The Bleeding Demo Chapter 1-3

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Here`s Chapter 1 i will post the other 2 tommorow when i finish them

Disclaimer : I do not own Naruto
All Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto
The bleeding Demon Chapter 1
Writer: Akisora
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A time long ago a demon called the 9-tails Kyubi had attacked the village of Konoha,the Hokage to protect the village
sealed the Kyubi`s chakra inside a newborn baby,that baby`s named was Naruto Uzumaki.

Most of the people hated that child for what he was,what he had in his soul,the darkness,the Kyubi had killed many
people and all villagers lusted for revenge,Naruto was raised by the 3th hokage and untill the age of 7 Naruto`s life
was normal,but the day he entered the ninja academy everything changed,his first day was good enough,there were
basically small children inside who didn`t know the pain and agony the Kyubi had caused,so they didn`t know anything
about Naruto,but they all sensed something in him,and all the children got away from him,that evening when Naruto got
out of the academy and walked to his house he turned in a corner and saw 3 people with wooden weapons and knifes,
Naruto quickly turned around and started walking the other way,one of the guys caught up to him and dropped him on
the ground,the 2 other people got Naruto from the hands and pulled him up and restrained him,the third one pulled out a
knife and stabbed him in the stomach,Naruto spit blood,they dropped him on the ground and started hitting him,with their
fists and legs and with wooden fragments,when they left Naruto had lost 1/3 of his blood,he had 4 broken ribs and had
bruised all over his body.

Next day he woke up in a hospital where the doctor came inside the room and tried to inject a poisonous needle in him
Naruto quickly got off bed before the needle reached his body and jumped off the window,it was painfull but if he had
been injected with that poison he would be dead,he quickly ran home,crying all the way there,and with every tear
his memory went back at that night,every tear was like a knife stab,he lived through that hell had had lived that night
over and over again,the pain was unbearable but he kept on going,running as fast as he could towards home.

When he got there,he got on bed and started crying more and more and thinking to himself "What did i ever do to deserve
that kind of thing?"He than realised that not only they tried to kill him at the hospital too,but they hadn`t treated his wounds
he was bleeding and lost very much blood he fainted from the blood loss,he woke up an hour later and covered his wounds.

Sadly that happened every month,more than 2-3 times sometimes,he just couldn`t figure out what had he done to
be treated like that?
That continued for a whole year,Naruto hated all of the villagers,the youngsters didn`t want to be friends with him,it would
happen every week and Naruto`s heart was slowly filling with more and more hatred,he hated the eyes that looked at him,
eyes full of hatred for Naruto,these eyes were piercing through Naruto when they were looking at him,it all continue untill
untill one time,in the middle of a beat up Naruto fainted,he woke up after 20 minutes and saw that they were all gone,
he didn`t know what happened and started running while dripping blood all the villagers were watching it happen,
they watched every beat up Naruto received and they didnt do anything,they watched him run through the town
covered in blood and tears and they just ****ing watched him,not once someone said "Are you Ok?",he hated
the whole town for that,and his soul couldn`t take it anymore,it went dark and every night when someone approached him
his eyes would light up from anger and he would reveal a kunai he had with him,everytime they would run away by
the look of his eyes,it was sealed,Naruto`s soul had comletely overwhealmed by darkness.

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The end of chapter 1.
 

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Here`s chapter 2 guys,i tried to take out
most of the drama of the story

Disclaimer : I do not own Naruto
All Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto
The bleeding Demon Chapter 2
Writer: Akisora
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The villagers hated Naruto`s new self even more than what he had inside of him,the beat ups stopped but Naruto hated the
villagers even more,he remembered every stab,kick,punch he had taken and slowly drifted to sleep every night.

One day Naruto was at the academy and had been transfered into a new class,he was a troublemaker and they hopped
that having Iruka as a teacher he may soften a little bit,he immidietaly sat down and put his hands behind his head
Shikamaru-style and started looking at the celling,when Iruka saw him he said "Naruto,is your book on the celling?,
Naruto replied "No sir,there is altough a beautifull girl"said with a smile and every boy in the class looked at the celling
Naruto than said "Hahahahah got you,no way there would be a naked girl up there".

It was like that every day,he painted the walls,got off class earlier didn`t do things that they told him to do at school
That continued for years to come,altough Naruto was the strongest one in that class he didn`t want to show it.
One day Iruka came inside the room with a girl and said "Class,i want you to meet your new classmate,Hinata Hyuga
is here for the whole 6 year course so get used to her".Hinata looked at every with a blush and said "Hi.....Guy....s",
Iruka than told her to sit down,fortunately for her the only empty seat was next to Naruto,she sat down,and started
staring at Naruto,her eyes became white with vains around them as she looked at him,Naruto looked at her and
wondered what was happening,he than said "Iruka sensei,i think something is wrong with Hinata,her eyes turned
white",Iruka than saw that Hinata was looking at Naruto and saw her eyes and said with a laugh"Haha,that is nothing
to worry about,she is just "scaning"you under ur clothes Naruto,hahaha",Hinata blushed and immidietaly turned her
head around,and heard a voice "I don`t mind Hinata,just stare,but dont touch",Hinata blushed with a deep crimson
red on her face.

The next day Naruto was walking to class when thoughts of Hinata passed through his mind,he than turned around
and headed for Hinata`s house to take her with him,he had realised that he liked her ,he reached her house and
shouted "HINATA-CHAN",Hinata got outside and saw Naruto standing there looking at her,she blushed and was
way too shy to ask him what he was doing there,she just figured that she would tell her,Naruto than scream
"Hinata-chan,wanna go to the academy together?,Hinata blushed even more,and after 1 minute Neji,Hinata`s
brother came out and said "So you wanna take my sister with you?",Naruto than said with a grin on his face
"Yeah,you got a problem with that?",Neji that said "Well if you wanna do that i can`t allow a weak ninja walking
around with my si....." and before the sentence ended he realised Naruto was behind him and said "Who is weak
now?"and kicked Neji to the ground,he than jumped over to Hinata`s balcony and said "Are you comming or not?
we are gonna be late",Hinata smiled,lowered her head and said "Yea.....h,of ....cours...e Naru...to","ok then"just
take ur bagpack and lets go,she took her bagpack and heard Naruto say something and watched him do handsigns
in a very quick temper, and said "Air style : Chariot Bird",and a bird appeared,Hinata didn`t think that jutsu was
possible to genin,she was amazed by his strenght and she was admiring the bird when Naruto took her on his
hands and got on the bird,she was scared at first but than Naruto said to her that "Even if something happen`s
to the bird there is a wind barrier right beneath us,so we cant fall",Hinata smiled and enjoyed the ride.

When they arrived all the students were outside and looking at them,than a voice said "God damnit,what a show
off",Naruto than said to Hinata"Just stay on the bird i will be back soon"and jumped of the bird and ran with the speed
of light towards the voice that said it and punched him and said "Did you say something Sasuke?",Sasuke got up
tried to hit him with his fists and Naruto was dodging them like he was in slow motion,"Is that all you can do Uchiha?"
Sasuke was pissed off but gave up,he knew what strenght Naruto had developed.

Everything went normally at the academy and Naruto took Hinata home after that and said to her"Same time,same place
tommorow",Hinata blushed,she didn`t know what Naruto was up too.


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End of chapter 2,hope you liked IT,also chapter 3 maybe tommorow evening most likely tommorow,because i have
to finish 2-faced bride so....
 

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Hmmn, I was late. But here goes.

For Chapter 1" Oh my, pitiful Naruto...(though I think this never really happened to him and I think it won't since Sarutobi is protecting him)...pure epic - it's like a reverse to what Naruto had become now...

Chapter 2: So, he's going to be like a Gaara-type in this story, ha? :D
 

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Hmmn, I was late. But here goes.

For Chapter 1" Oh my, pitiful Naruto...(though I think this never really happened to him and I think it won't since Sarutobi is protecting him)...pure epic - it's like a reverse to what Naruto had become now...

Chapter 2: So, he's going to be like a Gaara-type in this story, ha? :D
Actually it was revealed from Kishimoto that the manga story plot was like that,what you see on the first chapter is what Kishi told would happen 10 years ago when no-one knew him yet,but he changed it due to the inconsistencies of what Naruto he was trying to create and what Naruto would be with that past.
And about that Gaara type,Gaara killed people when he was 6 >.< not because he had to survive,but because he liked the blood in his hands:flaw::flaw:
 
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