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(Jorōgumo Doku no Jutsu) - Jorō Spider Venom Technique
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A (30 per bite; Cumulative effects lead to death)
Description: After extensive research on the Jorō Spider, those of the spider contract were able to increase their lethality in combat by learning how to spit venom or give a venomous bite, namely that from a Jorō Spider. The venom is delivered either through spitting at an opponent or through biting the skin, which punctures it and delivers 30 damage. In order for the venom to take effect, it must make contact with the skin otherwise it is ineffective. The poison itself is slow acting if done through physical contact however if bitten the effects are accelerated. Through spitting, the venom takes a turn (of the opponent) to be able to penetrate through the pores of the skin and then beginning to take effect at the end of the following turn, causing varied effects as time goes on. For the venom to continue its effects when spit, the opponent must be exposed to it continuously. Through biting the opponent and injecting the venom, the effects (2nd effect on the list) happen faster, taking effect after the first turn. The user only has to bite once for the effects to continue on by themselves without a need to consecutively bite the opponent. The effects (spitting & biting) stack with each other and if used in combination (i.e. spitting then biting) they only carry on from where they left off. The user also has the option of using his specific venom on his weapons (i.e. sword, shuriken, kunai, senbon, etc.) by spitting his venom on it but the effects remain the same as if spitting, taking effect the more the opponent is exposed to the venom however can be countered by cleaning the weapons with water or evaporating the venom with fire. While the spitting at an opponent can be used 3x per battle, the user can only perform a venomous bite once per battle. Spitting venom on one's weapons and/or ninja tools can be done without restriction. Like most venomous spider's, the user is unaffected by this specific poison (Jorō Spider venom) if used against him or ingested.
1st Effect = No noticeable affliction
2nd Effect = Slowed reaction and cognitive actions
3rd Effect = Blurred vision, slightly slurred speech
4th Effect = Involuntary coughing, bleeding from eyes, nose, mouth and ears
5th Effect = At the end of the turn victim dies
Note: Can only be used by signers of the Spider Contract
Note: Can only spit 3x per battle and perform one bite per battle
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A (30 per bite; Cumulative effects lead to death)
Description: After extensive research on the Jorō Spider, those of the spider contract were able to increase their lethality in combat by learning how to spit venom or give a venomous bite, namely that from a Jorō Spider. The venom is delivered either through spitting at an opponent or through biting the skin, which punctures it and delivers 30 damage. In order for the venom to take effect, it must make contact with the skin otherwise it is ineffective. The poison itself is slow acting if done through physical contact however if bitten the effects are accelerated. Through spitting, the venom takes a turn (of the opponent) to be able to penetrate through the pores of the skin and then beginning to take effect at the end of the following turn, causing varied effects as time goes on. For the venom to continue its effects when spit, the opponent must be exposed to it continuously. Through biting the opponent and injecting the venom, the effects (2nd effect on the list) happen faster, taking effect after the first turn. The user only has to bite once for the effects to continue on by themselves without a need to consecutively bite the opponent. The effects (spitting & biting) stack with each other and if used in combination (i.e. spitting then biting) they only carry on from where they left off. The user also has the option of using his specific venom on his weapons (i.e. sword, shuriken, kunai, senbon, etc.) by spitting his venom on it but the effects remain the same as if spitting, taking effect the more the opponent is exposed to the venom however can be countered by cleaning the weapons with water or evaporating the venom with fire. While the spitting at an opponent can be used 3x per battle, the user can only perform a venomous bite once per battle. Spitting venom on one's weapons and/or ninja tools can be done without restriction. Like most venomous spider's, the user is unaffected by this specific poison (Jorō Spider venom) if used against him or ingested.
1st Effect = No noticeable affliction
2nd Effect = Slowed reaction and cognitive actions
3rd Effect = Blurred vision, slightly slurred speech
4th Effect = Involuntary coughing, bleeding from eyes, nose, mouth and ears
5th Effect = At the end of the turn victim dies
Note: Can only be used by signers of the Spider Contract
Note: Can only spit 3x per battle and perform one bite per battle
(Supaidāsēji no Tsūru) - Tools of the Spider Sage
Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15-30 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: 30-60
Description: After mastering the use of creating webs from one's sweat pores, the user takes advantage of the amount that is created in the hands during heightened states of emotion, particularly in battle. By channeling his chakra into one's sweat pores on the palms, the user is able to create strong, webbing constructs of steel-like quality, have a blue glow to them, and are limited only by his imagination (within reason). While the constructs are made in short range and through the user's palms, when thrown they can reach up to midrange however it should be noted that the larger the construct, the slower the speed. The webbing constructs are made into dense webbing, maxing at A-Rank strength (strength is divided among tools) however he can only create A-Rank constructs three times per battle. Upon the user's will, he can either cause the constructs to explode into an adhesive webbing that can be used to trap an opponent or other supplementary uses like blinding him by covering his eyes for example or release a sticky adhesive from his palms to use in tandem with taijutsu. The constructs follow normal strengths and weaknesses.
Note: A rank usage requires a two turn cooldown in which only the C rank version can be used.
Note: A-Rank usage can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Must have signed the Spider Contract
Note: Useable 4 times in total
Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15-30 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: 30-60
Description: After mastering the use of creating webs from one's sweat pores, the user takes advantage of the amount that is created in the hands during heightened states of emotion, particularly in battle. By channeling his chakra into one's sweat pores on the palms, the user is able to create strong, webbing constructs of steel-like quality, have a blue glow to them, and are limited only by his imagination (within reason). While the constructs are made in short range and through the user's palms, when thrown they can reach up to midrange however it should be noted that the larger the construct, the slower the speed. The webbing constructs are made into dense webbing, maxing at A-Rank strength (strength is divided among tools) however he can only create A-Rank constructs three times per battle. Upon the user's will, he can either cause the constructs to explode into an adhesive webbing that can be used to trap an opponent or other supplementary uses like blinding him by covering his eyes for example or release a sticky adhesive from his palms to use in tandem with taijutsu. The constructs follow normal strengths and weaknesses.
Note: A rank usage requires a two turn cooldown in which only the C rank version can be used.
Note: A-Rank usage can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Must have signed the Spider Contract
Note: Useable 4 times in total