[Approved] The black cat ( Creed diskenth)

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Basic infomation:

Name: Creed Diskenth
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Clan: N/A


Looks:
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Personality:
Creed is strange and self loving and he is a bloodthirsty murderer who kills as naturally as he breathes and enjoys battles to no end. He will slay even his own followers without hesitation, Creed is also deeply narcissistic and megalomaniac. He cares about nothing but himself, and he considers himself superior to everyone in every way. As such, he wants to become immortal in order to remain perfect forever. Creed considers that he is the only one right in the world, he is convinced that those who disagree with him simply don't understand the truth, and he never hesitates to eliminate any contradiction.
Village info:

Village of birth:
Iwagakure
Village of alliance:
Amegakure




Rank/chakra info:
Ninja Rank: Chunin
Speciallity: N/A


Elements: Fire-Needs Training




Ninjutsu: Basic E rank Ninjutsu

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)









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Creed was born as the undesired son of a single, alcoholic mother who intensely abused him. She constantly insulted him, hit him and blamed him for everything wrong in her life. He later ended up living in the streets, picking "food" in bins and being beaten down without reason by teachers. All these ill treatments drove Creed to insanity and gave him a fierce hatred towards the entire world. (In the anime he murdered his mother, presumably by stabbing her to death with a knife, though this seems less likely in the manga. In the anime, he is also shown lashing out at the Teachers who attacked him with a broken flower vase) Later he was adopted by a nice people in amegakure they feed him and behaved like they were his perents soon Creed forgot what he has been through and started liking his new parents and all he wanted now was to protect them.



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Battles:
Won:0
lose:0

Edit: sorry im new to this whole RP thing so please forgive me for my mistakes

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Lol, jus no. xD xD remove all the speciality, Clan Ability and also the mastery.You haven't even started training, So you can't have speciality or mastery.Change the Clan to N/A or leave it empty.No unapproved custom clans are allowed.Your ninja Rank is Chunin not Sage. Have only the basic E rank Ninjutsu and mention an Element and add Needs training to it. Remove everything in the history part and remake a history without all those weird stuffs. Make sure the History is Naruto related. Format is correct but the contents are wrong.Redo everything correctly in the history and Rank/Chakra part.
 
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Lol, jus no. xD xD remove all the speciality, Clan Ability and also the mastery.You haven't even started training, So you can't have speciality or mastery.Change the Clan to N/A or leave it empty.No unapproved custom clans are allowed.Your ninja Rank is Chunin not Sage. Have only the basic E rank Ninjutsu and mention an Element and add Needs training to it. Remove everything in the history part and remake a history without all those weird stuffs. Make sure the History is Naruto related. Format is correct but the contents are wrong.Redo everything correctly in the history and Rank/Chakra part.
Oh i see lol Thanks for pointing my mistakes it seems i have a lot to learn in RP XD
 

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You cant have C rank Lihgtning too. Mention that as Need training. Link the history part to Naruto. Like He was born in Konoha. Was a friends of Sasuke and Naruto. Has crush over hinata. something like that. link the bios history with Naruto series.
 

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xD your a fan of the anime too?
Of course man, it's really good. Sven ftw.

You cant have C rank Lihgtning too. Mention that as Need training. Link the history part to Naruto. Like He was born in Konoha. Was a friends of Sasuke and Naruto. Has crush over hinata. something like that. link the bios history with Naruto series.
and yeah what he said, bit not exactly like that, just an example
 

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You cant have C rank Lihgtning too. Mention that as Need training. Link the history part to Naruto. Like He was born in Konoha. Was a friends of Sasuke and Naruto. Has crush over hinata. something like that. link the bios history with Naruto series.
I have already mention his birth place Its iwagakure
 
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