lose focus!

Naruto senses them coming toward the cliff...

Naruto : !!!!

Naruto : ( i have to get rid of those )

Naruto creates three clones , they each use chakra arms to grab the projectiles . The flames quickly burst into an inferno and dispel the clones.

Naruto releases the chakra arm hanging on to the cliff and drops back down to the water.

Naruto: Thats some technique you've got there. But i wont be killed so easily

Naruto: (i have to aim for the back of his susanoo... Thats the only way to create an opening. He has three of those amaterasu attacks left. I have to be careful)

Naruto : !!!

Naruto has a flashback to his fight with Madara alongside Gaara. He remembers how gaara was able to pull Madara from susanoo with an attack from under Madara's feet.

Naruto: (maybe.....)

Naruto creates three more clones

The clones dash at sasuke with the intent to distract him

Sasuke releases all three projectiles into each clone

All three clones create a sheild with their chakra tails from their cloaks

The attacks once agains bursts into a large black inferno on the tails causing a wall of black flames .

After burning the clones away the black flames dissappear and naruto is no where to be found.

Sasuke: !!!!

Naruto quuickly grabs sasuke's foot from under the water with a chakra arm.

Naruto: (Got Him!\

Naruto pulss sasuke out of susano

As susanoo fades, Naruto quickly tosses sasuke up from the water as Naruto jumps upward right under him

Naruto forms kurama's head with his chakra shroud and begins to form a medium siized tailed beast bomb

Naruto: (sasuke....... forgive me)

Naruto shoots the tailed beast bomb upward at sasuke.

Sasuke:.....

The red of sasuke's sharingan begins to glow bright red

Sasuke: Gensoku-ji !!!

Naruto witnesses his tailed beast bomb fly in the sky as sasuke seemingly dissappered

Naruto lands on top of the water only to see sasuke standing not too far away

Naruto: What!!

Sasuke: Dont underestimate my eyes..

Naruto: ( what the hell did he just do?... )

Sasuke: witness the power of the uchiha!!! Gensoku-ji !!!









WHATS THIS?? A NEW POWER?

Next Chapter: Gensoku-ji !!



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Beautiful as ever! Nicely done! Characters sound just fine!

Only confusing part: the Naruto clones are in Kurama chakra mode yes?! Not the in Beast Mode (transformed into Kurama)?!! Only confused as you said two clones in Bijuu mode so it wounded like they were like tailed beasts.

Osoi Jikan....too lazy to look up what it means, but it reminds me of Captain Yammamoto's bankai...the Jikan reminds me of the final part of his Shikai o_O
 

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Beautiful as ever! Nicely done! Characters sound just fine!

Only confusing part: the Naruto clones are in Kurama chakra mode yes?! Not the in Beast Mode (transformed into Kurama)?!! Only confused as you said two clones in Bijuu mode so it wounded like they were like tailed beasts.

Osoi Jikan....too lazy to look up what it means, but it reminds me of Captain Yammamoto's bankai...the Jikan reminds me of the final part of his Shikai o_O
Thanks man... Yea naruto was in bijuu mode...not the tailed beast form. Blocking with the tails was similar to how he did against madara's rods.... And sasuke's new attack is to be. A mystery until next chapter xD

Edit: I mean bijuu as in with the cape but not the fully formed kurama cloak
 
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Beautiful as ever! Nicely done! Characters sound just fine!

Only confusing part: the Naruto clones are in Kurama chakra mode yes?! Not the in Beast Mode (transformed into Kurama)?!! Only confused as you said two clones in Bijuu mode so it wounded like they were like tailed beasts.

Osoi Jikan....too lazy to look up what it means, but it reminds me of Captain Yammamoto's bankai...the Jikan reminds me of the final part of his Shikai o_O
Btw. I've changed it to "Gensoku-ji". A more accurate translation
 
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