The Demon and the soul ~Chapter 1~

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✿ The Đemon and the Śoul ✿
~Chapter 1~




The Scene
Location:Meteora Outskirt
Time: 9am
Unusual things: The sky is red

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Narrator:There are two young men walking on the polluted street.

???: Tsk! What a persistent, littering around the street with all this boring leaflets! They doesnt bring any good for the country but making the city in a mess! Idiots!
???: My my, They are persistent...and it is a fact! So pls stop repeating it...you had been saying that from just now, Arson!
Arson: Okay, chill! Sorry...I just find that they are too much! Dont you think that so, Pyro?
Pyro: *He Ignored him and pick up one of the leaflets that are lying on the street* (He read it) Dear People, Be prepared to Defense yourself from the Enemy propaganda! Be corporate with us, in order for us to win this war!
Arson: Tsk! War? Win this war? Dont make me laugh, the government had already lost almost million of soldier! Now they want to lost another million? Pathetic *sigh*
Pyro: Arson! You better watch your mouth...both us can get killed if we are caught! Especially, when they found out that we are the member of Resistance! *sigh* We all know this, the government had not been enough of war...we all feel the same thing..so pls just keep this to yourself.
Arson: Yeah you right, we can get a death penalty if we are caught. But anyway, this is quite unusual isnt?...the government rarely do this..littering around the city with leaflets and bring news like this, they should be now concentrating for the war and the upcoming battle but not doing this, troubling around the road... This tell me that, there are serious crisis over this country!
Pyro: Sharp one! I never think about that..you right! It is out of sudden, maybe they had already found out about our secret activity! And right now they are taking action! I tell you what, we better hurry to the "CrossYard"!
Arson: Yes ofcuz!


Narrator: Both of them quickly urged to the "CrossYard". When they arrived over there, before they come in the small old house they look out if there anyone that are actually watching. When its clear, they immediately come in.





The Scene
Location:The "CrossYard"
Time: 10.30am
Unusual things: The place is silent and it seems
to be a very old place.
Description: The crossyard is actuall a "cover-up"
name for the Resistance Secret Headquarters.

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Narrator: When both of them came in, they were allured by a person that we assume to be their close friend.

???: Welcome back! Airfaire Arson and Airfaire Pyromania...how you guys doing!
Arson: What the hell, the last time we met was yesterday night...and now you are asking whether we are fine or not*sigh* Anyway, we are now in very deep serious situation!
Pyro: Ahh yes, its so weird...your face doesnt seem to be very worried! Dont you know what had just happened this morning, Rex?
Rex: Ohh about that, I doesnt know about it..what had just happened?
Pyro: What!? You guys still doesnt know about it!? We will talk about this later, we need to report to the chief right now. Is he in right now?
Rex: Yes, he is in the Meeting Room...but wa..! *sigh* nvm..

Narrator: Both of them rushed into the meeting room without even knocking the door. The meeting room is filled with many soldier and people. And they seem to be holding a meeting.

Pyro: Sorry for the interruption sir! We had an important things to talk!
Chief: Boys! How rude, cant you see we are having meeting over here...and also next time please knock the door before entering! And I hope you guys have good excuses that why you guys are late today!
Arson: Forget about that sir!! But we need to talk about... (Interrupted)
Chief: About the government? Well wee actually know about that, the government actually take action on the enemy propaganda! And thats why today we assembled over here to discuss about this....boys please take your seat *sigh* ...
Arson: (In thought) What the hell! So embarrassing, we actually thought that they doesnt know abt this bad news...grrrrr you are dead, Rex!
Pyro: Ohhh! Ee are totally sorry abt that sir!
Chief: ...Its okay...Back to the topic, as I continued...The government actually had already found about us doing this secret activity! Thinking by fact, they havent found out about our location yet and also about our full information! But still, we cant say that we are on the safe side...I doubt that there are secret agent loitering around the city finding for clue. *sigh* So in order, to prevent getting caught! We need to divide ourselves to groups and team! With lesser number, the chances of getting caught is slim! And That is why we assembled here today to talk about this!
Pyro: Sir! Sorry to interrupt! But this had been keeping me all the time...Why in the first place that they found out about this!? So I assume that there are something behind this!
Arson: Yes sir! His got the point! Dont you think that too sir? It is impossible for them to found out about this if we never do anything that attract their attention! What I think, there must be a traitor over here!!

Narrator: The surrounding getting chaotic and noisy. Where some soldier shout for disagree and some for agree. And also some soldier started to giving their opinions and comments. And end up, a chaotic scene

Chief: Silent!!! (The scene immediately came into silent)Alright guys, there's no need to argue over here...but Pyromania has a point! And his right...this is what we had been talking all this time...But Arson, please dont say about traitor...theres no one over here will sell a comrade!
???: His right! Theres no traitor over here...Hahaha..But nvm let me introduce me...(Interrupted)
Arson: Who the hell are ya! I nvr seen your face before...!!
Chief: Yes, who are you!?
???: *sigh* I was about to introduce myself...*Take a deep breath* okay Im Gray Solarstrike! You may not know me b'cuz Im not a Resistance like you guys...but Im from the Crate Anti-Government Party...Hopefully, you got heard about this name before..and also I truly hope we can make alliance with each other since both of us share the same dream! Well I will just get to the point, my intention for coming here was to distribute this important news to you guys!
Chief: Crate Anti? Oh yes I heard it before, but I wonder how you manage to came and sneak over here, we all doesnt even noticed it!
Gray: Hahaha good question! I had been here since you guys argued and fight and I take that opportunity to get here! *He smirked* Well, here are the news...I cant call if it is a good one or the bad one..but it doesnt matter! If you guys wanted to know what happened to the government lately....! The reason this all happened, the reason that they found out everything...is because yesterday night....we tried to assassinate the....General!

Narrator: Everyone was stunned upon hearing that...It is impossible to assassinate the Great General! Does this mean that the Government are actually lacking in their defenses? It is totally a terrible news to shock everyone!

Gray: (Continued) I know this shocked you guys, but serious we are telling the truth! We managed to get inside the "Noble Hall" and we even managed to stab the General!
Pyro: What!! If you guys manage to stab them...then the general should be...how the general! How is his condition !? Did he survived or...??
Gray: Calm down brother! ...As I said from just now, we manage to stab him however it is unbelievable that he manage to survive...in fact, theres no even a drop of blood or something! And we truly believed that we actually heat his vital spot...theres no mistake!
Arson: What!? Is that even possible? Did he wear a protective suit or something!?
Gray: Theres no mistake...We stabbed him easily...how can a protective gear can be so fragile! As I continue...after we stabbed him...we actually found out that it doesnt work...and what we do was...we shoot him! We take the risk, without even thinking that it actually attracted the guard outside! However, it still doesnt work either! He still standing..he did not even making any movement to show that he is in pain!
Chief: Wth!? Are you sure you guys really hit the right place, it is totally absurd! Then...what happened?
Gray: *sigh* You know what happened next...You can see, Im the only one survived yesterday mission..I actually managed to escape from the "Noble Hall" and thats why Im here today...
Arson: What! How many of your men died yesterday!?
Gray: Five of them..
Rex: So which mean...Six of you are the one that are on this assassinating mission?
Gray: Yeah...So due to this incident, the government are taking action seriously! Both of our party are in danger right now! They can come here any moment!
Chief:But this bad news are not distributed to the public! The government not even told about this to the people..! Are you saying that they tried to hide it from the people..!?
Arson: Yeah, They probably doesnt want their people to get influenced with the enemy propaganda! Or maybe losing faith on the Government ... ?
Gray: But guys this is not the time to think about that. Our safety came first! But theres also I want to tell you guys! There is no mistake! The general is truly immortal !?

To be continued, Well this is my first fanfic..and hopefully you guys like it. Pls comment :)


 
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I actually find it interesting :) But still I didnt find what this story was totally about...
Ohh thank you! As I said this is my first fan fic and Im not really good at it. But nvm, I understand that you actually dont get the story was about...maybe if you try reading my upcoming chapter 2 and you will understand xd
 

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I like the way you write considering this is your first FF, but perhaps you should use more paragraphs? Like having an open space between each characters` line? It would make it a little less... hmm.. merged togetter if you get what I`m saying?;)
 

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I like the way you write considering this is your first FF, but perhaps you should use more paragraphs? Like having an open space between each characters` line? It would make it a little less... hmm.. merged togetter if you get what I`m saying?;)
Thanks, I get it now...maybe some other times I will do it again much more better :cool:
 
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