Hello this is my sequel of my fan fic "Juubi's conterattack"
For those who hadn't read it, here is the link:
On the battlefield.
Obito laughs satanically as he slowly stops to talk: Way to go Naruto. I couldn't have done it better.
Naruto still in shock can't believe what he did.
Obito uses kamui and appears in front of naruto kicking him in his abdomen.
Naruto tries to block him but his reflexion is slow and is sent rolling back.
Hashirama depressed: Poor boy...
Madara: Well what would you expect from a mere child. Only those with blessed eyes can use a power as such.
Naruto tries to get up but Obito appears behind him again grabbing him from his neck.
Obito with disgust on his his face: You really are...pathetic.
Naruto stares in Obito's eyes angrily.
Obito with a sinister smile: I know this expression all too well. (He throws him again in front of him) It's the expression I first had when I realised what a hell, world really is.
Obito: You know Naruto (He starts walking towards him). You and I are no different. We're both trash. We both had made promises that we couldn't keep. (He prepares a rod from his hand). The difference is that I accepted my fate while you still are trying to change it. And just because you're insisting, so many of your close people died.
Obito:That hyuga brat, his stupid sensei (we see some flashbacks)
But that's not all. Even your best friend died protecting you and I killed your sensei with my own hands.
But most importantly ( he turns to mangekyo) you killed you own father, Minato, tsk what an idiot.
Naruto turns his head from the ground to look at Obito at the sound of his father's name.
Obito's voice now become louder and more agressive: This world taught me only one thing. Power is the key to the surival. Unless you have it, you're bound to die. DIE Naruto! (With his rod he goes straight for Naruto's head!)
Naruto:AAAH!!!!! (A purple eye starts shinning in his subconscious) AAAAH! (Black chakra comes from his body protecting him from Obito's attack. Don't you ever dare to speak ill of my father!
Obito with a smirk: It seems that you still have some fighting spirit left.
Naruto: AAA! ( He jumps towards Obito at an increadible speed but Obito manages to teleport just in time many metres away).
Obito laughs: Even with Juubi's power you're still trash.
Naruto: Don't you ever call me like that! (He prepares 2 rasenshuriken on his respecive hands by using the air as a substitute for the lack of clones). Take this! (He throws both of them).
Obito as his smirk becomes broader: Still pathetic. (he teleports somewhere else and avoids the attacks)
Naruto: Bansho tennin! ( He aims at his rasenshurikens which now change direction and follow Obito)
Obito: Not bad! Wood style wall protection! (Huge walls of wood are coming out of the ground and are used as shield for Obito)
Madara with a peculiar expression: (What does he plan?)
Obito looks for a moment towards Madara and teleports.
Madara with an angry face: (don't tell me!)
Obito reappears in front of Kakashi's corpse: Hello old friend. (He grabs him and prepares to teleport once again)
Naruto running towards him with an angry voice: Put him down.
As his eye starts to swirl: Naruto I had fun with you but I have some unfinished business with him. (He looks now towards madara) Madara take care of him.
Madara: (Bastard...)
Naruto looks at Madara and at a blink of an eye appears next to him, punching him in the face sending him flying away.
Hashirama: Naruto it's too dangerous! Heh?(He looks at Naruto's angered face while he's not responsing)(This is not good he starts loosing control over his body again, I have to stop him) Wood style Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique — Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands! (Branches comes out of his hand and goes straight for naruto)
Juubi: GROOW! (Juubi with its tails breaks the branches)
Hashirama: Juubi...
Naruto having seen the whole thing, turns again his head to his new enemy.
Madara starts to rejuvenate: Boy, you have some excellent speed. If it wasn't for my edo body, I would have been dead.
Madara activates his susanoo: But I don't plan to leave any time soon! Scatter! (The blade goes again straigh for naruto)
Naruto: Preta path! (naruto prepares to absorb susanoo's blade)
Madara: Do you think I would fall for this twice?! Wood style struggling roots! (roots arise from the ground squeezing Naruto's legs).
Naruto screams in pain as dust arises from the ground.
Madara: This is the en- Eh?!
As the scene starts to become clearer Naruto is seen having wood style around his legs.
Madara: I see, that juubi's part inside of you protected you. It clearly doesn't plan to leave your body any time soon. I really underestimated you Uzumaki Naruto (He makes handseals while he's in susanoo) but this is the end! Heaven concealed! (5 meterorites are starting falling aiming for the battlefield).
Naruto smirks now: Indeed it is (He puts his hands one next to other).
Madara: Those handseals!
Hashirama having realised what Naruto is up to: Naruto don't do it! It's a huge gamble! You will be severely weakened!
Naruto while keeps smiling: In life you have to take risks, only mortals can die. RINNEI TENSEI!!!! (A green aura comes from his body and goes to Madara reviving him).
Madara still in shock: Kid you'll regret it
Naruto while breaths heavily: We'll see. Now unless you stop your meteorites, we'll both going to die. What will you do?
Madara: Hm, you really like playing with fire, don't you? So be it! SHINRA TENSEI!!! (His attack manages to send the meteorites back but his nose starts bleeding). (Damn it, wasting so much chakra like that, I have to be more careful).
Naruto while still breaths havily: Heh it seems that as a mortal you're not so strong after all. Now (his rinnegan disappears) What?!
Madara: Using the rinnei tensei must have really taken a toll on you. (Naruto struggles to stay upright) You really took a big gamble there. You should have thought it better. Don't worry though, to return your favour I'll crash you after I become the jinchuuri. (He flies straight for Juubi's head).
Madara: Hashirama, naruto this is the end (Starts making handseals)
Hashirama: Damn it! While fighting with Juubi's clones' army. (I won't make it on!)
Naruto tries to crawl to stand up: (Damn it not now!) ( I have to move, MOVE!)
Madara: This is-
Obito with his pair of mangekyo sharingan appears behind him with 2 huge shurikens : the end!
Blood falls on the ground.
Hope you liked it=D
Read the sequel here:
For those who hadn't read it, here is the link:
You must be registered for see links
On the battlefield.
Obito laughs satanically as he slowly stops to talk: Way to go Naruto. I couldn't have done it better.
Naruto still in shock can't believe what he did.
Obito uses kamui and appears in front of naruto kicking him in his abdomen.
Naruto tries to block him but his reflexion is slow and is sent rolling back.
Hashirama depressed: Poor boy...
Madara: Well what would you expect from a mere child. Only those with blessed eyes can use a power as such.
Naruto tries to get up but Obito appears behind him again grabbing him from his neck.
Obito with disgust on his his face: You really are...pathetic.
Naruto stares in Obito's eyes angrily.
Obito with a sinister smile: I know this expression all too well. (He throws him again in front of him) It's the expression I first had when I realised what a hell, world really is.
Obito: You know Naruto (He starts walking towards him). You and I are no different. We're both trash. We both had made promises that we couldn't keep. (He prepares a rod from his hand). The difference is that I accepted my fate while you still are trying to change it. And just because you're insisting, so many of your close people died.
Obito:That hyuga brat, his stupid sensei (we see some flashbacks)
But that's not all. Even your best friend died protecting you and I killed your sensei with my own hands.
But most importantly ( he turns to mangekyo) you killed you own father, Minato, tsk what an idiot.
Naruto turns his head from the ground to look at Obito at the sound of his father's name.
Obito's voice now become louder and more agressive: This world taught me only one thing. Power is the key to the surival. Unless you have it, you're bound to die. DIE Naruto! (With his rod he goes straight for Naruto's head!)
Naruto:AAAH!!!!! (A purple eye starts shinning in his subconscious) AAAAH! (Black chakra comes from his body protecting him from Obito's attack. Don't you ever dare to speak ill of my father!
Obito with a smirk: It seems that you still have some fighting spirit left.
Naruto: AAA! ( He jumps towards Obito at an increadible speed but Obito manages to teleport just in time many metres away).
Obito laughs: Even with Juubi's power you're still trash.
Naruto: Don't you ever call me like that! (He prepares 2 rasenshuriken on his respecive hands by using the air as a substitute for the lack of clones). Take this! (He throws both of them).
Obito as his smirk becomes broader: Still pathetic. (he teleports somewhere else and avoids the attacks)
Naruto: Bansho tennin! ( He aims at his rasenshurikens which now change direction and follow Obito)
Obito: Not bad! Wood style wall protection! (Huge walls of wood are coming out of the ground and are used as shield for Obito)
Madara with a peculiar expression: (What does he plan?)
Obito looks for a moment towards Madara and teleports.
Madara with an angry face: (don't tell me!)
Obito reappears in front of Kakashi's corpse: Hello old friend. (He grabs him and prepares to teleport once again)
Naruto running towards him with an angry voice: Put him down.
As his eye starts to swirl: Naruto I had fun with you but I have some unfinished business with him. (He looks now towards madara) Madara take care of him.
Madara: (Bastard...)
Naruto looks at Madara and at a blink of an eye appears next to him, punching him in the face sending him flying away.
Hashirama: Naruto it's too dangerous! Heh?(He looks at Naruto's angered face while he's not responsing)(This is not good he starts loosing control over his body again, I have to stop him) Wood style Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique — Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands! (Branches comes out of his hand and goes straight for naruto)
Juubi: GROOW! (Juubi with its tails breaks the branches)
Hashirama: Juubi...
Naruto having seen the whole thing, turns again his head to his new enemy.
Madara starts to rejuvenate: Boy, you have some excellent speed. If it wasn't for my edo body, I would have been dead.
Madara activates his susanoo: But I don't plan to leave any time soon! Scatter! (The blade goes again straigh for naruto)
Naruto: Preta path! (naruto prepares to absorb susanoo's blade)
Madara: Do you think I would fall for this twice?! Wood style struggling roots! (roots arise from the ground squeezing Naruto's legs).
Naruto screams in pain as dust arises from the ground.
Madara: This is the en- Eh?!
As the scene starts to become clearer Naruto is seen having wood style around his legs.
Madara: I see, that juubi's part inside of you protected you. It clearly doesn't plan to leave your body any time soon. I really underestimated you Uzumaki Naruto (He makes handseals while he's in susanoo) but this is the end! Heaven concealed! (5 meterorites are starting falling aiming for the battlefield).
Naruto smirks now: Indeed it is (He puts his hands one next to other).
Madara: Those handseals!
Hashirama having realised what Naruto is up to: Naruto don't do it! It's a huge gamble! You will be severely weakened!
Naruto while keeps smiling: In life you have to take risks, only mortals can die. RINNEI TENSEI!!!! (A green aura comes from his body and goes to Madara reviving him).
Madara still in shock: Kid you'll regret it
Naruto while breaths heavily: We'll see. Now unless you stop your meteorites, we'll both going to die. What will you do?
Madara: Hm, you really like playing with fire, don't you? So be it! SHINRA TENSEI!!! (His attack manages to send the meteorites back but his nose starts bleeding). (Damn it, wasting so much chakra like that, I have to be more careful).
Naruto while still breaths havily: Heh it seems that as a mortal you're not so strong after all. Now (his rinnegan disappears) What?!
Madara: Using the rinnei tensei must have really taken a toll on you. (Naruto struggles to stay upright) You really took a big gamble there. You should have thought it better. Don't worry though, to return your favour I'll crash you after I become the jinchuuri. (He flies straight for Juubi's head).
Madara: Hashirama, naruto this is the end (Starts making handseals)
Hashirama: Damn it! While fighting with Juubi's clones' army. (I won't make it on!)
Naruto tries to crawl to stand up: (Damn it not now!) ( I have to move, MOVE!)
Madara: This is-
Obito with his pair of mangekyo sharingan appears behind him with 2 huge shurikens : the end!
Blood falls on the ground.
Madara...dies?!
Hope you liked it=D
Read the sequel here:
You must be registered for see links
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