[Adventure] Tear the Walls, Cross the Bridges

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I have to climb these walls,
Or bring them down to the ground.
I got to cross this bridges;
The river's all around.
New paths to be traced,
Before the secret's found.

Too long I have wandered,
Barely escaping fate,
Taking steps foolishly placed;
Where others would hesitate.

Those would be content,
To be alone in darkness.
Yet those as me wish not to be,
Slaves in this world of the oppressed.

We must climb this high walls,
Or tear them to the ground.
And we must cross these bridges;
Deep rivers in which we would've drowned.
Up life's roads we must crawl,
Before the answer's found.
 

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Amazing as always :) but this my favourite one now even better than Regret, souls eulogy, Crossroads and Chaos in Decay.(probably because of it's optimistic tone) :)

Keep on writing sir you are excellent. :win:
 
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I really like it, however I prefered the other with the guy questioning his lover, what would she do to avoid him if he was the DEATH. At first they seem all too general but towards the end you become more specific and that's good.
 
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Fiend, sir yes sir!
Thx Byron, glad you're enjoying, I tend to do some poems as mini stories, unwrapping and mindblowing towards their end. I'm glad you noticed and liked that aspect. I wrote the poem you're talking about to my gf in hschool xD
 
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Fiend, sir yes sir!
Thx Byron, glad you're enjoying, I tend to do some poems as mini stories, unwrapping and mindblowing towards their end. I'm glad you noticed and liked that aspect. I wrote the poem you're talking about to my gf in hschool xD
Ah that's sweet, I thought you were only a romantic guy who was simply expressing that to no one XD (not in a strange way, I did at as well in the past), what did she think of it? :)

P.S I woud laugh so much if she's like "That thing is shit" XDXDXDXD
 

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Ah that's sweet, I thought you were only a romantic guy who was simply expressing that to no one XD (not in a strange way, I did at as well in the past), what did she think of it? :)

P.S I woud laugh so much if she's like "That thing is shit" XDXDXDXD
Actually she was quite in love with my poetic skills :)
 
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