Taming the Thunder with -Khallil- Senpai

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Good.. You're probably wondering why I shot those fireballs into the sky, right? Well, that was my purpose after all. Look above you, look at the clouds and the sky. Do you see that? Exactly.. The fireballs I shot into the air, caused the atmosphere to heat up. Because of that, a lot of thunderclouds are created, those are charged with electricity. That's a HUGE amount of electricity, and it's impossible to create all that electricity by yourself, so instead, I heated up the atmosphere so electricity would be generated in the sky, and you could take control of the lightning above in the sky with your chidori. Do that, take control of the lightning with your chidori and shape it into a dragon-looking beast. Cause the lightning to strike the forest, and destroy a huge part.


(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.



Kirin has sooooooooo many disadvantages, and a few advantages, but if I were you, I wouldn't try to use this is battle. In all my time on NB, I never actually saw someone succeeding in using kirin xD
 

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(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.
Description: As now I have a chidori in my hand and senpai's fire ninjutsu has heated up the atmosphere and a huge lightning clouds are formed in the sky. I now rise my hand towards the clouds and manipulate the lightning and shape mainpulate it such that I form a Dragon Imaged lightning from it and stike the forest nearby therby destroying most part of the forest.

Advantage: Probably the fastest lightning techniques ever. Only S/T techniques and Obsolute defence( like susano) can counter against it.Long range ninjutsu and the damage and the are affected by this technique is very very high.

Disadvantage: There is a lot of disadvantages for this technique. The user has to heat up the atmosphere with a fire style technique The user may lose one turn without affecting the opponent in this. and also the opponent can easily predict that the user will be using Kirin and so he will take all measures to keep the user engaged until the lightning cloud fades away. the user must also perform kirin and then control the lightning. while doing so the user is too open for the opponent to attack making him to fail the move. This jutsu can be succesfully completed only when the opponent is paralysed for atleast 2 turns so that he can move for 2 turns or I can be used as a finaly finishing blow for a severly weakened opponent who can even move or dodge any technique
 

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Great!
Okay, you really must know this about kirin:
The thunderclouds are formed after the opponent's first turn.
so it's basically like this
your 1st turn: You're shooting a long range at least B rank fire technique into the sky
the opponent's 1st turn: He can try to cancel out the fire technique. After the opponent's turn the thunderclouds are formed
Your 2nd turn: Now you can create the chidori and kirin. Require 2 jutsu slots
opponent's 2nd turn: he can prevent you from using kirin, and if you don't perform the kirin, the opponent might create a chidori and use thunderclouds as an advantage, and perform the kirin himself.

If nobody succeeds to perform kirin, rain will start to fall over the battlefield, and if you want to use kirin again, you would have to repeat everything. Understand?
 

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God damit this jutsu is too complicated.

Alright senpai I understand it. so basically it's like you have to like create a clone engage the opponent without making him cancelling the fire jutsu. then use the clone to attack him and prevent him from using chidori.. and finally give him the tast of the god damn kirin. :)

thats sounds zzz...

alright senpai I understood all the risk and disadvantages of kirin :)
 

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that could be one way of doing it.

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the user. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The Thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

While you're still standing on the hill, cover your hands in with lightning chakra and create a chidori in each hand. Clap your hands together and unleash a massive amount of lightning, forming a powerful thunderbolt, directed at my clone.



(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

Perform a few handseals and release lightnign chakra out of your body, creating a blinding light, blinding my clone. Tbh, I really don't understand why this technique is in the list :s It is probably the most useless technique ever. But it was a jutsu used in the manga, thus it was made here. I can tell at least 5 disadvantages.



(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

Create a massive chidori in your hand and point your palm forwards and unleash the lightning chakra, creating a massive lightning blast that spreads out of your hand, outwards and forwards, killing my clone.

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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the user. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The Thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.
Description: As I stand at the hill , I cover my hands with Lightning and perform a Chidori in each hand . Now I clap the hands together and unleash a massive amount of lightning chakra to form a powerful thunderblt at senpai's clone and hit him with it.

Advantage: The damage and the speed of the jutsu is remarkable. the area affected and the range of the jutsu is also a plus point for this jutsu. The thunderbolt can even create a giant crater.

Disadvantage: The disadvantage is that this jutsu cant be used in short range as the area affected by this jutsu ic very large such that if the user uses this jutsu in short range the user may damage himself from the jutsu.


(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns
Description: I know perform the required hand seals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger and create a massive lightning chakra that appears as a blinding light that appears from my body and it blinds senpai's clone.

Advantage: this jutsu can be used to blind the enemy and can freely cast upto A rank genjutsu as a follow up attack therby creating a nice genjutsu combo.can be used both in short and long range. can be used as a distraction.

Disadvantage: Too much chakra for a jutsu that has no damage effect. An opponent with a sharingan can see through the attack. cannot use any S rank genjutsu after this attack. can be used once in every three turns. totally useless jutsu if it doesnt follow with the genjutsu. will block the area of sight of both the jutsu caster and his ally.



(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.
Description:I now focus a large amount of lightning chakra in my hand and form a massive chidori from it. then I point it forward and and unleash the chakra creating a massive blast of lightning spreading from my handsand hits senpai's clone.

Advantage: A powerful chidori varient with blast property and range is resonably increased which make it more badass. and also since the attack is a lightning blast the covers a resonably large area and the range is short it will be difficult for the opponent to dodge.

Disadvantage: If it's used in short range it will be tuff to dodge but in midrange considering the blast radius skilled shinobi can dodge it.
 

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great!
About Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar, it's very useless because you can do the same with just throwing a flash bomb on the ground, in fact that is even faster, has more advantages and doesn't require a jutsu slot.


( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

Create a chidori in your hand and rush towards my clone. Strike my clone and manipulate the shape of the chidori, causing it to extend into a lightning spear, impaling my clone and sending him into the air. Generate a powerful lightning explosion at the end of the spear, dealing damage to him and sending him back to the ground.


[video=youtube;CFTRV7U8Svo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CFTRV7U8Svo[/video]
 

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( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
Description: I now concentrate my lightning chakra in my hand and Create a Chidori and start to run towards the clone. I now hit the clone with the Chidori and shape manipulate it into a lightning spear and hurtle the clone into the air. then I increase the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explotion at the end of the spear sending senpai's clone back to ground.

Advantage: A normal Chidori can be converted into a very gruesome and powerful lightning spear that can hurl the opponent into the air. The intensity of the lightning ca be increased to create a powerful electric explotion at the end of the spear to send the oppoenent to the ground so that he will be in mid range.

Disadvantage: Since the initial attack is a normal Chidori without cornering the opponent or without restricting the movement of the opponent the inital strike will be difficult and sometimes may fail.

 

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Excellent! We have finished the lightning training for now
There isy still one more technique left to learn, but you need to learn kage buinshin first, after that you can ask to be taught in this technique:

( Raiton: Raiden ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (Mid range connection)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone. Then, each of them will activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first have a shadow clone in the field.

Have a lot of fun, teaching you was a lot of fun! I expect some threads in the battle arena from you, showcasing your skills, and defending Kumo in the NW.

when you have kage buinshin you can learn the last technique, Lightning chain
 
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Excellent! We have finished the lightning training for now
There isy still one more technique left to learn, but you need to learn kage buinshin first, after that you can ask to be taught in this technique:

( Raiton: Raiden ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (Mid range connection)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone. Then, each of them will activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first have a shadow clone in the field.

Have a lot of fun, teaching you was a lot of fun! I expect some threads in the battle arena from you, showcasing your skills, and defending Kumo in the NW.

when you have kage buinshin you can learn the last technique, Lightning chain

Thankyou so much senpai.!
Will learn Kage bunshin and learn the last technique. :)
Sure I will make best use of the tech's you have taught me in battles.
Hope to train with you some more time in the near future.
Thankyou so much. :)

:bye: :win:
 
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