The chronicles of Minato, Konoha's Yellow Flash

[Rxyninja]

nice

pretty good

Nice...I never really imagined Minato to be a troublesome (not really trouble) type of kid. But he's kinda cute with that. Keep going, Wesobi.

Impressive... Impressive indeed my friend You have already mastered the technique of dialoguesxd

Anyways, for your first FF and first chapter, it's pretty good.
Of course it will most likely become better over time as a pilot is just to set the standar on what's coming next.
I really like the plot, as not much is known or said about this timeline, so you have a lot of potential in this storyline and can make a lot out of it, if you do your best
Looking forward to see what you'll make out of this FF as the first chapter got the basics of how a good FF should start

One question though; What type of animal was his pet? Dog, Cat, or maybe something else?

A nice one

a very good chronicles... just like how "the legendary sage of konoha" is intersting................ thanks man

You know of my FF?

So anyways, when do you plan for chapter 2?

Hi. I'm kinda new here and your storyline sounds interesting. I look forward to your next chapter.

nice one,but can't beat michaels one ,sorry,but it's nice considering it's your first FF

like JR4040, what they said.xd

 

[Wesobi]

kudos!

 

[Michael92]

Thanks for the comments everyone .
I wouldn't dare say it's as good as LSOK or WD, Michael and Nikkou are epicness and i'm just a silly starter.

Anyways, my PC crashed and the repair is going to take around 5 weeks, so i'm kind of disconnected from the internet for that time, but i'll try to make a second chapter and upload it in a library or something.

Sorry for the long wait, i'll do my best!

Well you had a good start, didn't you?

It's okay, just make sure that you don't abandon this FF because of thatxd

 

[Wesobi]

not a braincell in my head that will abandon it! I'm not really in the mood to write now eventhough I have time (abuse of alcohol really isn't nice the day after new years eve!)

 

[Wesobi]

Update: Chapter Two is up!

 

[senjuwaqas]

good story

 

[senjuwaqas]

nice chapter dude

 

[Wesobi]

Thanks!

 

[JTjutsumaster]

Nice one, I cannot think of any ideas for my FF, And I realy want to make one...no ideas though...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Well, I’m sorry I took so long to begin reading your Fanfic which by the way is simple at first but it is interesting and I know it will heat up as each chap follows. I’m not crazy about Minato’s character. However, the way you express his child life and family feels much like how Kishi would depict it ;p I like his father’s name; Hikaru which means to shine, to be bright, etc. (very fitting) lol I am looking forward to the next chap and the next characters you decide to include in your story and great work ​