[Action] Test Tube Baby >>> Teh destroyer of the Universe!!!

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<div class="bbWrapper">What if WE were Tobidara all along?</div>
 

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Test tube baby born in a lab,
Who ever thought he will be this fab.

Test tube baby, Orochimaru's creation,
The true Tobidara, the savior, the salvation.

Mitsuki, Mitsuki, perhaps Ototsuki,
Has rinnegan, tenseigan and rides a Suzuki.

Chakra modes sage modes all so obsolete,
Mitsuki is a dragon, his power complete.

Tobidara has risen, the plan is nearing its completion
The test tube baby will bring the revelation

He will burp and destroy the world's fauna
Then he will fart turning teh world to a sauna.

As everyone is suffocating and dying from the heat
He will sit on his Suzuki neat

He will drive randomly TBBing the mass,
Until he stops because he ran out of gas.

He picks his nose and throws.down a booger,
The planet goes boom and melts like sugar

Floating in space he ferociously sneezes,
A sneeze so strong the universe freezes.

The end.
Hmm...I wonder what influenced such a change in style. As a very experienced poet i believe poetry is an art and is whatever the writer makes it to be, and all art have a voice and deserve credit. I've seen what you can write and I know this isn't your best, but your art still deserves credit and respect.
:flakez:

I do feel that you have done much greater works in the past. I'm sure you are just joking around on the Base lol.

#Peaceout
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Hmm...I wonder what influenced such a change in style. As a very experienced poet i believe poetry is an art and is whatever the writer makes it to be, and all art have a voice and deserve credit. I've seen what you can write and I know this isn't your best, but your art still deserves credit and respect.
:flakez:

I do feel that you have done much greater works in the past. I'm sure you are just joking around on the Base lol.

#Peaceout
:tea:
he inherited my Tobidara will...he is just awesome now
 
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