Side note: This is my first FanFiction so don't judge it too much. I'm going to learn from my mistakes. Constructive criticism is accepted, but insulting, flamming, or anything of the kind is not. So I hope you enjoy. 
Introduction: As far back as the history of combat can be remembered, there have been eight people who keep peace on earth. But, if even one of these eight people die, and is not replaced soon, then all order will be lost. These eight people, are known as, "The Eight Fist Guardians". They live to protect the world we live in, and for that, we owe them everything. But, something is bound to go horribly wrong. When you are gifted with power, you cannot expect someone to take advantage of that for his own selfish reasons...
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*Sitting in the class room spacing off*
Xinroki: "I wonder when lunch is going to be here..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he looked out the window.*
Teacher: "Amazi! You will be staying after school for an extra hour to help clean up. Clear?!"
*Shouted the teacher as he smashed a book into Xinroki's desk*
Xinroki: "Thats nice..."
*Said Xinorki as he continued to space off looking out the window*
Teacher:
You little!-"
*The teacher looked up at the clock then back to look at Xinroki and hes already gone*
Teacher: "What the?! Amazi! Your stupid tricks won't save you all the time!"
*Shouted the teacher in rage*
*As the teacher shouted, Xinroki slipped out of the classroom with ease*
Xinroki: "-Sigh- What a pain in the ass..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he walked down the hallway to the lunch room*
~On the way down the stairway~
*Xinroki bumps into a pretty girl making her spill water all over him*
Xinroki: "Ah what the hell, watch where your going!"
*Said Xinroki as he looked at his wet clothes*
???: "Oh my gosh, i'm so sorry! Let me help you!"
*The girl starts to dry off his jacket with napkins*
Xinroki: "Hey wait... you must be the new girl from class B. What was her name... Gia? Mia? Hmm..."
*Said Xinroki as he began to think*
Lia: "Oh! Yeah! Sorry. My name is Lia from Class B. I just transfered. Nice to meet you! I mean! I'm really sorry about getting you all wet like this."
*Said Lia as she looked down and fround*
Xinroki: "Its fine. Don't stress it. I make it a rule of mine to not get angry at the new kid."
*Said Xinroki as he took his jacket off and threw it over his shoulder along with his bag*
Lia: "Oh! Thats really kind of you. But really, I'm reeeaaallly sorry."
*Said Lia as she bowed to Xinroki*
Xinroki: "-Sigh- Stop apologizing. Its annoying..."
*Said Xinroki as he turned his head to the side*
Lia: "Oh! I'm sorry. I mean! Uh. Ugh. I'm sorry...
*Said Lia as she looked down*
Xinroki: "You might want to break this habit of yours. People might start to think your weak and easy pray. Talk to you later kid."
*Said Xinroki as he patted Lia on the head and walked away*
Xinroki: "That girl was weird..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he walked along the street*
Tachi: "You must have met Lia."
*Tachi said as he sits on a bench reading a book*
Xinroki: "Tachi, what are you doing here?"
*Ask Xinroki as he looked at Tachi*
Tachi: "I should be asking you the same thing. Skipping out on class again?"
*Asked Tachi as he reads his book*
Xinroki: "Yeah, sorry. I don't like to sit around, do my homework, read books and listen like you do."
*Said Xinroki as he started to walk again*
Tachi: "Don't get mad at me. Its your choice."
*Said Tachi as he stood up from the bench and started walking next to Xinroki*
Xinroki: "So, what do you want?"
*asked Xinroki as he looked at Tachi*
Tachi: "I saw you talking to Lia. You looked like you found the girl of your dreams."
*Said Tachi*
Xinroki: "Right, you keep telling yourself that."
*Said Xinroki as he walked the rest of the way home with Tachi*
Maverick: "You have no business being here Athorias! You do not deserve the title of Head Guardian!"
*Shouted Maverick, one of the Eight Fist Guardians*
Athorias: "Well, sorry to say Maverick, but now that I am Head Guardian, you have no say. Guards! Take him away!"
*Said Athorias, one of the Eight Fist Guardians that has gone power mad*
Maverick: "I will find my way back Athorias! Count on it!"
*Said Maverick as Guards dragged him away slowly because Maverick was strugling*
Athorias: "I look forward to it Maverick. Until then. Tata!"
*Said Athorias in a taunting tone*
Maverick: "Let me go damnit! I am the Fourth Great Fist! You will remove your hands from me!"
*Shouted Maverick in rage*
Athorias: "You are no longer one of the Eight Fist Guardians. I here by strip you of your title. And cast you into the mortal realm to suffer."
*Said Athorias as he walked up to Maverick*
Maverick: "I will be back, don't you dare doubt it."
*Said Maverick as a hole opened up behind him*
Athorias: "Well I look forward to seeing you again. Heheheheh."
*Said Athorias as he kicked Maverick back and into the hole plunging him to earth*
Xinroki: "Finally home..."
*Said Xinroki as he took his stuff off and headed further inside*
*As Xinroki moved forward into his house, something comes crashing through his roof and onto his kitchen table*
Xinroki: "Holy shit!"
*Shouted Xinroki as he fell backwards*
*Xinroki then slowly stood up and walked over to the crater in his kitchen and sees a person in the crater*
Xinroki: "Is that... a person? This has got to be a bad dream..."
*Xinroki said in shock*
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The Eight Fists - Chapter 1. ~Bloody Monday~
Introduction: As far back as the history of combat can be remembered, there have been eight people who keep peace on earth. But, if even one of these eight people die, and is not replaced soon, then all order will be lost. These eight people, are known as, "The Eight Fist Guardians". They live to protect the world we live in, and for that, we owe them everything. But, something is bound to go horribly wrong. When you are gifted with power, you cannot expect someone to take advantage of that for his own selfish reasons...
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~In Tokyo, at a local high school~
*Sitting in the class room spacing off*
Xinroki: "I wonder when lunch is going to be here..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he looked out the window.*
Teacher: "Amazi! You will be staying after school for an extra hour to help clean up. Clear?!"
*Shouted the teacher as he smashed a book into Xinroki's desk*
Xinroki: "Thats nice..."
*Said Xinorki as he continued to space off looking out the window*
Teacher:
You little!-"
~Lunch Bell~
*The teacher looked up at the clock then back to look at Xinroki and hes already gone*
Teacher: "What the?! Amazi! Your stupid tricks won't save you all the time!"
*Shouted the teacher in rage*
*As the teacher shouted, Xinroki slipped out of the classroom with ease*
Xinroki: "-Sigh- What a pain in the ass..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he walked down the hallway to the lunch room*
~On the way down the stairway~
*Xinroki bumps into a pretty girl making her spill water all over him*
Xinroki: "Ah what the hell, watch where your going!"
*Said Xinroki as he looked at his wet clothes*
???: "Oh my gosh, i'm so sorry! Let me help you!"
*The girl starts to dry off his jacket with napkins*
Xinroki: "Hey wait... you must be the new girl from class B. What was her name... Gia? Mia? Hmm..."
*Said Xinroki as he began to think*
Lia: "Oh! Yeah! Sorry. My name is Lia from Class B. I just transfered. Nice to meet you! I mean! I'm really sorry about getting you all wet like this."
*Said Lia as she looked down and fround*
Xinroki: "Its fine. Don't stress it. I make it a rule of mine to not get angry at the new kid."
*Said Xinroki as he took his jacket off and threw it over his shoulder along with his bag*
Lia: "Oh! Thats really kind of you. But really, I'm reeeaaallly sorry."
*Said Lia as she bowed to Xinroki*
Xinroki: "-Sigh- Stop apologizing. Its annoying..."
*Said Xinroki as he turned his head to the side*
Lia: "Oh! I'm sorry. I mean! Uh. Ugh. I'm sorry...
*Said Lia as she looked down*
Xinroki: "You might want to break this habit of yours. People might start to think your weak and easy pray. Talk to you later kid."
*Said Xinroki as he patted Lia on the head and walked away*
~On the way home from school~
Xinroki: "That girl was weird..."
*Xinroki said to himself as he walked along the street*
Tachi: "You must have met Lia."
*Tachi said as he sits on a bench reading a book*
Xinroki: "Tachi, what are you doing here?"
*Ask Xinroki as he looked at Tachi*
Tachi: "I should be asking you the same thing. Skipping out on class again?"
*Asked Tachi as he reads his book*
Xinroki: "Yeah, sorry. I don't like to sit around, do my homework, read books and listen like you do."
*Said Xinroki as he started to walk again*
Tachi: "Don't get mad at me. Its your choice."
*Said Tachi as he stood up from the bench and started walking next to Xinroki*
Xinroki: "So, what do you want?"
*asked Xinroki as he looked at Tachi*
Tachi: "I saw you talking to Lia. You looked like you found the girl of your dreams."
*Said Tachi*
Xinroki: "Right, you keep telling yourself that."
*Said Xinroki as he walked the rest of the way home with Tachi*
~In the royal palace of the Peace Keepers~
Maverick: "You have no business being here Athorias! You do not deserve the title of Head Guardian!"
*Shouted Maverick, one of the Eight Fist Guardians*
Athorias: "Well, sorry to say Maverick, but now that I am Head Guardian, you have no say. Guards! Take him away!"
*Said Athorias, one of the Eight Fist Guardians that has gone power mad*
Maverick: "I will find my way back Athorias! Count on it!"
*Said Maverick as Guards dragged him away slowly because Maverick was strugling*
Athorias: "I look forward to it Maverick. Until then. Tata!"
*Said Athorias in a taunting tone*
~In the chamber of release~
Maverick: "Let me go damnit! I am the Fourth Great Fist! You will remove your hands from me!"
*Shouted Maverick in rage*
Athorias: "You are no longer one of the Eight Fist Guardians. I here by strip you of your title. And cast you into the mortal realm to suffer."
*Said Athorias as he walked up to Maverick*
Maverick: "I will be back, don't you dare doubt it."
*Said Maverick as a hole opened up behind him*
Athorias: "Well I look forward to seeing you again. Heheheheh."
*Said Athorias as he kicked Maverick back and into the hole plunging him to earth*
~At Xinroki's house~
Xinroki: "Finally home..."
*Said Xinroki as he took his stuff off and headed further inside*
*As Xinroki moved forward into his house, something comes crashing through his roof and onto his kitchen table*
Xinroki: "Holy shit!"
*Shouted Xinroki as he fell backwards*
*Xinroki then slowly stood up and walked over to the crater in his kitchen and sees a person in the crater*
Xinroki: "Is that... a person? This has got to be a bad dream..."
*Xinroki said in shock*
~End Of Chapter~
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