The birth of a demon: Madara's story part 1

Makoto Yuki

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Naruto: *pant* *pant*....finnaly, i beat him, madaras dead *passes out*

Madara:*laying down thinking: so, this is how it ends how did this happen?, i had it all how did all of this happen to me i was perfect*

*flashback: an old house, windy about nine o' clock at night*

Kito: what should we name him, because i was thinking madara.

niwatori: *chuckles* yes, yes madara uchiha a perfect fit for my son.

Madara: *sqwirming around*

kito: *trying to contain madara* well, hes just like you, likes to move around.


niwatori: *chuckles louder* he is just like me isnt he.



Time skip: 4 years

Madara: *looking at niwatori* daddy, can you train me today?

niwatori: *smiles and rubs madars head* sure, what would you like to learn?

madara: *thinks about it for a while* Fire style jutsu. *grins with exeitment*

niwatori: ok *puts his hand on madara's shoulder* lets go out back

madara:...ok daddy *follows niwatori*

*scene: training feild, midday*

Madara: *does fire ball jutsu*

niwatori:....yes, yes madar perfect

madara: *starts jumping around in exeitment* woo hoo, i did it, i did it.


niwatori: *sitting down eating a sandwich* madara come here for a moment

madara: *walks over to niwatori*...yes, dad?

niwatori: how would you feel about a little brother?

madara: that would be awesome, i could teach him so much, why?

niwatori: no reason, so now that you've done fire ball jutsu, you are one step closer to mastering the fire element

madara: dad, im tired can i go lay down?


niwatori: hmm, yes of course, you are a growing boy, you need rest

madara: thank you dad* bows the runs in to the house*


Time skip: 17 years

madara:*pant* *pant* come on izuna, show me what you've got. *braces himself*

izuna: alright brother, if you say so, *jumps up and throws thre kunai*

madara: *doges the kunai* is that really all you've got?

izuna: *appers behind madara and kicks him in the head and sends him flying into a tree and grins* no, im just getting started *takes out two kunai*

madara: *gets up scratching head*, umm lets take a break and visit mother, ok?

izuna: *puts kunai away and grins*... just because i can kick your ass, that doesnt mean you can use mother to get out of training.

madara: *puts izuna in a headlock* getting a little cocky arnt we izuna, do you really want me to try?

izuna: no, im just kidding, lets go

*after walking for a little while they cross paths with a man*

izuna: *points to a man ahead of them* who is that up ahead?

madara: *puts head down*.....just harashima senju, an old class mate, and a most fierce rival of the Uchiha


izuna: ok


harashima: *walks past madara with a angry look in his eyes*


madara:...whats the matter harashima, you mad because im going to be hokage

harashima: *turns around and slams madara to the ground*, you cant beat me Uchiha, not even if you use your sharingan

Madara: *punches harashima then stabs him in the leg with a kunai*....well, at least i have sharingan

harashima: *spits on madara* the uchiha are a disgrace to the ninja world

izuna: will you two stop fighting
harashima: *creates a wooden pillar and hits izuna in the head* stay out of this

izuna: *flys back* ack


madara: *cuts harashima's cheek with a kunai* dont touch izuna *jumps up then uses fire syle: pheoinx fire jutsu*


harashima: *creates an earth dome and blocks it*......well come on then, is that all you have madara, i thought you said you've masterd all elements

Madara: *appers behind harashima then kicks him into the air, then re appers above him grabs him then throws him into the ground*

Harashima:...play fair madara

madara: lightning style: lightning spear *creates a spear of lightning* agh!!!!!!!!

Harashima: there we go

madara: *slashes harashima downwards*

harashima: *grabs madaras wrist as hes comming down, twists it, then throws him into a jagged rock stabbing madara in the back* this wasnt even worth it *starts to walk way* thanks for the workout though

madara: *cough* *cough*...izuna, are you alright?

Izuna: *gets up*...im fine, im worried about you, that was a pretty nasty hit he got on you *helps madara up*...lets go to mothers

madara: *gets up*...umm... yeah right


*to be continued*​
 
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Looked good to me but all of the wounds seem a bit much to me lol like him getting up after getting a wound to the back. Anyways looking forward to the next chapter
 
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