The chronicles of Minato, Konoha's Yellow Flash Chapter 4.2

[Wesobi]

Finally got some time (and most likely the only time in weeks) to read this chapter.

It was pretty well done considering this was the first good guy - bad guy fight in your story so far and I think you did great. As for the story, I think the way you chose the "first arc", if I may say so, was very well put together, and everything from the dialogues, jutsus as well as the actual fighting was enjoyable to read and easy to (as mentioned above) imagine and picture in one's mind.

I'll be heading for the next one right away Looking forward to it.

Haha, thanks mate. It wasn't an easy job to create a fight out of the 4.1 as I found it plain...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

This chap was action packed-that is fact XD I really liked how you depicted Jiraiya’s team members dealing with their first mission. Yuji reminded me very much of Sasuke which I personally felt comfortable with. No-it was rather a mix of Sasuke/Nagato ;p It was a good backstory for the enemy turned back to his senses. I loved those Minato Raiton jutsu!!! They were all nicely thought up! Looking forward to the next one ^.^​

 

[Wesobi]

This chap was action packed-that is fact XD I really liked how you depicted Jiraiya’s team members dealing with their first mission. Yuji reminded me very much of Sasuke which I personally felt comfortable with. No-it was rather a mix of Sasuke/Nagato ;p It was a good backstory for the enemy turned back to his senses. I loved those Minato Raiton jutsu!!! They were all nicely thought up! Looking forward to the next one ^.^​

I'm glad you liked this chapter so much, I put a lot of effort in this one and especially the character around Yuji. I'm glad the general idea was atleast depicted to a minority of readers, including you. Thank you once again for your kind words!