The 3rd Great Ninja War:written by the Naruto lovers

[Ballin Sasuke]

Alright everyone i want to make an amazing Naruto story and I need all of your guy's help. I want you to pitch ideas and tell me if u want to participate in the writing or being one of the characters and tell me witch one you would like to be as well(But I'm Sasuke). Thank you and your opinion matters.

 

[Ballin Sasuke]

We will need a Mandara/Tobi, Naruto, kakashi, Minato, Yamato, Sakura, Hinata, Neji, Lee, Guy, Itachi, Gaara, Jiraya, Orochimaru/Kabuto, Kisame, Pain, Deidara, The 6 paths Sage, Tsunade, 1st hokage,2nd hokage, 3rd hokage, Bee, Raikage, Shikamaru, Kiba, Choji, Ino, Shino,Iruka,Hidan,Fugaku, Sai, tenten and Kushina, Danzou, Obito, Zetsu and thats all I can think of now name any characters i overlooked cause I know there are alot thanks.

 

[Ballin Sasuke]

Heres the beginning I though of.

17 years before present date

Every few years before the new generation of ninja were born there was a leaf village gathering were parents could see their child's destiny and fate. Everyone was happy with what they saw except for Fugaku. He was furious with his sons future. His eyes went from the soft dark black color to the evil red color with an intricate pattern surrounding the pupil. "What the hell is this elders why does my 4 year old son have to kill me and my whole clan and my unborn son have to be filled with vile hatred for the rest of his life. That is bull.." Minato appeared behind him. "Keep your eyes under control and come with me" Minato namikaze was the 4th Hokage and the strongest of them all he was married too Kushina the kyuubi jinchuuriki and was about to have a baby boy with her. But why would the hokage need to talk with the leader of the Uchiha. Fugaku nodded at Minato. Minato grabbed his hand and teleported to a quiet forest. "I see why they call you the yellow flash but what buisness do you have with me, Hokage?" The way he said it sounded like he loathed the word Minato smiled. "Why soo serious Fugaku our wifes are friends why cant we be?" "If you have no reason for bringing me here I will leave" "Wait, I'm sorry I'm going to be serious. I brought you here to tell you that your clan leader Mandara is alive and will help Itachi kill your clan and bring Sasuke down the bad path and then kill Naruto and Sasuke." "Okay but why here so far from the village? Fugaku asked. Minato seemed annoyed and scared. His eyes darted back and forth. "Because I think hes here." A hand cames straight out the ground and grabbed Fugaku. Almost on cue Minato jumped on Fugaku and teleported to a nearby tree branch. "You alright" His eyes went into the Sharingan. "Was that him." he was breathing heavy. "Yes. Show yourself Mandara!!" Minato screamed. The hand slowly came farther and farther above ground until a full body and a head was shown. His face was flawless and his eyes weren't like Fugaku's it was a weird circle with 3 circels inside the corners of the circle surrounding his pupil and then 3 small lines coming out the circle. Fugaku gasped. "It's true you live and you have the mangekyou, you bastard" He rushed him and pulled out a kunai and tried to stab him in his face but he went right through him and he punched grabbed Fugaku and started to choke him. Minato quickly yelled "Rasengan barrage" two blue balls of chakra came out of the palms of his hand and jumped off the tree. The rasengan touched Mandara in the back and he went flying. "Shit!" Mandara screamed as he picked himself up. " Fire ball Fire hell Jutsu" Mandara said while doing hand signs and then a huge flame came at the Hokage and the current leader of the Uchiha. Fugaku's eyes widened and he quickly put together the hand signs "Fire style Great fire ball technique" The hugest flame erupted from Fugaku's mouth. The fire swallowed the previous one and dispersed. Fugaku's eyes went back to their normal dark color and he fell, passed out. Minato looked at his fallen friend then at Mandara. He pulled out two of his weirdly customized kunai. He put the ends of the kunai together and they grew into a double kunai staff. Minato held the staff in his hand so comfortably and he twirled it around looking at it intriguingly. "If you stop now and discontinue your plans I won't kill you." Mandara pulled out his circular scythe. "And how will you stop me, Hokage." Minato jumped toward him and he slashed his staff out at Mandara. Mandara jumped back out of the staff's reach and then brought his scythe down on Minato with the strength to kill a rhino and an elephant in one blow. After the contact Minato's body turned to smoke. It was a damn shadow clone. And then the real Came out from behind Mandara with two huge rasengan coming out of his palms. One hit Mandara in the face the other in the chest he went flying back. Then Minato teleported to him and elbowed him in the stomach. Mandara's body went straight into the ground. His hands were on his face where there seemed to be smoke coming from it. Minato landed a few feet away from him but landed on his feet. the Hokage was huffing and puffing. Mandara screamed as his face continued to steam. Then there was a puff of dust and he uncovered his face to show a different face then the one of the founder. Minato looked at him and to his horror he saw who it really was "Obito?". Obito smiled as he became opaque and fell into the ground. Minato picked up Fugaku and put him on his shoulder he teleported back to the leaf and dropped Fugaku in his home. Minato teleported to a friends house and knocked on his door. The door flew open as a young white haired man wearing a cover over his mouth and the leaf headband over his left eye. "Sensei" he said. "Kakashi your up um This is important it's about Obito."





Naruto Shppuden: The 3rd Great Ninja War




Chapter 1: 1 year later on the day of naruto's birth
"I love you Minato Namikaze you are the best husband ever." Kushina said as she kissed Minato with a whole lot of tongue. "Yes my sweet Kushina thank you" He smiled at her then his face turned serious as he whispered to the elder who was helping with the birth of his son."How much of that stuff did you give her?" he hissed. "Calm your tone and self hokage just enough and then some because she is the jinchuuriki" She whispered back. Minato looked at his love who was so intrigued by her hand moving it back and forth like a wave. Minato slapped his hand on his head. "I'll be back for delivery" with that he disappeared with a golden flash. "Where'd he go" Kushina asked "I don't know" the elder replied. "You don't know?" Kushina repeated pursing her lips. "I don't know" the elder repeated. Kushina burst out laughing drunkenly. The Hokage was checking out the mountain where his lover would give birth. Then he was met by the leader of the squad keepin watch over the birth of the baby. "Sir my sqaud is stationed all around the mountain in five stations for five rows up the mountain not including the top guards at the plateau and we are already workin on a disguise for the mountain. "Thank you soldier!" Minato said as he disappeared once again to the plateau of the mountain. "Kakashi make sure nothing goes wrong" His eye lightened. "i'd rather die than have something happen to you or your family." Minato smiled at him. Suddenly a scream emerged from the house where Naruto would be born. "Kushina!" "He's coming" Kushina said eerily with her eyes wide and her legs spread open. Suddenly Minato felt a chill go down his spine kushina wasnt just talking about Naruto she was talking about Obito and the fox as well. A huge scream came from outside followed by the noises of battle starting. Then from inside the room Kushina screamed because her seal on her stomach was moving and Naruto was making a break from the uteris. Finally a huge red furred demon came from inside Kushina's seal to the out side world. Slowly his body as climbing out destroying the roof because of it's height. Minato just stood their like an idiot watching what was unfolding before his very eyes. Then his son looked at him with big blue eyes filled with sorrow and understanding then only then did Minato move. He grabbed his past out wife and baby from the bed and teleported them to a clear meadow somwhere else on the mountain. He quickly developed a plan for dealing with this situation.

Meanwhile with Obito....

Obito sat in a tree wearing a mask he had stolen with one eyehole for his right eye and had an intricate pattern on it with many patterns"yes my plan is going perfectly" he thought. Then someone came out of a bush. He was a young man with white hair and a leaf headband on his forhead and his left eye showed a glowing red sharingan. Obito almost fell out the tree with excitement. "The one who stole my eye." Obito flipped off the tree and landed in front of Kakashi. Before Kakashi could even flinch his stomach was met by a blow that would make a whole through a boulder. The sound of guts moving and bonesbreaking was heard by Obito before kakashi let out a scream."I'm going to make you pay." then he put his foot into kakashi's jaw. The band covering it fell from his mouth revealing burns and bruises covered with fresh blood from Obito's kick. Kakashi fell to Obito's feet."Too late to bow you Bastard and what happened to that pretty face.Oh wait i was there." Kakashi lunged forward with his fist. Obito leaned out of the way and punched Kakashi viciously in his face. Kakashi flew through 3 trees to then collapse. Obito turned away. "Soo easy. You really let yourself ......." Obito stopped to turn back around where through the three holes in the tree you saw Kakashi holding what seemed to be lightning. "Chidori!!!!!" Kakashi leaped forward at his old friend and hit him with the lightning in the chest. Obito screamed with the pain of 1,000,000 volts. Obito flew backward hitting his head on a tree."Obito and I've worked on an even stronger jutsu. Lightning blade!!" Kakashi words spiraled out of his mouth with force. Obito could only see out of one eye seeing his rival come at him with such a speed and velocity and strength. Kakashi was just inches away from his opponent he extended his arm out when it fell right through and soon his whole body did as well. Once he was through Obito, Obito grabbed the hand with the lightning blade and pulled kakashi up to his broken mask revealing a dark evil and twisted smile from mask to mask. Kakashi met the right eye of his maker. It was the worst mistake ever the tomoes twirled in the red pool of his eye. Then Kakashi saw Obito pulling his left eye out torchering him, making him suffer to his utter essence and core. But Kakashi was under Obito's genjutsu. Truthfully Kakashi was just sitting there crying with the lightning blade still in hand. Obito was watching him with his mask uncovered wiping his eye of tears. "I'm sorry my friend." He put the mask on again and fell through the ground he was standing on, looking for the Kyubii.
The Village...

Konah was being torn apart by the vicious monster called the Kyubbi. The ninja were attacking with their best jutsu but had no luck. The fox would demolish the leaf and its inhabitants with no promblem whatsoever. That was until the masked Obito stood on his nose. "Uchiha get away or be destroyed" The fox growled at an enormous volume. "Thats not how you talk to your new handler." The fox snorted with laughter. "I am handled by no human only the ...........SAGE!!" The last word was said with so much hate. 'Well I am one of the sage's direct relatives" His right eye turned into that of Kakashi's mankeyou (from the present). The fox's slit in his eyes broke into that of 3 tomoes. "Now that you are listening I would like for you to.." Obito pulled out a kunai and turned around as Minato appeared behind Obito. Obito was to fast for his master as he sliced his masters green sensei'jacket. Blood seered through the cut and his clothing. Minato cursed silently then grabbed his opponent by the armor and jumped off the Kyuubi's nose. still in the air Obito elbowed himself out of the Hokage's grip. Then the hokage pulled out 2 of his custom kunai and made them a staff again. Once it became a staff Obito thrust himself forward still holding the kunai he put it behind
Minato's head. He tried to pull it forward trying to make the kunai cut Minato's head off but Minato's arm was forcing it back. Minato then used his freehand to punch Obito in the stomach making him back off. Then Obito tried to kick but Minato caught it with one arm with his staff in the other he raised the staff above Obito's leg. Obito grunted and used his other leg to kick the staff free from Minato's hand then pulled himself forward with the Kunai doing a quick slash across the face leaving blood on Minato's once flawless face. "AAAAAGH!" minato screamed at hte top of his lungs. Then Minato let go of the masked one's legs and punched Obito so hard it distanced them in the air. while being on top of Obito Minato constructed two giant rasengan. Desperatly Obito put together handsigns. "Fire style dragon balls of flame jutsu." Out of his mouth came flames huge flames filled with the fire in his lungs. Minato spun through the flames with the huge rasegan shielding him from the heat. And came out of the flames alive with his hair and hokage jacket singed. Then a familar person was beside him with similar blue chakra only it had more light dancing around. Minato looked to see his pupil, Kakashi, weilding a lightning blade heading for the same target, Obito. Boom! Both of their jutsu combined hit Obito in the stomach sending him crashing tto the ground. Minato held his pupil close and then teleported back to a forest. Kakashi looked down at his fallen friend there bleeding out his mask off and both of his eyes were open one with sharingan and the other was just a gaping hole his mouth showed his teeth and he looked well dead, with his arms and legs spraled out in the little hole created on impact. But his eye something about his eye. Minato snapped him out of his trans. "Leave I have to do something you won't like" Kakashi frowned under his cloth covering his mouth. Minato smiled. "I'm gonna miss you stay strong and tell Jiraya I'll miss him and I want you both to watch after Naruto. Got it." Kakashi put his headband over Obito's old eye. "Please Minato.Wait.." but Minato was gone in a flash... A yellow flash. Minato stood in front of the fox. His blonde hair covered his eyes but tears were running down his cheeks. He ran forward toward the fox. The fox tried to stomp on him but minato was to fast and determined. He jumped up snd teleported to the fox's nose he then teleported again with the fox. Minato was almost drained but he had the will to put together one last jutsu. Kushina held her baby and ran to her husband. "Put Naruto down and come get him when I'm gone." Minato said without looking at her he couldnt bring himself to because he would regret it for eternity. Kushina put Naruto down and kissed her husband. Shock and understanding went through Minato. "Don't leave without me Minato." "But Naruto needs a mother." "But the village needs a hokage" They both smiled agreeing then chains came out of Kushina's back trying to reel in the fox. she screamed with pain. "Quickly Minato." With the last bits of chakra Minato grabbed one of his kunai and ran chakra through it. He cut his wife's chains and she was relaxed again. "Free at last" The Kyuubi snarled. Minato quickly backflipped into a flash landing on the fox's stomach. He weilded the handsigns. "8 trigram seal." A black mark appeared on the fox with many lines and circles. "Fourth you will pay!" The fox yelled with absolute hatred. Then Minato put the handseal on his babies stomach the fox was immediatley sealed within Naruto. "This leaves one more thing.." He performed the last handseals of his life. Death came up behind him and grabbed him with an arm coming out his abdomen and then whispered something in his ears "WHAT ARE YOUR LAST WISHES" His voice was the scariest thing Minato had ever heard. "Kushina come he said. Death's arm went right through his chest and into his wife'smas well. "My last wishes is for you to help seal the Bijuu inside my son and give him the rest of our chakra." The death God did as told and took the Hokage and his wife back to where he came. Minato and Kushina said their emotianal goodbyes to their one day old son before they disappeared. Naruto started crying but no one could hear his screams he was alone. Alone.... He would soon no that word for the rest of his life but this was just the beggining.

Back to dead Obito

Obito pulled himself up and out of the crater. His neck was snapped and his left arm was just hanging, it was broken and his leg was limp. "Dammit their strong thank God for immortality." He snapped his leg back into place. He cracked his arm and he kicked his leg out. *Crack* Crick* Craaaaack* the bnes went. "Better" He said smiling then his mouth turned to a frown. "THE CHAKRA'S GONE" where the hell was it he thought. His temperature was rising. He started to sweat. "Calm yourssseelf" said a man with a snake like voice. Obito quickly grabbed his mask and attached it to his face he turned around to face one of the legendary sannin,Orochimaru. "He's in the child and the father is dead." Obito sighed behind the mask. "Any way you still have to pay me back." Obito had almost forgotten. "I promise you the Uchiha boy, Sasuke." Orochimaru frowned. "You tease me what about the brother" he hissed. "Trust me you'd rather have Sasuke." Obito smiled under his mask. "Fine" Orochimaru said than his body turned to snakes and they all scattered running in diffrent directions. "Obito thought about how he could make this happen then he smiled. "Time to introduce myself to Itachi Uchiha." he fell into the ground disappearing.


Stay tuned for part 2 feel free to pm me any suggestions and criticisms also you can help me with the writing process or write it here I don't care thanks for reading you guys.

 

[Aotsuki Katsumi]

Umm, just a heads up, don´t do 3 posts in a row, might get troublesome.

 

[Ballin Sasuke]

Umm, just a heads up, don´t do 3 posts in a row, might get troublesome.

Explain

 

[Dino]

Explain

Why post in three different posts when you could just add everything on the first post?

That's what he meant, well i think

 

[Ballin Sasuke]

Why post in three different posts when you could just add everything on the first post?

That's what he meant, well i think

O that makes sense im a total retard

I feel like this story is crap so far do any of you like it cause if you do I'll keep writin