The chronicles of Minato, Konoha's Yellow Flash Chapter 3

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so when do u think u can get it up?
Writing as we speak, taking a quick break and i'll try to finish it by tonight.

It's harder than one would think to keep deadlines, ehh?xd:p Welcome to the club my friend, Lol;)
We should make a social club. You van be the group moderator, because you suck at deadlines even more than I do. :D
 

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You were correct as this chap was even better than the last and the final form of Minato’s Raiton jutsu was a nice touch ;) Since Sasuke is my favorite character I have learned to like Raiton an so any jutsu of that element is pretty phenomenal! It is cool to see how you created personalities, etc. to Minato’s two unknown team members ;p Good call with Masato as he does indeed look like he could be form the Akimichi clan lol​
 

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You were correct as this chap was even better than the last and the final form of Minato’s Raiton jutsu was a nice touch ;) Since Sasuke is my favorite character I have learned to like Raiton an so any jutsu of that element is pretty phenomenal! It is cool to see how you created personalities, etc. to Minato’s two unknown team members ;p Good call with Masato as he does indeed look like he could be form the Akimichi clan lol​
Haha, well thank you. I did my best on giving their personality such a twist, that current personalities of the manga are seen in them (Kazumi = Tsunade/Sakura for example!)
 

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Haha, well thank you. I did my best on giving their personality such a twist, that current personalities of the manga are seen in them (Kazumi = Tsunade/Sakura for example!)
Your welcome and it shows. It will be interesting to see how these characters grow in your perspective ;)
 
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