The Art of Gentle Fist passing Down to ME

[Sterling Malory Archer]

Forgive me SENSEI! :T_T:!

Let me try it again!

-I prepare myself by getting into a proper stance by spreading my legs a bit more then hip length. I then bend my knees to add more power to my upper body and to generate more stability. I then thrust my right arm with my fingers point up and my chakra concentrated in my palm and as my palm makes contact with my target i eject the chakra out of my palm into the enemies arm. The force would cause my enemies arm to recoil from the force and cause serious muscle tensions which should cause severe pains if the arms were to become flexed which should disable him from making handseals and cause struggles in molding chakra-

How about this sensei....:T_T:

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Forgive me SENSEI! :T_T:!

Let me try it again!

-I prepare myself by getting into a proper stance by spreading my legs a bit more then hip length. I then bend my knees to add more power to my upper body and to generate more stability. I then thrust my right arm with my fingers point up and my chakra concentrated in my palm and as my palm makes contact with my target i eject the chakra out of my palm into the enemies arm. The force would cause my enemies arm to recoil from the force and cause serious muscle tensions which should cause severe pains if the arms were to become flexed which should disable him from making handseals and cause struggles in molding chakra-

How about this sensei....:T_T:

I literally just told you these sort of attacks won't damage the muscle that way. They will not prevent the opponent from molding chakra or preform handseals.


Ok see it this way. What happens when you punch someone in the arm? First you hi the skin, then the muscles. Both tissues will absorb the impact. Even if they don't the most you can do is damage some veins and produce small bruises. If you punch enough strength, the bruises will be bigger and you may even damage the bones. But in the arms, there won't be any fatal damage involved, and most of the power of the punch will be absorbed by the flesh. Again, punches won't, by themselves, damage nerves or muscles in such a way that it would nullify the movement of the arm (Of course, it depends much on the area you hit, but still, a smaller surface of contact would be more efficient that a full blown fist or palm)

If you punch the belly, the muscle tissue will once again absorb most of the impact, and the damage to the organs will be minimum. If you hit the chest, the muscles and the bones will be guarding the organs, and so, once again, the damage will be minimal. For you to retrieve some fatal damage, you'd need to exert much more power on your punches.

What the gentle fist does is bypass the muscles and the bones, and hit the organs directly. It as if you were punching the lungs and the heart, when you strike the chest, or punch the stomach and intestines and liver when you punch the belly, and the kidneys when you strike their lower back and the brain when you strike the head. It's gentle fist because you don't even have to put much pressure on the strike, since your chakra does all the work.

Now, when you're employing this technique, the palm strike, the chakra will act like a punch, a blunt damage. If you use this technique on the arm or on the legs, what are you trying to damage? The bones? The muscles? They're trained to suffer such impacts. You want to hit the parts of you opponent's body that aren't trained to absorb impacts. You can lift some weight to train the biceps, but you can't do push ups to train your lungs.

So now tell me, what are the areas you're going to target?

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

Internal Organs sensei!

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Looool. Yes, mind be more especific? Like, I hit the lungs, the air is spilled out, the opponent looses is out of breath. Possible injuries to the lung would make the person unable to inhale and exhale air properly, leading to a death by asphyxiation.

Do all the others.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

If I hit the heart. The blood pressure might be a bit distorted. Possibly can dizziness from the disrupted blood pressure. Can cause severe heart problems. Can also create an irregular heart beat maybe which can quickly lead to death. Can also damage blood vessels.

If i hit the kidney. They have a large blood supply so damage can cause severe bleeding. They can also be damaged by damage to blood vessels which supply the kidney with blood which can cause Renal vein thrombosis. Can also cause Bladder outlet obstruction.

If i hit the stomach area. This could create problems with the acids in the stomach and can maybe create ulcers. And can cause problems with digestion and stomach aches which can halt the user's will to continue fighting.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Much much better. Now I want you to do some combos, where you hit those areas, of course. I don't want you to barge in right away of course, you might have to hit non-fatal area like the arms or legs, in order to open up to the fatal areas.

Be very descriptive!

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

yes sensei!

-I turn to face your clone. I run up to your clone and sweep my left foot towards the clones left leg. I then knock its left foot sliding it to knock it off balance. While its busy loosing its balance, I turn my waist and use a chakra burst with my right palm onto his right forearm to cause its body to swing to its right owing to the impact of my thrust. While it is swaying to the right i the twist my waist and swing my left leg out at the clone to make full contact with it towards the abdomen. While the clone is buckling forward i swing my right knee into the left rib area of the clone causing it to lift up in pain. As it is recoiling from my strike I thrust my left palm into the solar plexus knocking its wind out and as it is trying to catch its breath i throw my right palm straight between the lungs to the heart area-

 

[Lili-Chwan]

yes sensei!

-I turn to face your clone. I run up to your clone and sweep my left foot towards the clones left leg. I then knock its left foot sliding it to knock it off balance. While its busy loosing its balance, I turn my waist and use a chakra burst with my right palm onto his right forearm to cause its body to swing to its right owing to the impact of my thrust. While it is swaying to the right i the twist my waist and swing my left leg out at the clone to make full contact with it towards the abdomen. While the clone is buckling forward i swing my right knee into the left rib area of the clone causing it to lift up in pain. As it is recoiling from my strike I thrust my left palm into the solar plexus knocking its wind out and as it is trying to catch its breath i throw my right palm straight between the lungs to the heart area-

As you try to sweep her left leg, and then aim a strike with your right palm, she quickly rises her left leg over yours, while tilting her body to the left. In that position, she faces your strike straight on, while keeping her right arm in a low position, across her body. As you go for the strike, she fans out arm in a windmill motion, sweeping your right arm away from her body. This would make your body twist counterclockwise, and toss your right arm upwards, while leaving your right waist and ribcage completely open. Using that opening, she delivers a quick strike to the ribcage, blasting chakra trough your liver and right lung directly, meaning loss of breath and excruciating pain. She makes sure the damage isn't fatal, by lowering the chakra released.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

(Btw, no I can't really do this, but let's just pretend I'm using my Marianna Hyuuga bio)

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

As you try to sweep her left leg, and then aim a strike with your right palm, she quickly rises her left leg over yours, while tilting her body to the left. In that position, she faces your strike straight on, while keeping her right arm in a low position, across her body. As you go for the strike, she fans out arm in a windmill motion, sweeping your right arm away from her body. This would make your body twist counterclockwise, and toss your right arm upwards, while leaving your right waist and ribcage completely open. Using that opening, she delivers a quick strike to the ribcage, blasting chakra trough your liver and right lung directly, meaning loss of breath and excruciating pain. She makes sure the damage isn't fatal, by lowering the chakra released.

-as my left foot slides under hers i use it as a pivot to swing my body clockwise to give her a back heel to the chest area. As soon as my right heel connects i begin to swing my body to cause my left foot to connect with her lower jaw leaving her whole torso open. As i see the opportunity I i concentrate a lot of chakra into my palms and thrust both my palms into the torso. One to hit the abs (which would cause her to struggle to breath) and one to the left lung (can cause internal bleeding and bruised or broken ribs as well as lung damage). -

 

[Lili-Chwan]

-as my left foot slides under hers i use it as a pivot to swing my body clockwise to give her a back heel to the chest area. As soon as my right heel connects i begin to swing my body to cause my left foot to connect with her lower jaw leaving her whole torso open. As i see the opportunity I i concentrate a lot of chakra into my palms and thrust both my palms into the torso. One to hit the abs (which would cause her to struggle to breath) and one to the left lung (can cause internal bleeding and bruised or broken ribs as well as lung damage). -

When you write your attacks, do you picture them in your head? Because if you do, you will see that your pivoting leg is as close of my body as it can be, which would mean that you're not likely to hit my chest with your right heel. Furthermore, your motion would make your right ribcage, which was my target, even more open. Your main priority was to protect that.

Fix it.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

-as my left foot slides under hers i use it as a pivot to swing my body counterclockwise to give her a right knee to the left rib area (can bruise or break a rib(s)). As she recoils from the pain I place my right foot forward past her and thrust my left palm in the left lung area (can create breathing problems). As she is falling back from my thrust I twist my body counterclockwise and thrust my right palm into the left kidney (can rupture blood vessels. (it is also illegal to punch the kidneys in a boxing match)).-

 

[Lili-Chwan]

-as my left foot slides under hers i use it as a pivot to swing my body counterclockwise to give her a right knee to the left rib area (can bruise or break a rib(s)). As she recoils from the pain I place my right foot forward past her and thrust my left palm in the left lung area (can create breathing problems). As she is falling back from my thrust I twist my body counterclockwise and thrust my right palm into the left kidney (can rupture blood vessels. (it is also illegal to punch the kidneys in a boxing match)).-

Glad we're not on a boxing match, hey? :lili: Nothing's illegal in a shinobi fight

The techniques you learned with this method are:

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.
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(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.

(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close-MId
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description:A burst fire of empty palms that do mor damage.

(Hakke Hazangeki) - 8 Trigrams Moutain Crusher

Rank: A
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A(+65 if used as an attack)
Description:An up close attack were the user pushes a huge amount of chakra into there opponents body that destroys the internal organs and can level any wall.

Now the following ones will use the same method, but instead of attacking organs, you will aim to disrupt the chakra pathway. Not by aiming at the chakra points alone, but by aiming at the whole chakra pathway as a whole. The effects for both techniques are described in the description.

(Hyaku Retsushou) - 100 power palms

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A weaker version of 64 plams where the user strikes 100 times with gentle fist.This justu cuts chakra flow of opponent by half for one turn.

(Hakurou Tenbu) - Heaven`s Dance of Hazy White

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:A higher variation of the 100 power palms.The user makes ther chakra more stronger and visable.The user strikes with more force then regular and stops chakra flow by half and for one turn to the enemy.

With this one, you will aim for each gate, do you know where each is? (reply in your post)

(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.




Okay, this all for the First Gentle Fist Form, the Raw Chakra Pound (I'm always changing the name because I'm making this up as I go along. It's just a way to organize my training)

Either way, all the combos you did are combos you can use on a actual battle. You can use description for the combos, and thus you don't have to waste your jutsus per round. Either way, every time you do post a jutsu, I hope you employ as much written description as you feel necessary.

Before we move on to the second form, do you have any questions?

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

Gates:

Left side of head - 1
Right side of head - 2
Collar - 3
Centre of chest - 4
Solar Plexus (just below the ribs) - 5
Centre of abdomen - 6
Lower abdomen - 7
Heart - 8

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I have a few questions:

1) If i deliver a direct hit with a jutsu like:

(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

Can my opponent do anything next turn? Besides run?

2) Will you be teaching me any Custom Hyuga Techniques?

3) Is their a difference between " I use (jutsu) " and "I thrust my two fingers at the tenketsu of the heart"

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Gates:

Left side of head - 1
Right side of head - 2
Collar - 3
Centre of chest - 4
Solar Plexus (just below the ribs) - 5
Centre of abdomen - 6
Lower abdomen - 7
Heart - 8

________________

I have a few questions:

1) If i deliver a direct hit with a jutsu like:

(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

Can my opponent do anything next turn? Besides run?

2) Will you be teaching me any Custom Hyuga Techniques?

3) Is their a difference between " I use (jutsu) " and "I thrust my two fingers at the tenketsu of the heart"

Stops the flow of chakra completely, which means the target can't do anything chakra based. And since it puts a tremendous strain on the body, the target will only be able to use taijutsu that isn't too complex.

2) I don't have such things, sorry.

3) The only difference is that the first situation will cost you one of the jutsus for the 3 jutsus per round, while the second one will allow you to keep the 3 jutsus still.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

YES SENSEI!

So what's next! LEVEL TWO!

 

[Lili-Chwan]

LEVEL TWO!

Secong Gentle Fist Form: Razor Chakra

Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.

I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.

You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

LEVEL TWO!

Secong Gentle Fist Form: Razor Chakra

Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.

I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.

You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.

yes sensei!

- as i see my opponent throwing a right hook towards my head i lean left and duck under it. As i'm moving i am molding my chakra into my hand which i move up to my index and ring fingers to create a sharp chakra knife. As i'm lifting my head i strike him with jab to his right wrist (cutting his skin disrupting the chakra points in the area and damaging the motor neurons leading to the hand) and then I step forward and with my left hand's chakra knife i jab the armpit in an forwards direction (further disrupting the chakra points in the arm and damaging the Lymphatic system and rupturing blood vessels causing internal bleeding). I Then adjust my weight balance from left to right as I give him a jab of chakra to his shoulder (severing all the neurons leading towards the arms). I then finish him off with a right palm thrust to the back of his head while aiming for the right hemisphere (Destroying his functioning with the left side of his body and cause blood in the skull possibly killing him) -

 

[Lili-Chwan]

yes sensei!

- as i see my opponent throwing a right hook towards my head i lean left and duck under it. As i'm moving i am molding my chakra into my hand which i move up to my index and ring fingers to create a sharp chakra knife. As i'm lifting my head i strike him with jab to his right wrist (cutting his skin disrupting the chakra points in the area and damaging the motor neurons leading to the hand) and then I step forward and with my left hand's chakra knife i jab the armpit in an forwards direction (further disrupting the chakra points in the arm and damaging the Lymphatic system and rupturing blood vessels causing internal bleeding). I Then adjust my weight balance from left to right as I give him a jab of chakra to his shoulder (severing all the neurons leading towards the arms). I then finish him off with a right palm thrust to the back of his head while aiming for the right hemisphere (Destroying his functioning with the left side of his body and cause blood in the skull possibly killing him) -

I think you're improving.
Btw, if you damage the occipital ridge, it will translate into immediate loss of consciousness. It is located in the back of the head.

Anyways, now I want you to come up with other combos. You can use only the second form or intercalate the second with the first.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

wish me luck sensei.

-i begin by squaring my feet and bending my knees. I then run at my opponent and when i get near him i then slide behind him. I then use the momentum of a sling shot to give him a powerful right palm to his back between his shoulder blades (This would force his body moving forward and flinging his arms back in backwards direction forming a V). As his arms fling towards me I form 2 chakra knives by my fingers on both hands. I then aim for both wrists, first hitting his left wrist with my left wrist (severing the neurons leading towards his hand and cutting a vein) and then i hit right wrist with my right hand's knife (cutting some neurons running towards the hands). While his back is wide open i step forward and start a barrage of stabs to the 8 gates followed by to the 33 vertebra of the spinal cord (Causing severe internal bleeding and completely shutting down his chakra network flow and possible paralyzing him). I then take two fingers of my left hand making him fall on the ground.-