The earth trembles! Choza learns doton!

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Oh, I see.

*I concentrate as much doton chakra I can in my feet. After I'm sure it is enough, I release it onto the ground in a burst. The doton chakra quickly turns the earth 10 feet behind and in fornt of me into a river of raging, slipper mud river.*

better now?
*you get off balanced by the river and fall on it*
That's what you get when you make it behind and in front of you O.-

(Doton: Doryu Taiga) - Earth Style: Great Mud River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu can transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud to throw them off balance.

Ok, now, get out of there and do the river again. This time, after you make the river try to create a big dragon head made of the mud from the river, near you
 

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Ok sensei! *As the mud dries, I quickly get up and concentrate doton chakra in my feet again. I release in burst, to soften the earth in front of me and create another raging river of soft mud. Thsi time as it rages forward 10 feet, i concentrate doton chakra into it's source. As I make sure i got control of that part, I utilize shape manipulation to give it the shape of a lung dragon's head. With it's jaws wide open*

Dragon head done, what's next alu-sensei?
 

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Ok sensei! *As the mud dries, I quickly get up and concentrate doton chakra in my feet again. I release in burst, to soften the earth in front of me and create another raging river of soft mud. Thsi time as it rages forward 10 feet, i concentrate doton chakra into it's source. As I make sure i got control of that part, I utilize shape manipulation to give it the shape of a lung dragon's head. With it's jaws wide open*

Dragon head done, what's next alu-sensei?
Make sure your chakra is flowing on the dragon to keep it firm. Now, use your chakra on the dragon's mouth to compress some mud, them make it spit mud projectiles
 

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!!*As I notice the dragon's head deforming I keep my doton chakra steady on it and it quickly reagins its shape. I use another portion of my doton chakra in my dragon's muddy mouth to create multiple mud spheres. In a wave of my doton chakra, my dragon head begins to spit the compressed mud to a rock which crushes.*
 

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!!*As I notice the dragon's head deforming I keep my doton chakra steady on it and it quickly reagins its shape. I use another portion of my doton chakra in my dragon's muddy mouth to create multiple mud spheres. In a wave of my doton chakra, my dragon head begins to spit the compressed mud to a rock which crushes.*
*mud balls fall apart in mid air*
You need to use more chakra. Compress the mud. Make it more compact to make it stronger. Also dont loose focus on the dragon. You need to keep you chakra steady and over control
 

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right!*the dragon begins to fall apart and I quikcly reform it by applying a bit more of doton chakra. Now, I re-focus my chakra into my dragon's mouth. I begin to utilize shape manipulation to create compressed, compact mud ball inside the draogn's mouth. Once they are strong enough, I reinforce them with futher earth chakra, making them stronger. I keep focus on the lung's head to keep it in shape also. I quickly snap my fingers, and from the dragon's jaws my bullets get shot at an impressive speed. Before I can lose concentration on my dragon, I rapidly add further doton chakra into to to keep it in shape.*
 

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right!*the dragon begins to fall apart and I quikcly reform it by applying a bit more of doton chakra. Now, I re-focus my chakra into my dragon's mouth. I begin to utilize shape manipulation to create compressed, compact mud ball inside the draogn's mouth. Once they are strong enough, I reinforce them with futher earth chakra, making them stronger. I keep focus on the lung's head to keep it in shape also. I quickly snap my fingers, and from the dragon's jaws my bullets get shot at an impressive speed. Before I can lose concentration on my dragon, I rapidly add further doton chakra into to to keep it in shape.*
good^^
(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Style: Earth Dragon Bomb
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Style: Great Mud River, this jutsu can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.

we will continue tomorrow
 

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ok sensei!*I concentrate my doton chakra in big quantities and then I release it into the ground sourrounding you. Now, I simply make a wave of strong doton chakra,and release it in a sudden motion, making portions of the earth below you arise in hard, dense pillars, that manage to trap you.*
 

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ok sensei!*I concentrate my doton chakra in big quantities and then I release it into the ground sourrounding you. Now, I simply make a wave of strong doton chakra,and release it in a sudden motion, making portions of the earth below you arise in hard, dense pillars, that manage to trap you.*
*jumps and gets out of the prison.*
lol, make them higher and also make some on the top too so even if someone jumps high enough, it wont be able to get out
 

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ok!* As you are about to touch the ground, I quickly release my doton chakra into the that portion of earth. when you have your feet on earth, I recrete the same effect I did before. I release a stronger wave of doton chakra that rises sections of the earth around you into a large quanitity of high, dense and strong rock pillars that sourround you. as the finish forming, I utilize shape manipulation to create another stream of doton chakra to creat pillars on the top of the others, so that you can't get out of it by jumping.*

how was it sensei?
 

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ok!* As you are about to touch the ground, I quickly release my doton chakra into the that portion of earth. when you have your feet on earth, I recrete the same effect I did before. I release a stronger wave of doton chakra that rises sections of the earth around you into a large quanitity of high, dense and strong rock pillars that sourround you. as the finish forming, I utilize shape manipulation to create another stream of doton chakra to creat pillars on the top of the others, so that you can't get out of it by jumping.*

how was it sensei?
much better ;)
(Doton: Ganchuro no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Earth Pillar Prison
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu creates a large amount of rock pillars from underground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a prison of earth.

Rest a bit, you must be tired xD.
When you're ready, slam your hands on the ground and release a chakra wave to make a wall rise in front of you. Must be easy lol
 

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*grabs from his pocket a small chocolate bar*

You know, akamichi clan is reknowed for it's homade chocolates. People say it's one of the best and that a single bite renew spent energy, since the chocolate is very concentrated.

*munches one square. the seocnd it touches my mouth, I feel a pulse of energy go through me.*

Ok, just like new!

*I concentarte doton chakra onto my palms, and slam them on the ground. Then, I release it in the earth in front of me. By utlizing shape manipulation, I manage to channel the chakra in a rectangle shape on the ground. As I release further doton chakra into it, it rises in a tall, strong and dense wall of earth in front of me.*

how was it sensei? By the way, want some chocolate?
 

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*grabs from his pocket a small chocolate bar*

You know, akamichi clan is reknowed for it's homade chocolates. People say it's one of the best and that a single bite renew spent energy, since the chocolate is very concentrated.

*munches one square. the seocnd it touches my mouth, I feel a pulse of energy go through me.*

Ok, just like new!

*I concentarte doton chakra onto my palms, and slam them on the ground. Then, I release it in the earth in front of me. By utlizing shape manipulation, I manage to channel the chakra in a rectangle shape on the ground. As I release further doton chakra into it, it rises in a tall, strong and dense wall of earth in front of me.*

how was it sensei? By the way, want some chocolate?
*eats chocolate*
It's good
*punches the wall*
*it breaks and falls on the ground*
Guess your chocolate made me stronger :rolleyes:
try again, more chakra. Make it denser, this isnt enough
 

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This is what I get for being a good guy T_T

*I Concentrate a lot more doton chakra into my palms. Now I thrust my palms into the ground, and make the doton chakra cover a big, rectangular-shape area. Then, As I raise my hands the portion of earth follows them raising a bigger, denser and stronger earth wall in fornt of me. As a safeguard, before completly removing my hands from the ground, I infuse further doton chakra into my wall.*

No choco for you =p!
 

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This is what I get for being a good guy T_T

*I Concentrate a lot more doton chakra into my palms. Now I thrust my palms into the ground, and make the doton chakra cover a big, rectangular-shape area. Then, As I raise my hands the portion of earth follows them raising a bigger, denser and stronger earth wall in fornt of me. As a safeguard, before completly removing my hands from the ground, I infuse further doton chakra into my wall.*

No choco for you =p!
good, however this jutsu fails because it can only defend from frontal attacks. if your opponent attacks from above or from the sides you can't do anything so better count with that already when you use this jutsu
(Doton: Doroku Gaeshi) - Earth Style: Terra Shield
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user creates a large wall of earth in front of him/her. The defence is not perfect though, since a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Also, since this technique only guards frontal attacks, the enemy can easily attack from the side or even from above.

Now do you remember how you did that mud jutsu that forced teh opponent to move? Do the samething but instead, make a bigger source of mud (make river) and forget about the mud making the opponent to loose balance. Just focus on quantity. Soften the biggest quantity of earth as you can
 

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yes alu-sensei!*I concentrate as much doton chakra as I can, and then release it into the ground in front of me. I keep on releasing an enormous amount of chakra into it, until I manage to soften a long stretch of ground turn into a flowing river of mud.*
 

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yes alu-sensei!*I concentrate as much doton chakra as I can, and then release it into the ground in front of me. I keep on releasing an enormous amount of chakra into it, until I manage to soften a long stretch of ground turn into a flowing river of mud.*
*you create a small lake of mud*

Awesomeness =O
-.-

Spread more your chakra. Soften a bigger area of the ground. Make it wide and long
 

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ok I'll make it long and wide(xD, it sounds funny)

*I concentrate my doton chakra again. This time I release in a bigger chunk of ground in front of me. As it covered the whole are, I focus my doton chakra to make the ground soften further and further. In mere seconds, a wide area in front of me is softened into mud. Then, in a wave of doton chakra, I lengthen that wide area, further and further. Creating a big, wide, brown, flowing river of mud.

we're about to reach 100 posts in this thread O=!! yay :D!
 
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