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( Sennika: Zōfuku ) - Sage Transformation:
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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30(-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user would transform his body,
coating his entire skin with a fresh layer of thin
flesh. Like the user's normal DNA make up, the
flesh is abundant in nature and constantly
absorbs nature energy. The flesh while draining the
user's chakra, passively and rapidly collects nature
energy from the surrounding than the user could
normally do. In turn, it passively and constantly
leeches the foreign chakra into the user's chakra
while the user being used to natural energy and
due to the nature of their DNA, won't be affected.
The constant infusion of Nature chakra would
constantly break the user from genjutsu safe for
Mangekyou genjutsu. The skin layer does not offer
any defensive ability and is only durable like the
user's own skin. The skin layer does not disturb
the user from doing any other things like he would
normally.
- Twice per battle
- Two turns in between usage
- Last 3 turns​
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Honestly in simplest terms it's just an advanced application of the basic principle behind every single Sage Transformation technique and the clan itself in general. This principle being the ability to draw in and use ambient Natural Energy to go through rudimentary transformations. This works on that principle, drawing in additional Natural Energy more than the user naturally does to go through those transformations I had a similar idea a while back without the additional layer of skin where the user would go through a process similar to the Complete Sage Transformation without needing to undergo the full transformation entering a heightened state of awareness. However your technique does this by creating an additional layer of flesh that draws in more Natural Energy than the users own epidermis. My personal opinion is that it's like adding another layer to the epidermis though you can correct me if I'm wrong but usually the body has three layers of skin. These layers are called the epidermis, the upper most layer of skin, the dermis, the second most layer of skin and finally the hypodermis the lowest layer of skin. The epidermis is the outer most layer of the three layers that make up the skin. This skin layer provides a barrier to infection from environmental pathogens and regulates the amount of water released from the body into the atmosphere through transepidermal water loss. The outermost part of the epidermis is composed of stratified layers of flattened cells that overlies a basal layer composed of columnar cells arranged perpendicularly. The rows of cells develop from the stem cells in the basal layer. ENaCs are found to be expressed in all layers of the epidermis. he dermis or corium is a layer of skin between the epidermis (with which it makes up the cutis) and subcutaneous tissues, that primarily consists of dense irregular connective tissue and cushions the body from stress and strain. It is divided into two layers, the superficial area adjacent to the epidermis called the papillary region and a deep thicker area known as the reticular dermis. The dermis is tightly connected to the epidermis through a basement membrane. Structural components of the dermis are collagen, elastic fibers, and extrafibrillar matrix. The hypodermis houses the blood vessels and subcutaneous tissue such as fat, connective tissue and even the follicles of deep rooted hair. It's more the area that houses these substance than a direct layer of skin like the other two.

So by doing this it temporarily magnifies the users natural resistance to genjutsu, I believe if you wanted to you could expand this by editing the technique to include any mind probing techniques as well as if you create it so that the pores stop the skin and flesh itself from absorbing gaseous substances you could gain a temporary immunity to gas based poisons though that would take an update to accomplish. This is done by creating a continual influx of Natural Energy that each turn spikes the users usual chakra flow more than their passive ability to draw in Natural Energy does each turn creating a substantial burst of inward flowing Natural Energy which is forced to crudely balance with the users own chakra as Sage Transformation users cannot be turned to stone. So, it boosts the usual immunity from C-rank genjutsu up to everything below MS. Due to the wording this means everything E through Forbidden Rank including Elemental genjutsu and even Kurama clan genjutsu which allows for a way to passively defend from genjutsu. A good example of something similar would be my Weapon X medicine which creates a large influx of Natural Energy breaking genjutsu in a similar matter while healing the user. The reason I wanted this technique was because it gives me an additional way to combat genjutsu in either a quick or passive manner, I hate genjutsu, always have probably always will. I don't like using it and I don't like it being used upon me I tend to only use it when I feel like it can be used as a joke. That's not to say I don't have decent genjutsu techniques, I have one given to me by Leaf that restricts the opponent down to B rank techniques making it impossible to break through most chakra surge based techniques forcing them to rely on pain. Anyway if you've gotten this far, good on you I just wrote this out because I wanted to see how long you'd read before being like "eh **** this shit he's just bullshitting me."

Anyway. Here.

(Senninka: Enjin; Reshipurokakuchō) - Sage Transformation: Engine; Recipro Extend
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+30 for Recipro Burst)
Damage: N/A (+20 to taijutsu actions for Recipro Extend, +40 to taijutsu actions for Recipro Burst)
Description: A Sage Transformation clansmen creates six small vents upon their forearms, calves and shoulders creating six somewhat rudimentary combustion engines powered by chakra in the specific limbs that work like internal pistons pumping chakra and newly created energy out of the exhausts. Creating these cavities, pistons and exhausts mimic what can already easily be done by a Sage Transformation clansmen with ( Kassokuken ) - Living Wall Fist but it is done in a much more refined and specialized way. This cavity amasses chakra concentrating and molding it into several fine streams of chakra mixed with oxygen from the users body, and energy created by the piston that are constantly released from the vents and valves increasing the Sage Transformation clansmen's speed, dexterity and strength by putting extra force, energy and strength behind their movements while attacking or running. While using this technique running is more akin to gliding across the ground at high speed with the legs needing to work half as hard to get this increase in speed due to the increase in force, energy and strength. This is similar in usage to ( Senninka: Funsha Atooshi ) - Sage Transformation: Jet Booster Boost but again in a much more refined manner with the effect being a constant.
These engine like constructs increase the users speed x1.5 increasing their all around movement speed including both their running speed and the fine dexterity required for close quarters taijutsu usage being able to move limbs at a heightened speed. However these engines require that the exhaust pipes on the back of the arms, legs and shoulders remain clear of obstructions in order to function properly. If clogged the chakra will build up with no place to go and could become explosive in nature causing damage to the Sage Transformation clansmen dealing 20 damage to them if left clogged for two turns. Recipro Extend adds an additional 20 damage to any taijutsu attack used while active. The Sage Transformation clansmen's own blood works as a coolant that cools the internal combustion engines stopping them from becoming extremely hot due to friction but this has the effect of heating up the entire body to a slight degree causing them to breathe heavier and sweat more as to release the created heat causing them 15 damage spread out over their body causing muscle pain. This isn't substantial damage just muscle wear and tear.

Engine; Recipro Burst: By releasing all of the chakra that is being manipulated or molded as well as doubling it the user can increase their speed momentarily by x2.5 but this deactivates the transformation forcing them to return to their previous state after it's deactivation this doesn't effect other sage transformation techniques or transformations leaving them unaffected. This also has the added effect of clearing the exhausts of any debris if they happen to be clogged. The explosive force is so great that the vents make a loud audible kick-back noise that signals the opponent to the activation of the ability. This is in essence like shifting an engine into a higher gear thus gaining higher performance allowing the Sage Transformation clansmen to go faster and hit harder by burning and releasing his chakra at a higher capacity using the piston like engines to force chakra out of their body at a higher rate than just releasing it. Recipro Burst adds 40 damage to any taijutsu action. After the deactivation of Recipro Burst the Sage Transformation user takes 15 additional damage as their muscles cramp slightly from being overworked. This reduces their speed by 1 rank for the next turn.


Note: Recipro Extend can last for five turns and can only be used twice per battle
Note: Recipro Burst can only last for two turns and deactivates Recipro Burst after those two turns
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Honestly in simplest terms it's just an advanced application of the basic principle behind every single Sage Transformation technique and the clan itself in general. This principle being the ability to draw in and use ambient Natural Energy to go through rudimentary transformations. This works on that principle, drawing in additional Natural Energy more than the user naturally does to go through those transformations I had a similar idea a while back without the additional layer of skin where the user would go through a process similar to the Complete Sage Transformation without needing to undergo the full transformation entering a heightened state of awareness. However your technique does this by creating an additional layer of flesh that draws in more Natural Energy than the users own epidermis. My personal opinion is that it's like adding another layer to the epidermis though you can correct me if I'm wrong but usually the body has three layers of skin. These layers are called the epidermis, the upper most layer of skin, the dermis, the second most layer of skin and finally the hypodermis the lowest layer of skin. The epidermis is the outer most layer of the three layers that make up the skin. This skin layer provides a barrier to infection from environmental pathogens and regulates the amount of water released from the body into the atmosphere through transepidermal water loss. The outermost part of the epidermis is composed of stratified layers of flattened cells that overlies a basal layer composed of columnar cells arranged perpendicularly. The rows of cells develop from the stem cells in the basal layer. ENaCs are found to be expressed in all layers of the epidermis. he dermis or corium is a layer of skin between the epidermis (with which it makes up the cutis) and subcutaneous tissues, that primarily consists of dense irregular connective tissue and cushions the body from stress and strain. It is divided into two layers, the superficial area adjacent to the epidermis called the papillary region and a deep thicker area known as the reticular dermis. The dermis is tightly connected to the epidermis through a basement membrane. Structural components of the dermis are collagen, elastic fibers, and extrafibrillar matrix. The hypodermis houses the blood vessels and subcutaneous tissue such as fat, connective tissue and even the follicles of deep rooted hair. It's more the area that houses these substance than a direct layer of skin like the other two.

So by doing this it temporarily magnifies the users natural resistance to genjutsu, I believe if you wanted to you could expand this by editing the technique to include any mind probing techniques as well as if you create it so that the pores stop the skin and flesh itself from absorbing gaseous substances you could gain a temporary immunity to gas based poisons though that would take an update to accomplish. This is done by creating a continual influx of Natural Energy that each turn spikes the users usual chakra flow more than their passive ability to draw in Natural Energy does each turn creating a substantial burst of inward flowing Natural Energy which is forced to crudely balance with the users own chakra as Sage Transformation users cannot be turned to stone. So, it boosts the usual immunity from C-rank genjutsu up to everything below MS. Due to the wording this means everything E through Forbidden Rank including Elemental genjutsu and even Kurama clan genjutsu which allows for a way to passively defend from genjutsu. A good example of something similar would be my Weapon X medicine which creates a large influx of Natural Energy breaking genjutsu in a similar matter while healing the user. The reason I wanted this technique was because it gives me an additional way to combat genjutsu in either a quick or passive manner, I hate genjutsu, always have probably always will. I don't like using it and I don't like it being used upon me I tend to only use it when I feel like it can be used as a joke. That's not to say I don't have decent genjutsu techniques, I have one given to me by Leaf that restricts the opponent down to B rank techniques making it impossible to break through most chakra surge based techniques forcing them to rely on pain. Anyway if you've gotten this far, good on you I just wrote this out because I wanted to see how long you'd read before being like "eh **** this shit he's just bullshitting me."

Anyway. Here.



GL;HF.
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