you are so nice and polite.. Thanks ^_^Actually, I don't criticized the works of others even grammar or the likes since I also got troubles doing that xd
Its not the grammar that counts but the whole picture of the story. Someone told me that and it really makes sense
Well everything is fine. Its a good story tho. Keep it up ^^
The Fate - Chapter 1
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Reborn
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Superb my friend.
You're a very descriptive writter, first person is always a good perspective to use because you have more liberties with imagery. Regretfully, I'm in the middle of a few things so when I read this just now, I was going back and forth so I didn't retain much in my head about the actual story, however, I enjoyed you're set up, placing the dates and times like that, like a diary entry. It was unique and I hope to read to read more.
Link me your chapters via VM when they come out, my PM box needs to get cleaned out, I'm almost at my limitxd. Good work.
You're a very descriptive writter, first person is always a good perspective to use because you have more liberties with imagery. Regretfully, I'm in the middle of a few things so when I read this just now, I was going back and forth so I didn't retain much in my head about the actual story, however, I enjoyed you're set up, placing the dates and times like that, like a diary entry. It was unique and I hope to read to read more.
Link me your chapters via VM when they come out, my PM box needs to get cleaned out, I'm almost at my limitxd. Good work.
Maina Deah
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