The earth trembles! Choza learns doton!

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yes, sensei! *he yet again concentrates his doton chakra and releases it again onto the ground. Slowy and patiently, he forms one earth wall. Then, he manipulates another chunk of earth and slowly shapes it into the second wall. Then after he checks they are solid enough, he throws them onto a tree, crushing them*

how was it?
 

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yes, sensei! *he yet again concentrates his doton chakra and releases it again onto the ground. Slowy and patiently, he forms one earth wall. Then, he manipulates another chunk of earth and slowly shapes it into the second wall. Then after he checks they are solid enough, he throws them onto a tree, crushing them*

how was it?
*as the walls touch the tree they fall on the ground*
Hmm, use more chakra, you need to make them dense and strong enough.
 

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yes sensei! *concentrates his doton chakra again, and releases it onto the ground. Patiently, he control his doton chakra in the earth to create a first wall of earth. He then concentrates further earth chakra into it to solidify it and make sure it's hard and dense enough. He then, while keeping the other wall erected, controls the ground yet again and creates a second wall of earth. Then he makes sure the second wall is solide enough by infusing it with futher doton chakra. Then he sends both walls towards a tree which they crash*

how was it?
 

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yes sensei! *concentrates his doton chakra again, and releases it onto the ground. Patiently, he control his doton chakra in the earth to create a first wall of earth. He then concentrates further earth chakra into it to solidify it and make sure it's hard and dense enough. He then, while keeping the other wall erected, controls the ground yet again and creates a second wall of earth. Then he makes sure the second wall is solide enough by infusing it with futher doton chakra. Then he sends both walls towards a tree which they crash*

how was it?
*one wall falls but the other stands*
Good, just get the hang on the other one and it should be fine^^
 

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sigh...this is harsh! *concentrates doton chakra yet again, and releases it into the earth. He creates a dense, hard earth wall. Then he concentrates as much chakra as he can into create another earth wall as hard as the other one. Then he sends this two dense, hard, earth wall onto a tree which they crush*
 

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sigh...this is harsh! *concentrates doton chakra yet again, and releases it into the earth. He creates a dense, hard earth wall. Then he concentrates as much chakra as he can into create another earth wall as hard as the other one. Then he sends this two dense, hard, earth wall onto a tree which they crush*
Good, you mastered the technique. That's enough for today. We'll continue tomorrow^^

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Style: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.
 

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*while keeping the stream of chakra to the earth below the tree* yes sir!*he sends further chakra into the earth and begins to harden it further. by sending one last, sudden wave of doton chakra into the hardened earth below the tree, the earth comes up in sharp spikes in random order*

How was it?
 

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*while keeping the stream of chakra to the earth below the tree* yes sir!*he sends further chakra into the earth and begins to harden it further. by sending one last, sudden wave of doton chakra into the hardened earth below the tree, the earth comes up in sharp spikes in random order*

How was it?
You need to make them even more sharp and harder
 

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ok*focuses doton chakra then he releases it to harden the earth below the tree. When it's hard enough, he then again releases, in a sudden motion, a greater amount of doton chakra that lifts the earth irregulary in various sharp, spikes. As they are emerging, he manipulates them with shape manipulation to make them much sharper than his last itent.*
 

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ok*focuses doton chakra then he releases it to harden the earth below the tree. When it's hard enough, he then again releases, in a sudden motion, a greater amount of doton chakra that lifts the earth irregulary in various sharp, spikes. As they are emerging, he manipulates them with shape manipulation to make them much sharper than his last itent.*
Good^^

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

Sorry but we will have to continue tomorrow =/
 
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