no p ..want dual poem to soloe teh h8ers?? me and u??Thank you, sensei.
Hmm...I wonder what influenced such a change in style. As a very experienced poet i believe poetry is an art and is whatever the writer makes it to be, and all art have a voice and deserve credit. I've seen what you can write and I know this isn't your best, but your art still deserves credit and respect.Test tube baby born in a lab,
Who ever thought he will be this fab.
Test tube baby, Orochimaru's creation,
The true Tobidara, the savior, the salvation.
Mitsuki, Mitsuki, perhaps Ototsuki,
Has rinnegan, tenseigan and rides a Suzuki.
Chakra modes sage modes all so obsolete,
Mitsuki is a dragon, his power complete.
Tobidara has risen, the plan is nearing its completion
The test tube baby will bring the revelation
He will burp and destroy the world's fauna
Then he will fart turning teh world to a sauna.
As everyone is suffocating and dying from the heat
He will sit on his Suzuki neat
He will drive randomly TBBing the mass,
Until he stops because he ran out of gas.
He picks his nose and throws.down a booger,
The planet goes boom and melts like sugar
Floating in space he ferociously sneezes,
A sneeze so strong the universe freezes.
The end.
he inherited my Tobidara will...he is just awesome nowHmm...I wonder what influenced such a change in style. As a very experienced poet i believe poetry is an art and is whatever the writer makes it to be, and all art have a voice and deserve credit. I've seen what you can write and I know this isn't your best, but your art still deserves credit and respect.
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I do feel that you have done much greater works in the past. I'm sure you are just joking around on the Base lol.
#Peaceout
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I have transcended.he inherited my Tobidara will...he is just awesome now