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(People from all over the hidden villages have gathered at the hidden mist village for the final chuunin exams. Many fighters mostly kids have fought with everything they got.but it is now up to uchiha sasuren and uzumaki jiraiyan who have made it to the finals. Sasuren defeated his twin sister saruna and later hatake kubo in order to reach the finals while jiraiyan has defeated kankuro's son munra and also kinbo from the hidden grass. Now people anxiously sit shouting the names of the two boys. at the arena Shikimaru comes out with the two boys just and as they were going, girls start to shout and cheer sasuren on.jirayian looks with envy and disgust while sasuren doesn't take notice of the girls nor of jirayian.Shikimaru smiles with silence muttering in his mind about sasuren saying "Like father like son". As they were going they meet sakura and saruna.Saruna looks sad because she wasn't able to fight strongly like her brother and she ended up losing to him)
Saruna:good luck elder brother
Sasuren:hmph i don't need luck.i will win without breaking a sweat.you on the other hand stay out of my way.it's your fault you lost.(Saruna becomes sad again and a tear drops from her eyes.Sakura sees this and frowns deeply at sasuren)
Sakura:hey sasuren be nice to your sister.what you did is rude
Uchiha itachi junior: hey brother.mum has a point. just because you trained yourself and have become strong doesn't mean you can treat our sis anyhow.(itachi jnr is now 5 yrs and the uchiha twins are now 8 years.)
Sasuren:hmph ok (and he leaves.sakura looks at the top where sasuke is sitted with naruto and the rest of the kages.he looks at her and shakes his head in disbelief that his son is refusing to let go of his pride and arrogance because sasuke made him train by himself.Jiraiyan sees this and goes to saruna)
Jirayain:saruna.don't worry i will get your brother back and stop him from being arrogant.(saruna looks at jiraiyan and smiles and says thank you.meanwhile sasuke is talking with naruto and the other kages.)
Sasuke:i have a bad feeling about this fight
Naruto;me too.i have tried to convince the other kages to change the fighters but they said that it will cause an unrest among the crowd.but this fight will be a realisation of something we couldn't do
Sasuke:yeah right, where the two of us were suppose to fight at the chuunin exams but that fight never came.well we can only hope that everything goes well.
Naruto;yeah
Chapter 2
(as sasuren and jirayian get to the battle ground.jiraiyan begins to talk to sasuren)
Jiraiyan:i'm gonna win this battle.i know i can do.
Sasuren:yeah right, dream on you loser. you just got lucky with the others but your luck ends here.
jirayian:i will win even if the odds are bad.i'm sure you are going to use your sharingan on me
Sasuren:you are not even worth the bother.i will defeat you without using it.
(When they get to the battle arena. shikimaru comes.to give the rules.people give cheers to sasuren and jiraiyan.they then take their places and get ready to fight)
Shikimaru
k i believe all of you have heard the rules.fight fairly and don't hold back.FIGHT.(he jumps away from the arena)
chapter 3
Jirayian;(quickly cross his two hands) Mass shadow clone technique(he gets six clones and they rush toward sasuren)
Sasuren:useless.(he starts to battle them and use some skillful taijutsu on them.as the clones disappear leaving smoke behind he notices that the real jiraiyan isn't there. He then hears a gentle fist sound behind him. he looks behind and finds jiraiyan in a gentle fist pose)
Jirayian;gentle fist eight trigrams 2 to 64 palms (he rushes forwards and hits sasuren.people watch with amazement as jirayian hits sasuren skillfully. he delievers the final blow and sasuren falls to the ground)
Suigetsu(hidden mist mizukage);is it over already?. wow. that kid is good.Naruto you must be proud to have a son who has won so quickly.
Naruto:i don't think he has won
Suigetsu :he has won already look
Sasuke;naruto is right.it is not over
(back at the field)
Jirayian:yes i have won.(he looks at sasuren lying there motionless).see i told you i will win.haha.(all of a sudden sasuren's body disappears in a puff of smoke and it is only a wood substitution that is on the floor.)
Jirayian;what?
Sasuren;hey loser(jirayian turns his back and sasuren punches him in the face which lands him on the ground)
Chapter4
(Jirayian gets up);how did you avoid my gentle fist. i could have sworn that i hit you before you could even weave a sign.
Sasuren:you simpleton. A ninja is suppose to do research on his enemy that he is going to attack before going to battle.i know that you are an uzumaki like your dad and a hyuuga like your mum hinata.the hyuuga are well known for their gentle fist which you learnt either from your mum or your uncle neji sensei.when i was battling your shadow clones i knew you will try to use the gentle fist on me so i created a clone of myself and hid somewhere near you.unfortunatley for you.you don't know how to use chakra control like your mum so you used an amount of chakra for your gentle fist.i on the other hand not much.it's over.
(he quickly weaves some signs and inhales an amount of air.) Firestyle: fireforest ring ninjutsu(he blows huges flames from his mouth that surrounds and traps jirayian.Sasuren starts to runs with ninja speed around the flames and throws shurinken at jirayian.he starts to weave signs again and blows fire at the shurinken (fire style burning shurinken)
Chapter 5
jirayian notices the burning shurinken coming at him with speed.he takes his kunai knife and tries to deflect them but some of them hit him.he jumps down in pain and removes those shurinken.
Jirayian:damn it, he has got me cornered.if i don't do something right now i will be toast.(i guess i have no choice.he crosses his two hands again).(Mass shadow clone technique)he produces two clones.one of them helps him to do a rasengan.later the two clones throw him into the air.Sasuren notices it with surprise)
Sasuren:what is that loser trying to do.the rasengan is an wind attribute and it can't stop my firestyle.he will get himself killed.what an idiot. But he later notices that jirayian was actually aiming for the ground.jirayian slams the rasengan on the ground creating an explosion throwing some rocks about.some of the rocks hit the flames creating a small path for jirayian to cross. he gets burnt a little on his hands but manages to escapes.he comes out and finds that some rocks have covered sasuren up.
jirayian:that was a crazy idea that i thought of.but i'm glad it paid of.(he sees that some of the rocks on sasuren are falling of.there is a beam of light which burst the rocks out.sasuren comes out of the rubble with the deactivated chidori on his hands.he looks enraged and looks at jirayian.he covers his eyes again and activates his sharingan.the crowd goes wild again
Sasuren:don't think even for a second that you have won!!!!.This battle is far from over.
Sasuke:get ready naruto.this can get very ugly
Chapter 6
Sasuren:you really have pissed me off jirayian.you think you are very clever and that you can win against me.you have never even beaten me in a written test or at ninja pratice.you always have lost to me and now you think you can we.let me ask you something jirayian.what's is your motivation to fight?. i fight to evolve and surpass my father. you see, he thinks that i have become so crazy for power that he even decided not to teach me his strongest technique but rather decided to teach saruna and itachi. i had to train myself and evolve and look i even defeated hatake kubo who is a skillfull guy like his father kakashi.i don't care if no one will help me. i rather evolve by my self.
Jirayian:is that all this is about.you wanting to be more powerful than your father.Your father cares a lot about you that he doesn't want you to be consume by the evil love for power.i fight because i want to protect those who can't protect themselves even if it is not my business.besides at the beast evironment yourself said that true power comes from working together.how can you yourself forget that?.i couldn't stand the way you treated saruna.she is your own twin sister.i even evny your power especially when the two of you fuse to become the ninja uchiha ryu.Have you forgotten the inicdent with the giant queen viper.Your father told us to stick together and work as a team because that is were true power comes from.
Sasuren:you really are annoying right now.
Jirayian;no.i know i am getting to you.listen.you are behaving like neji sensei when he was your age. i was told that his quest for revenge and hatred against my mum nearly consumed him even after he had defeated her.it took my father to knock some sense into him and see the importance of family. i know you are not a bad guy but you have resentment against your father and sister because they thought all you cared about was yourself. i know deep inside you are a good guy who needs to be taken away from that path of obessesion.and i will do that by defeating you.Sasuren.
Chapter 7
Sasuren looks at jirayian.not really amused with what he said even though he made his point.he smiles silently and opens his eyes with the sharingan still active.His sharingan evolves into the third and final stage.
Sasuren:very well you have said what you wanted to say.time to end this.come and get me if you think you can we.i'm done talking.
Jirayian:so am i.let's go
(they both rush to each other and start to fight in a fast taijutsu.the fight becomes very fierce with both of them taking considerable damage but it is jirayian who is taking most damage.they soon get to the peak of their strength.)
Sasuren:it's over.(he gives a loud roar like that in dragonball z.his chakra soon surges)
Jirayian;i guess this is the final attack.(he also does the same.he creates a clone who makes a rasengan with him.Sasuren also weaves some signs and squeezes his right hand very hard.he develops the chidori and it colour changes from blue to critical gray.Naruto notices)
Naruto:sasuke. is the chidori suppose to be blue or gray
Sasuke;if it is gray then this could be deadly for both the user and the one he is going to use it on.(naruto gets up quickly and shout to the kages.
Naruto:stop the fight this is about to end badly.
Gaara:we can't the battle field is surround with a forcefield which will only deactivate when the fight is over.)
Darui(hidden cloud raikage):besides we can't the public will go beserk if we stop the fight.we promised that we won't manipulate the fight.
Naruto:damn it.oh no it is too late.
(he shouts to Shikimaru to stop the fight.but it is too late the two start to rush toward each other.they collide their powers together and a huge explosion occurs creating a pit on the earth)
Chapter 8
Sasuren:damn i can't pull free.it is like my body is fusing with this guy
Jirayian:i can't get free also.i can't stop it.
(suddenly the rasengan and the chidori explode sending jirayian to the left and sasuren to the right.both of them are on the ground.people watch with shock.some are asking if they are dead.shikimaru and the medic team come to check on them.luckly the two are alive and breathing.they both wobbly get up.
Shikimaru:well takes goodness they are alive but who will be the winner? because both of them didn't win.( naruto, sasuke and the other kages discuss among themselves.they finally come to conclusion and send a messager to shikimaru.he listens and shouts to the crownd.)
Shikimaru;due to the fact that the two finalist didn't win the battle.therefore according the rules the winner will be given to the fighters who got the second runner up. And so the winners are Hyuuga renji (neji and tenten their son) and suruzi of the hidden earth village.(the people gives an applause to the decision taken and they given their loudest cheers to sasuren and jirayian for a wonderful battle fought)
Jirayian;damn it. i couldn't win at all.i thought i will win.
Sasuren;jiraiyan(he turns back and sees sasuren coming to him).Thanks for opening my eyes to some things i guess i was wrong. (he leaves and then sees saruna running towards him.she hugs sasuren.)
Saruna;i'm glad you are ok
Sasuren:saruna.i am really sorry for all that i called you.i was so caught up in my quest to be strong that i forgot about you. This time this won't happen again.(saruna smiles and is happy that she has gotten her brother back.Sasuke and the others see this and are please.sasuke comes towards his son)
Sasuke:now that you have learnt your valuable lesson even though you didn't win so as jiraiyan and you have settled your differences with your sister i believe now i can train you and pass down all my jutsu to you and your sister now.
Sasuren:thanks alot father.
Jiraiyan;hey sasuren.let's finish our fight another time
Sasuren:yeah i will be waiting to deal with you. you loser
Jiraiyan:i'm not a loser.( the chuunin exams comes to an end with everyone cheering for a successful chuunin exams and also for sasuren and jiraiyan
chapter 9
In the secret room of the battle arena a suspecious fellow comes and meet some guys at the end.
Kurezin;the analysis of those two kids is complete.those two plus the uchiha girl will be the perfect ones for our plan.
Leader;the day of awaking for a new power is at hand.Soon the five nations will bow before me and i will rule the world with the power of those three.he begins to laugh with evil.
THE END
Saruna:good luck elder brother
Sasuren:hmph i don't need luck.i will win without breaking a sweat.you on the other hand stay out of my way.it's your fault you lost.(Saruna becomes sad again and a tear drops from her eyes.Sakura sees this and frowns deeply at sasuren)
Sakura:hey sasuren be nice to your sister.what you did is rude
Uchiha itachi junior: hey brother.mum has a point. just because you trained yourself and have become strong doesn't mean you can treat our sis anyhow.(itachi jnr is now 5 yrs and the uchiha twins are now 8 years.)
Sasuren:hmph ok (and he leaves.sakura looks at the top where sasuke is sitted with naruto and the rest of the kages.he looks at her and shakes his head in disbelief that his son is refusing to let go of his pride and arrogance because sasuke made him train by himself.Jiraiyan sees this and goes to saruna)
Jirayain:saruna.don't worry i will get your brother back and stop him from being arrogant.(saruna looks at jiraiyan and smiles and says thank you.meanwhile sasuke is talking with naruto and the other kages.)
Sasuke:i have a bad feeling about this fight
Naruto;me too.i have tried to convince the other kages to change the fighters but they said that it will cause an unrest among the crowd.but this fight will be a realisation of something we couldn't do
Sasuke:yeah right, where the two of us were suppose to fight at the chuunin exams but that fight never came.well we can only hope that everything goes well.
Naruto;yeah
Chapter 2
(as sasuren and jirayian get to the battle ground.jiraiyan begins to talk to sasuren)
Jiraiyan:i'm gonna win this battle.i know i can do.
Sasuren:yeah right, dream on you loser. you just got lucky with the others but your luck ends here.
jirayian:i will win even if the odds are bad.i'm sure you are going to use your sharingan on me
Sasuren:you are not even worth the bother.i will defeat you without using it.
(When they get to the battle arena. shikimaru comes.to give the rules.people give cheers to sasuren and jiraiyan.they then take their places and get ready to fight)
Shikimaru
k i believe all of you have heard the rules.fight fairly and don't hold back.FIGHT.(he jumps away from the arena)chapter 3
Jirayian;(quickly cross his two hands) Mass shadow clone technique(he gets six clones and they rush toward sasuren)
Sasuren:useless.(he starts to battle them and use some skillful taijutsu on them.as the clones disappear leaving smoke behind he notices that the real jiraiyan isn't there. He then hears a gentle fist sound behind him. he looks behind and finds jiraiyan in a gentle fist pose)
Jirayian;gentle fist eight trigrams 2 to 64 palms (he rushes forwards and hits sasuren.people watch with amazement as jirayian hits sasuren skillfully. he delievers the final blow and sasuren falls to the ground)
Suigetsu(hidden mist mizukage);is it over already?. wow. that kid is good.Naruto you must be proud to have a son who has won so quickly.
Naruto:i don't think he has won
Suigetsu :he has won already look
Sasuke;naruto is right.it is not over
(back at the field)
Jirayian:yes i have won.(he looks at sasuren lying there motionless).see i told you i will win.haha.(all of a sudden sasuren's body disappears in a puff of smoke and it is only a wood substitution that is on the floor.)
Jirayian;what?
Sasuren;hey loser(jirayian turns his back and sasuren punches him in the face which lands him on the ground)
Chapter4
(Jirayian gets up);how did you avoid my gentle fist. i could have sworn that i hit you before you could even weave a sign.
Sasuren:you simpleton. A ninja is suppose to do research on his enemy that he is going to attack before going to battle.i know that you are an uzumaki like your dad and a hyuuga like your mum hinata.the hyuuga are well known for their gentle fist which you learnt either from your mum or your uncle neji sensei.when i was battling your shadow clones i knew you will try to use the gentle fist on me so i created a clone of myself and hid somewhere near you.unfortunatley for you.you don't know how to use chakra control like your mum so you used an amount of chakra for your gentle fist.i on the other hand not much.it's over.
(he quickly weaves some signs and inhales an amount of air.) Firestyle: fireforest ring ninjutsu(he blows huges flames from his mouth that surrounds and traps jirayian.Sasuren starts to runs with ninja speed around the flames and throws shurinken at jirayian.he starts to weave signs again and blows fire at the shurinken (fire style burning shurinken)
Chapter 5
jirayian notices the burning shurinken coming at him with speed.he takes his kunai knife and tries to deflect them but some of them hit him.he jumps down in pain and removes those shurinken.
Jirayian:damn it, he has got me cornered.if i don't do something right now i will be toast.(i guess i have no choice.he crosses his two hands again).(Mass shadow clone technique)he produces two clones.one of them helps him to do a rasengan.later the two clones throw him into the air.Sasuren notices it with surprise)
Sasuren:what is that loser trying to do.the rasengan is an wind attribute and it can't stop my firestyle.he will get himself killed.what an idiot. But he later notices that jirayian was actually aiming for the ground.jirayian slams the rasengan on the ground creating an explosion throwing some rocks about.some of the rocks hit the flames creating a small path for jirayian to cross. he gets burnt a little on his hands but manages to escapes.he comes out and finds that some rocks have covered sasuren up.
jirayian:that was a crazy idea that i thought of.but i'm glad it paid of.(he sees that some of the rocks on sasuren are falling of.there is a beam of light which burst the rocks out.sasuren comes out of the rubble with the deactivated chidori on his hands.he looks enraged and looks at jirayian.he covers his eyes again and activates his sharingan.the crowd goes wild again
Sasuren:don't think even for a second that you have won!!!!.This battle is far from over.
Sasuke:get ready naruto.this can get very ugly
Chapter 6
Sasuren:you really have pissed me off jirayian.you think you are very clever and that you can win against me.you have never even beaten me in a written test or at ninja pratice.you always have lost to me and now you think you can we.let me ask you something jirayian.what's is your motivation to fight?. i fight to evolve and surpass my father. you see, he thinks that i have become so crazy for power that he even decided not to teach me his strongest technique but rather decided to teach saruna and itachi. i had to train myself and evolve and look i even defeated hatake kubo who is a skillfull guy like his father kakashi.i don't care if no one will help me. i rather evolve by my self.
Jirayian:is that all this is about.you wanting to be more powerful than your father.Your father cares a lot about you that he doesn't want you to be consume by the evil love for power.i fight because i want to protect those who can't protect themselves even if it is not my business.besides at the beast evironment yourself said that true power comes from working together.how can you yourself forget that?.i couldn't stand the way you treated saruna.she is your own twin sister.i even evny your power especially when the two of you fuse to become the ninja uchiha ryu.Have you forgotten the inicdent with the giant queen viper.Your father told us to stick together and work as a team because that is were true power comes from.
Sasuren:you really are annoying right now.
Jirayian;no.i know i am getting to you.listen.you are behaving like neji sensei when he was your age. i was told that his quest for revenge and hatred against my mum nearly consumed him even after he had defeated her.it took my father to knock some sense into him and see the importance of family. i know you are not a bad guy but you have resentment against your father and sister because they thought all you cared about was yourself. i know deep inside you are a good guy who needs to be taken away from that path of obessesion.and i will do that by defeating you.Sasuren.
Chapter 7
Sasuren looks at jirayian.not really amused with what he said even though he made his point.he smiles silently and opens his eyes with the sharingan still active.His sharingan evolves into the third and final stage.
Sasuren:very well you have said what you wanted to say.time to end this.come and get me if you think you can we.i'm done talking.
Jirayian:so am i.let's go
(they both rush to each other and start to fight in a fast taijutsu.the fight becomes very fierce with both of them taking considerable damage but it is jirayian who is taking most damage.they soon get to the peak of their strength.)
Sasuren:it's over.(he gives a loud roar like that in dragonball z.his chakra soon surges)
Jirayian;i guess this is the final attack.(he also does the same.he creates a clone who makes a rasengan with him.Sasuren also weaves some signs and squeezes his right hand very hard.he develops the chidori and it colour changes from blue to critical gray.Naruto notices)
Naruto:sasuke. is the chidori suppose to be blue or gray
Sasuke;if it is gray then this could be deadly for both the user and the one he is going to use it on.(naruto gets up quickly and shout to the kages.
Naruto:stop the fight this is about to end badly.
Gaara:we can't the battle field is surround with a forcefield which will only deactivate when the fight is over.)
Darui(hidden cloud raikage):besides we can't the public will go beserk if we stop the fight.we promised that we won't manipulate the fight.
Naruto:damn it.oh no it is too late.
(he shouts to Shikimaru to stop the fight.but it is too late the two start to rush toward each other.they collide their powers together and a huge explosion occurs creating a pit on the earth)
Chapter 8
Sasuren:damn i can't pull free.it is like my body is fusing with this guy
Jirayian:i can't get free also.i can't stop it.
(suddenly the rasengan and the chidori explode sending jirayian to the left and sasuren to the right.both of them are on the ground.people watch with shock.some are asking if they are dead.shikimaru and the medic team come to check on them.luckly the two are alive and breathing.they both wobbly get up.
Shikimaru:well takes goodness they are alive but who will be the winner? because both of them didn't win.( naruto, sasuke and the other kages discuss among themselves.they finally come to conclusion and send a messager to shikimaru.he listens and shouts to the crownd.)
Shikimaru;due to the fact that the two finalist didn't win the battle.therefore according the rules the winner will be given to the fighters who got the second runner up. And so the winners are Hyuuga renji (neji and tenten their son) and suruzi of the hidden earth village.(the people gives an applause to the decision taken and they given their loudest cheers to sasuren and jirayian for a wonderful battle fought)
Jirayian;damn it. i couldn't win at all.i thought i will win.
Sasuren;jiraiyan(he turns back and sees sasuren coming to him).Thanks for opening my eyes to some things i guess i was wrong. (he leaves and then sees saruna running towards him.she hugs sasuren.)
Saruna;i'm glad you are ok
Sasuren:saruna.i am really sorry for all that i called you.i was so caught up in my quest to be strong that i forgot about you. This time this won't happen again.(saruna smiles and is happy that she has gotten her brother back.Sasuke and the others see this and are please.sasuke comes towards his son)
Sasuke:now that you have learnt your valuable lesson even though you didn't win so as jiraiyan and you have settled your differences with your sister i believe now i can train you and pass down all my jutsu to you and your sister now.
Sasuren:thanks alot father.
Jiraiyan;hey sasuren.let's finish our fight another time
Sasuren:yeah i will be waiting to deal with you. you loser
Jiraiyan:i'm not a loser.( the chuunin exams comes to an end with everyone cheering for a successful chuunin exams and also for sasuren and jiraiyan
chapter 9
In the secret room of the battle arena a suspecious fellow comes and meet some guys at the end.
Kurezin;the analysis of those two kids is complete.those two plus the uchiha girl will be the perfect ones for our plan.
Leader;the day of awaking for a new power is at hand.Soon the five nations will bow before me and i will rule the world with the power of those three.he begins to laugh with evil.
THE END
