The Final Fight Chapter 3 The Fight Begins

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NARRATOR:Thank you for reading my 3rd chapter. Now to the story.
Naruto:Where's the third one? We got information that there is tree of the them.
Fora:[/OLOR]She remained behind,thats all your getting out of me. If you want any more info you have to fight us.
Taran:Right. Wich one is mine. The guy in the mask or the guy in the jumpsuit.
Naruto:IT'S NOT A JUMPSUIT!!!!!! It's my clothes.
Hinata:Don't get him angry Naruto his chakra lv's are through the roof.
Naruto:Don't worry Hinata we can take him.
Fora:Why don't you take the girl Taran.
Taran:Alright. Let's do it
NARRATOR:So Taran leads Hinata one way and Fora,Naruto,Yamato and kiba get ready to fight. The other's on the other o fight.
Wara:Making hand signs.Monkey,dog,bird,horse,snake,tiger wind style fog domination jutsu
the entire fighting area was surrounded by fog becaus of her jutsu.
Kakashi:Guys get out of this fog, he could be anywhere
Wara:Appearing out of no where. Too late
Kakashi:Turning around. What!!!
NARRATOR:When the fog cleared up they were gone. poor Sakura,shika...
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAIT!!!!!!!!!!
Shikamaru:Like I would be kidnapped. I moved before she got me. From what I could tell they went that way.
He pointed to the east.
Kakashi:Alright let's get going.
NARRATOR:With Kakashi and Shikamaru heading East and Yamato,Hinata and Naruto about to fight we will end it here. Sorry for ending it so short but I have to go, sooooooooooooo see you in the comments and the next one.






To Be Continued[\SIZE]


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Thnx for reading this one to. leave any problems in the comments.
Spoiler Alert
just like the last one, what should the next one be caled


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pretty good, and u already apologized for it being short, so... you should italicize actions, not just leave them like speaking parts. otherwise, it was pretty good. can't wait for you to continue. keep it up! :D
 
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