[Romance] That's The Way Of My Love

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Kishi Uzumaki

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Years have been passing one by one ,
our love is still going strong as ever ,
the differences we have never been gone ,
maybe they will be laying there forever ,
but we always learned to work them out ,
now we have a unshakable bond ,
always believing future will be bright ,
not even shaken by a bigger flood .

there's no words to explain them ,
these feelings as we feels them ,
it's something only known to our hearts ,
for ones who said we can't succeed ,
we just have to say although different in views ,
what we hold in our hearts is the same ,
a passion to live our lives happily ,
love is the only thing that's heavenly .

i don't want these rainy days to be gone ,
so i can be lost in your overwhelming love ,
and hold you tightly forever in my arms ,
looking deeply in to your eyes , in days and nights ,
i will never let those twinkles in your eyes ,
wither away just because life's hard ,
girl ! till my breaths are taken away from me ,
it's only you , only you , that's the way of my love

 

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i really liked the beginning, i loved the rhymes... to bad you didnt continue that way^^ but nevertheless its nice, GJ! :win:
 

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