Tales of Hikusa Chapter 6

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(Here’s the long awaited chapter, my best I think! I released it early for you! Enjoy and please leave comments! Note: I try to keep to the Naruto storyline even though this is a fanfic! This chapter strays from that a little! And I need not describe how Sasuke looks, because if you don’t know that by now wow! I try my best for you to envision the fight! The jutsu are all directly from Narutopedia if you can’t visualize them. Sorry if I don’t do well!)

The Konoha training ground looks completely wrecked. After a month of grueling training with Kakashi, there stands Hi. “Hi, you are ready”, Kakashi said. Hi now considerably stronger, leaped towards the village. Kakashi had provided the shelter he needed because Kakashi felt bad about what happened to Hi’s mother. Hi proceeded to the Hokage’s office.

“Uchiha Hikusa. Your name means “Fire grass” to represent your ties to both the Lands of Grass and Fire, but today you become a ninja for the hidden leaf. I, Tsunade, Hokage, proclaim that you are a jonin of Konoha just as your parents were before you. They would have been proud” Hi took his headband and proudly tied it around his forehead. “I would have made you an ANBU, but you refused-“

“Because I would never work under such a vile man as Danzo! He ordered the killing of my parents, and even objected to this ceremony today!”

“I understand, but you would have done well there as Kakashi did”

“Ma’am, thank you for this honor, but I have one request”

“Yes?”

“I would like to kill Uchiha Itachi”

Tsunade looked extremely surprised. “WHY?”

“Itachi murdered my mother and clan.”

‘Another Sasuke’ thought Tsunade.

“Also, he is a member of the Akatsuki. I will. I must!”

“Hmm… Fine. You will track down Itachi and CAPTURE him for details pertaining to the Akatsuki, but you will be angry. Danzo’s team knows the whereabouts of Itachi best. You must speak to him only.”

“BUT-“

“NO OBJECTIONS OR YOU WILL NOT TAKE THIS MISSION!”

“Fine” murmured Hi, exiting full of vexation.

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Later that day, Hi finally chose to meet Danzo at ANBU’S headquarters. As he walked down the gloomy halls, he shivered with disgust. There stood the old man with his cane staring at Hi. “Uchiha Hikusa, I have been waiting for your arrival.”

Finally, archenemies meet and Hi answers after gulping, “Hello sir. I am here as you no doubt already know for information about Uchiha Itachi.”

“Yes, but I will not relinquish that information to a naïve boy such as yourself! Itachi is an extremely powerful ninja! I know, he was one of my subordinates. A boy such as yourself could never-“

“I am a jonin!”

“Even Kakashi, a powerful jonin who also was one of my subordinates, could not defeat him!”

A long silence occurred. A sensei that Hi admired as being strong couldn’t defeat him! “Then, whom should I take my revenge upon?”

“Uchiha…Sasuke.”

“He’s innocent! He hasn’t hurt the Uchiha!”

“You consider yourself a jonin of this village, Konoha! I am an elder of this village I love! While he has not hurt the Uchiha, he has hurt Konoha as a rogue ninja who resides with Orochimaru, an evil rogue ninja!”

“I’ve heard of Orochimaru…”

“Go then, and find Sasuke! Here is where he is!” Danzo handed Hi a scroll. ‘Now he can finish what Sai started’ “Oh, and if you ever need Wind training, contact me.” Danzo forged a fake miniscule grin, and Hi smiled back.

“Definitely”
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“Return soon, Sasuke..”, a pale man cried.

“Right” He strolled through the brown plains for training. It had been three days since Hi’s confrontation with Danzo. He refused to go with Kakashi as Tsunade intended and left secretly alone. Endless shuriken flew towards Sasuke. He calmly tried to dodge and deflect them, but had a difficult time doing so. He eventually perished under them. Hi jumped out.

“How easy! Itachi was supposed to be too difficult and now Sasuke is too-”
A sword aimed at Hi and Sasuke asked, “Tell me everything you know about Itachi.” Hi jumped away and threw two kunai, which Sasuke easily deflected. “Obviously, you’re an Uchiha, I can see the Sharingan. I didn’t know others survived besides Itachi and me. Now, tell me everything you-” Hi had already leaped behind him and used Fire Style: Great Fire Dragon Jutsu. ‘He’s fast’, thought Sasuke who dodged the attack and landed on the ground. It crumbled revealing another fire dragon. ‘Another one?’ Sasuke met his demise.

“Humph”, said Hi. Again Sasuke flew in the air behind Hi, Sharingan activated and his sword streaming with Chidori. ‘Lightning…channeled?’ Hi duck and then kicked and Sasuke blocked both jumping away, but two more dragons appeared on either side of Sasuke.

“TWO MORE?” He stuck his sword into the ground and launched himself from it towards Hi at lightning speed with Chidori. He sliced Hi’s chest who then coughed up blood and went away. After the two dragons exploded, the sword flew wildly in the air and Hi caught it. “Tell me everything you know about Itachi, NOW. You are not worthy to be my opponent.”

“Not worthy? Take this! FIRE STYLE: FIRE DRAGON FLAME BULLET!” He kneaded the chakra into a genuine looking dragon. ‘This turns anything in its path to ash instantly. He can’t escape because my last dragon form the original justu is behind him and I have his sword. He’ll perish!’

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“You did what?”

“You must understand Lady Hokage that it-”

The Hokage’s assistant walked in. “Ma’am, if I may-”

“Hold on a moment Shizune. UNACCEPTABLE DANZO! SENDING HIM OUT WITHOUT KAKASHI FOR SASUKE? WHEN WE JUST SENT TEAM YAMATO? HOW ABSURD! YOU WANT HIM KILLED? I AM HOKAGE, NOT YOU! YOU BETTER REALIZE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE! KAKSHI MIGHT NOT MAKE IT IN TIME! LEAVE NOW BEFORE I CRUSH EVRY FRAIL BONE IN YOUR BODY!”

“You forget that I am an elder.”

“HOKAGE RANKS ABOVE THAT!”

“It is your fault that the nine tails went wild with Orochimaru. You don’t see the elders rebuking you for that.” With that said, he left.

“Yes, Shizune?”

“You lost the lottery..” Shizune nervously replied and slipped outside.

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Burnt snakes surrounded Sasuke. They instantly became ash as Hi had thought. He glared at Hikusa with an indifferent countenance. “It’s time for me to burn you”, cried Sasuke, “FIRE RELEASE: PHOENIX SAGE FIRE JUSTU” He shot out numerous fireballs at Hi who then quickly dodged and spun around behind Sasuke. “Got’cha” One last fireball smoldered Hi, but it was revealed to be a substitution. ‘Substitution?’ Hi used the Leaf Hurricane against Sasuke right in the stomach that was launched 50 meters away and hit the ground hard. “Ugh!” Sasuke grunted. He looked worn down from that. ‘A simple substitution jutsu tricked me?’

“Not done yet!”, yelled Hi, “LIGHTNING RELEASE: BEAST RUNNING JUTSU!” A lighting bolt with the shape of a wolf sprinted towards Sasuke.

“So you know more than just failing to burn me! CHIDORI NAGASHI!” Lightning spread around Sasuke and successfully deflect Hi’s jutsu. In the aftermath, Hi was gone! “So, he hides. Then, I’ll wait until he surrenders.”

‘I have a plan that might work, but it’ll have to use the jutsu Kakashi taught me and my own. It has to work! I can’t believe he knows the jutsu Kakashi taught me. How? Well, I’ll charge my chakra for a couple minutes, the strike!’
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Kakashi was about a day away from Sasuke and Hi moving extremely quickly. ‘I hope I make it in time!’
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“Come out and end these shenanigans! Tell me about Itachi!” Two minutes later, another lightning beast came out very quickly. “So he continues to fight…fool.”

“You’re the fool! You look worn too!” Sasuke dodged and threw two kunai with explosive tags at him. Two huge explosions occurred.

“You revealed your location. A fatal mistake.” Two hands grabbed Sasuke’s legs form underneath. “What?”

“Or maybe an intelligent move so that I can use my original jutsu: Lightning Style: Lightning Bind!” Electricity shocked and held Sasuke in his place. He shrieked in pain. Hi leaped out and used, “CHIDORI!”

Sasuke used, “CHIDORI NAGASHI!” to counter it and the bind. It was revealed that the “Hi” using Chidori was a lighting clone, which made a new lighting bind. “WHAT THE?”

“Another one of my original jutsu, Lightning Style: Great Thunder Clap!” Lightning flew to encroach Sasuke and crush him.

‘This is bad. I have to use the curse mark’ Sasuke’s body became brown and to grow wings. White light enveloped the scene and the cold shrill of thunder pierced the air.

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White light shined about 100 meters away from Kakashi. ‘What the hell is that? Oh, good job Hi.’

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Blood soaked the ground below Sasuke. His left wing was missing and he looked gaunt and literally shocked. Across from Sasuke lay Hi breathing heavily. ‘Shit! I didn’t finish him! What is he? He has wings! The hell?’

‘I barely survived. Such power! I think he’s out of chakra, and I have space for one more Chidori and one minor jutsu’ “I’ll use,-”

‘WHAT? HE CAN USE MORE JUTSU! NO!’

“Black Chidori!” The chidori in his hand became black as her said and had a creepier sound than the normal Chidori. “I don’t know how you learned the Chidori, and I don’t care, but you’re obviously not going to tell me about Itachi. So, DIE!” He flew towards Hi who tried throw two kunai, but missed. Hi then jumped away and landed on a sprained ankle.

“AH! DAMN IT!” Sasuke pounced, the end was near.

“DYNAMIC ENTRY!” yelled the triumphant Kakashi as he kicked Sasuke right the face. Sasuke landed hard 20 meters away. “Hi, why are you so reckless? What would you have done without me?”

“I had it under control..Say, what technique was that?"

"It was a taijutsu technique my friend Guy used. I used my Sharingan to copy it and I’ve never actually used it before. I thought it would be kind of cool. I think that was awesome! Don’t tell him that though, OK?”

“Right”

Sasuke rose and stared angrily at Kakashi using his heavily bruised face, “Kakashi…”

Kakashi saves the day! A reunion between sensei and student! Will he and Sasuke fight? Find out next time! (Tell me if you liked this or not, and I’ll see if I’ll include it every time!)

What did ya think? I think it’s my best work. Please rep, criticize (RESPECTFULLY), or leave emoticons, but do not remain silent. No comments, then I feel like no one like dit at all. I want around 10. Pretty please?

Oh! And here are links to the other chapters!
 
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nice!!!!
sasuke getting owned would be so much fun!!!
^_^
i like how you separated the scene changes to make it easier for reading.
Thanks so much for commenting! It lets me know that my hard work wasn't in vain. I was kind of reading about Darui when I did this so....now you know where the lightining influence came from.
 

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I was laughing so hard that Sasuke was getting pounded into oblivion:), and the way Kakashi appeared using one of Guy's technique, genius.....good job and keep it up:p
 
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