The art of Kenjutsu with Kimblee

[The_Empire]

Good and now for the finally thing in the basics of kenjutsu, a spar with me. We will us bokken which are wood swords. Now here

*throws a bokken at you*

Now come at me like you want to kill me. I will leave notes if there is need be.

 

[Vexion]

Yes sensai....first I come at you with a quick one handed stab then follow up with and upward diagonal slash from right hip to left shoulder with two hands then I follow up with a downward vertical slash with one and and I finish my combo with a double stab and thrust with two hands

 

[The_Empire]

Yes sensai....first I come at you with a quick one handed stab then follow up with and upward diagonal slash from right hip to left shoulder with two hands then I follow up with a downward vertical slash with one and and I finish my combo with a double stab and thrust with two hands

Your move lacks detail and how your body is position.

first I come at you with a quick one handed stab with my right leg forward and the knee is bent, my left leg is stretch out then I follow up with an upper diagonal slash from your right hip to your left shoulder with two hands and I bring my left leg forward , I placed my other hand on the hilt just before my stab towards you as reached then I follow up with a quick draw of my left hand and comes down, doing a vertical slash with one and and I finish my combo with a double stab thrusting my sword forward twice with two hands for better control over my sword

See what I did there you can imagine me doing the attack and knowing which hand is which as I do the combo. Now try it again.

 

[Vexion]

Yea sensai. With my right leg forward I come in with a two handed jab to the stomach then I swiftly move my lef leg forward as I come down with a two handed diagonal slash from right shoulder to left hip. I step back and block your incoming attack then I put my left leg forward and come in with a horizontal slab with one and from the left to the right then my right leg goes forward with a double stab and thrust with two hands.

 

[The_Empire]

Yea sensai. With my right leg forward I come in with a two handed jab to the stomach then I swiftly move my lef leg forward as I come down with a two handed diagonal slash from right shoulder to left hip. I step back and block your incoming attack then I put my left leg forward and come in with a horizontal slab with one and from the left to the right then my right leg goes forward with a double stab and thrust with two hands.

Okay yes you added details but still you are forgetting the position of your matters when you are making a combo. The bold part just made your move incorrect. How did you get your sword from the stomach to another attack coming from the shoulder to the hip?

 

[Vexion]

Yes sensai... I spin on my eight foot and give my enemy a downward diagonal slash from left shoulder to right hip as I land on my left foot then I slide my right foot forward as I give my enemy a double stab and thrust. Is that right sensai

 

[The_Empire]

Please explain to me what is "eight foot"?

 

[Vexion]

Sorry sensai it was supposed to be right foot

 

[The_Empire]

I love that combo then, it can actually be deadly with you doing more practice in kenjutsu and even taijutsu. So any questions you have for me?

 

[Vexion]

No sensai I understand to this point. *kumori bows*

 

[The_Empire]

Well tell me how would you avoid or block the following

Vertical Slash(all ways)
Horizontal Slash(all ways)
Stab
Diagonal Slash(all ways)

 

[Vexion]

With a vertical slash from either side I can side step and counter with a horizontal slash or I could blockstrike by cutting his arm off. With a horizontal slash I could block by raising my blade with two or one hand and counter with a stab to the stomache. With a stab all you have to do is sidestep and vertical slash the arm off. With one or two hands then following up with a devestating finishing blow

 

[Vexion]

Oh and with a diagonal slash I could put my blade in an upward position and block the strike and then counter with a diagonal of my own to cut my enemies arm off or I could evade by bending under the blade the horizontal slashing the enemies legs or waist.

 

[Vexion]

How is that sensai

 

[Yonkou Pandaman]

Spam but... The infamus Triplepost @_@...

 

[The_Empire]

Okay yea you got all the countering and blocking right but one thing you multi posted and that is an infraction automatically depending on the mod.

 

[Vexion]

Oh I didn't realize sensai I'm sorry. It wont happen again. Do then what is next honorable sensai.

 

[The_Empire]

( Enjin Ranbu ) - Circular Wild Dance
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user spins with his tantō, hitting the target several times.

*I throw you a tanto*

Do a 360 spin while doing slashes to my clone every time you turn around towards him. This is a simple jutsu and very useless in a real battle.

 

[Vexion]

Kumori catches the tanto in his right hand. He starts a full sprint towards the clone gazing menacingly into the opponents eyes. After stepping directly in front of the clone Kumori says 'are you ready for this? He starts to spin around in a circle doing a full 360. As hes spinning he slashes the clone numerous times.

Spoiler

( Enjin Ranbu ) - Circular Wild Dance
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user spins with his tantō, hitting the target several times.

Looking down at his dead opponent his chuckles. "hehe I didnt think you were"

 

[The_Empire]

Okay yea great post and I actually like but it needs a little bit more detail to it. Try it again and if you like add some of your own style into it, adding your own style to a technique is what combat is all about.