(I tried to include music links and instructions to spice it up and make the story even cooler, tell what you think of that. The instructions will be in set brackets so that you’re confused. I even listened to it as I wrote! I worked very hard, and this should be as good or even better than 6! Hope you enjoy this!)
[What abilities does Ama have? Will the fight be exciting?]
I quickly ran, activated my byakugan and used, “EIGHT TRIGRAMS EMPTY AIR PALM!” and blasted her away with chakra. “Hi, leave this to me! Only come if I’m in a dire emergency! I am Hyuga Ama of the Hyuga Main House, and I am your opponent!” I stood across from her now destroyed water clone on the river and watched her appear.
“So, you had the element of surprise! Who cares?”
“I was trained Hyuga Neji in the ways of the Gentle Fist, and by Nara Shikamaru as a tactician! My water ninjutsu will cancel yours. I am the worst opponent you could get!”
She was yawning and staring off into space, that rude ingrate! “Sorry, I got bored! Instead of chatting let’s actually see you try to fight. You’re lucky! You get to have fun because I’ll let you think you have a chance and then take you out! I’ll just take him out from the start! Like I said you’re lucky!”
“You’re the one who’s talking!” I prepared for battle, {Play:
“Gotcha now you little tart! WATER STYLE: WATER TORNADO!” As the name suggests, a tornado of water made from the water clone I was fighting flew at me and spun around the vortex! It would have incapacitated me if were not for my shadow clone!
I hid behind the tree, reader! Not because I was afraid, but because I had learned from Shikamaru, although he is much wiser, to plan.{If not already done, stop music} After twenty minutes of isolation, I chose to carry it out. In the middle of my planning she uttered, “COWARD! If you don’t come in twenty minutes I’m taking that as a retreat from an ugly, insignificant, weakling!” Hi burned up when she said that, but suppressed it. He did not want to interfere unless needed. I had to use 8 Trigrams 64 Palms, a close range technique of the gentle fist that seals all 64 of the body’s chakra points, on her if I ever wanted to defeat her. I knew that she used water to shield and attack, so if I wanted to get near her and land the attack, I would need a diversion. First, while hidden, I threw a smoke bomb at her. She used, “WATER STYLE WATER DRAGON BULLET!” that flew out of the smoke and into the air, to try to crush me.
I used, “ROTATION!” A shield of chakra protected me form the dragon and then I leaped up and threw my own specialty weapon. A kunai with a blue smoke bomb flew at her and released the smoke.
“Stupid girl! Another one? What shit are you pulling?” Pardon me, reader, for the foul language she cussed in a lot of her sentences! The blue smoke released however sucks away chakra. “I mold chakra? What the hell are you doing? Oh!” She walked out and there I stood posed for my attack. {Play this now: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dt7GXWOrHkU&feature=related}
“Goodbye!”
“Shit”
I struck each sequence of chakra points mentioned, “8 TRIGARMS 2 PALMS, 4 PALMS, 8 PALMS, 16 PALMS, 32 PLAMS, 8 TRIGRAMS, 64 PALMS!” She flew backward shrieking in pain and coughing in pain. Hi’s eyes were so wide in awe I thought they might fall out. {End music}
She rose. “Humph! I’ll give that to you, but you forgot one thing honey!” my Byakugan observe a sickly yellow chakra emerging in great ferocity, “I’M A JINCHUURIKI! The thorn beetle provides all of the chakra I need and increases my speed and power intensely. I’m shocked you could push to me to bringing it out!”
Hi exclaimed, “I can see the chakra with my Sharingan too! It could probably even be seen without doujutsu!”
Her speed was so fast I couldn’t even see her anymore! She slammed my shadow clone to the ground. “Another one? I would think that the real one did that last attack!”
“Wrong!” I tried to use the air palm, but she was fast and slammed me to the ground, the real me.
“Just kidding! With this chakra, I can sense who’s real and fake! Your buddy’s eyes can too, but you can’t!” My body hurt a lot. I used a little medical ninjutsu to heal myself.
“I won’t let you do that! WATER PRISON JUTSU!” I immediately was trapped in that orb on the river. She thought she had gotten me, but I was able to stay one step ahead of her. {Play this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8W9BFzsgkg} I activated the kunai I had thrown with the chakra sucking ability, and released an intense amount of lightning I “borrowed” from Hi when training. The chakra absorbed was used for it. “What? How? AAAAHHHHHHH!” I explained. She was shocked, and I was free. {End}
“Now then, while you’re stunned! {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBP-4geenUg&feature=related} Right! GENTLE STEP: TWIN LION FISTS!” I struck her numerous times with my new blue lion shaped chakra globs on my fists that sealed multiple chakra points at once and acted as powerful punches. She was utterly mortified and flew back her yellow chakra temporarily sealed. Hi again looked impressed! {End and play this (a very song I think): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9gqr9BeOBl8}
“You little bitch! I’m better, faster, stronger, and smarter than you! I am a more skilled kunoichi in general than you! Then why, why, WHY ARE ALWAYS ONE STEP AHEAD? YOU THINK YOU’RE BETTER? HELL NO! YOU CHOSE THE WRONG GIRL TO F*** WITH, HONEY! I’VE NEVER BEEN PUSHED THIS FAR, BUT NOW I’M GOING TO RELEASE THE HORN BEETLE RATHER THAN GO UP ONE BY ONE WITH THE TAILS! SCREW THAT! YOU’RE F***ING DEAD!” She was very angry and did transform into it. [Picture of beetle and her too here:
“Hi, let’s go! She is too powerful to stand still! I still have one more thing up my sleeve though!” We both jumped through the village.
“ARE YOU AFRAID ASSWHIPE? READY OR NOT HERE I COME!” She flew with her wings towards us and shot out acid that corroded all the villagers and buildings it touched. We dodged it, but it was difficult indeed! I can’t believe what an opponent of such anger and power, yet she didn’t use her water jutsus that much. I guess I didn’t give her time!
She closed in on me and I used my last jutsu I could use, “WATER STYLE: TWIN DRAGON BULLET JUTSU!” My trump card wetted her wings hindering her flight.
“SMART ASS! YOU HAD ONE OTHER THING TOO? WHATEVER THOUGH!” She extended her stinger as she fell, no doubt full of poison, at me! My demise was imminent! “DIE!”
At just the right moment, Hi used the Great Fireball Jutsu and blasted the stinger away. “I’LL NEVER WATCH A PERSON I LOVE DIE IN FRONT OF ME AGAIN!” {End} How surprised I was! He actually loved me! I felt the same, but that wasn’t the time to say so. Another brawl would take place. {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhxPgUywaWk&feature=related} “CHIDORI!” A clone of his was already climbing on her back and stabbed her in the face!
“F***ER! WATER STYLE: GREAT TYPHOON JUTSU!” The biggest water torrent I had ever seen flew down on him and could have easily killed him if it were for his most powerful fire justu shielding him with Fire Style: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet.
“LIGHTNING STYLE: GREAT THUNDER CLAP!” I had never seen such a ferocious technique! I was almost blinded from the white light and my ears bled from the shrill! It sliced very far into her body!
“YOU ACTUALLY PIERCED THIS ARMOR OF CHAKRA? SUCH...A MONSTOCITY! NOW THIS WHOLE VILLAGE WILL DIE! SORRY KAKUZU, YOU WANTED TO DO THIS, BUT IT’S MY TURN TO SHOW EVERYONE THE TAILED BEAST BOMB!” {End, and play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dsZxeNY-Ntg} She flew high into the sky while being extremely wounded and charged a frightful amount of chakra!
“Hi, we need to try to protect this village! How?”
“Ama! I’ll protect you!”
Shibuki jumped up, drank some weird liquid from a vial, and said, “THIS MY VILLAGE, I WILL PROTECT WITH MY LIFE! WATER STYLE: …”
“TAILED BEAST BOMB!” A huge blast of chakra shot out of her mouth, a blast so huge it could destroy the entire village!
“COLOSSAL WATER WALL!” Shibuki finished. The entire river rose to protect the village and Hi used his Fire Dragon Jutsu to conjure many fire dragons to guard the village. Then, he grabbed me and sprinted away. Nestled in his arms I watched in horror how the bomb shot through the colossal wall and his dragons. Even though it was weakened, it could destroy most of the village! What powers Jinchuuriki have! An explosion occurred. {End} The waterfall village lay in ruin Shibuki was in a critical state and Fu was back to her human self, panting.
“Ama, go take care of Shibuki with your medical ninjutsu and aid the people!”
“No! I’m tired of the women getting the insignificant jobs! This village’s ninja can handle that! Simply because you don’t know how to heal, I’ll heal Shibuki, then fight with you!”
“But!”
“NO!” My feminist fury persuaded him to do as I asked. I healed Shibuki to a stable, but critical state. (We learned later that the liquid he drank was “Hero’s Water”, water that grants great power, but serious harm) His body survived the blast! I ran out to help and to my surprise Hi wasn’t fighting Fu! {Of course: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7EwmduB_gI}
Another man, with a red scythe stood across from him!
“Kakuzu! Leave these ones to me! I want to slaughter them! You take that damn Jinchuuriki from your village, and we get the f*** outta here!”
“Hidan, don’t be reckless!” calmly replied a man with a waterfall village headband, but crossed out! He leapt away to Fu. They both wore black cloaks with red clouds! (We later learned that these people were members of a criminal organization, the Akatsuki!)
“So, let the slaughtering BEGIN!”
Next time! Hidan VS Hikusa! Who will win? Will Shibuki be ok? Does anyone even care about him? Will Ama fight? Find out in Chapter 11!
Here are the other chapters:
[What abilities does Ama have? Will the fight be exciting?]
I quickly ran, activated my byakugan and used, “EIGHT TRIGRAMS EMPTY AIR PALM!” and blasted her away with chakra. “Hi, leave this to me! Only come if I’m in a dire emergency! I am Hyuga Ama of the Hyuga Main House, and I am your opponent!” I stood across from her now destroyed water clone on the river and watched her appear.
“So, you had the element of surprise! Who cares?”
“I was trained Hyuga Neji in the ways of the Gentle Fist, and by Nara Shikamaru as a tactician! My water ninjutsu will cancel yours. I am the worst opponent you could get!”
She was yawning and staring off into space, that rude ingrate! “Sorry, I got bored! Instead of chatting let’s actually see you try to fight. You’re lucky! You get to have fun because I’ll let you think you have a chance and then take you out! I’ll just take him out from the start! Like I said you’re lucky!”
“You’re the one who’s talking!” I prepared for battle, {Play:
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now} and threw two kunai, which she deflect with a little dagger I tried to hit her with my gentle fist, but kept on missing. She indeed was swift! “Gotcha now you little tart! WATER STYLE: WATER TORNADO!” As the name suggests, a tornado of water made from the water clone I was fighting flew at me and spun around the vortex! It would have incapacitated me if were not for my shadow clone!
I hid behind the tree, reader! Not because I was afraid, but because I had learned from Shikamaru, although he is much wiser, to plan.{If not already done, stop music} After twenty minutes of isolation, I chose to carry it out. In the middle of my planning she uttered, “COWARD! If you don’t come in twenty minutes I’m taking that as a retreat from an ugly, insignificant, weakling!” Hi burned up when she said that, but suppressed it. He did not want to interfere unless needed. I had to use 8 Trigrams 64 Palms, a close range technique of the gentle fist that seals all 64 of the body’s chakra points, on her if I ever wanted to defeat her. I knew that she used water to shield and attack, so if I wanted to get near her and land the attack, I would need a diversion. First, while hidden, I threw a smoke bomb at her. She used, “WATER STYLE WATER DRAGON BULLET!” that flew out of the smoke and into the air, to try to crush me.
I used, “ROTATION!” A shield of chakra protected me form the dragon and then I leaped up and threw my own specialty weapon. A kunai with a blue smoke bomb flew at her and released the smoke.
“Stupid girl! Another one? What shit are you pulling?” Pardon me, reader, for the foul language she cussed in a lot of her sentences! The blue smoke released however sucks away chakra. “I mold chakra? What the hell are you doing? Oh!” She walked out and there I stood posed for my attack. {Play this now: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dt7GXWOrHkU&feature=related}
“Goodbye!”
“Shit”
I struck each sequence of chakra points mentioned, “8 TRIGARMS 2 PALMS, 4 PALMS, 8 PALMS, 16 PALMS, 32 PLAMS, 8 TRIGRAMS, 64 PALMS!” She flew backward shrieking in pain and coughing in pain. Hi’s eyes were so wide in awe I thought they might fall out. {End music}
She rose. “Humph! I’ll give that to you, but you forgot one thing honey!” my Byakugan observe a sickly yellow chakra emerging in great ferocity, “I’M A JINCHUURIKI! The thorn beetle provides all of the chakra I need and increases my speed and power intensely. I’m shocked you could push to me to bringing it out!”
Hi exclaimed, “I can see the chakra with my Sharingan too! It could probably even be seen without doujutsu!”
Her speed was so fast I couldn’t even see her anymore! She slammed my shadow clone to the ground. “Another one? I would think that the real one did that last attack!”
“Wrong!” I tried to use the air palm, but she was fast and slammed me to the ground, the real me.
“Just kidding! With this chakra, I can sense who’s real and fake! Your buddy’s eyes can too, but you can’t!” My body hurt a lot. I used a little medical ninjutsu to heal myself.
“I won’t let you do that! WATER PRISON JUTSU!” I immediately was trapped in that orb on the river. She thought she had gotten me, but I was able to stay one step ahead of her. {Play this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8W9BFzsgkg} I activated the kunai I had thrown with the chakra sucking ability, and released an intense amount of lightning I “borrowed” from Hi when training. The chakra absorbed was used for it. “What? How? AAAAHHHHHHH!” I explained. She was shocked, and I was free. {End}
“Now then, while you’re stunned! {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBP-4geenUg&feature=related} Right! GENTLE STEP: TWIN LION FISTS!” I struck her numerous times with my new blue lion shaped chakra globs on my fists that sealed multiple chakra points at once and acted as powerful punches. She was utterly mortified and flew back her yellow chakra temporarily sealed. Hi again looked impressed! {End and play this (a very song I think): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9gqr9BeOBl8}
“You little bitch! I’m better, faster, stronger, and smarter than you! I am a more skilled kunoichi in general than you! Then why, why, WHY ARE ALWAYS ONE STEP AHEAD? YOU THINK YOU’RE BETTER? HELL NO! YOU CHOSE THE WRONG GIRL TO F*** WITH, HONEY! I’VE NEVER BEEN PUSHED THIS FAR, BUT NOW I’M GOING TO RELEASE THE HORN BEETLE RATHER THAN GO UP ONE BY ONE WITH THE TAILS! SCREW THAT! YOU’RE F***ING DEAD!” She was very angry and did transform into it. [Picture of beetle and her too here:
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How scared I was at the sight of this grotesque creature! She now had infinite chakra, and me very little.“Hi, let’s go! She is too powerful to stand still! I still have one more thing up my sleeve though!” We both jumped through the village.
“ARE YOU AFRAID ASSWHIPE? READY OR NOT HERE I COME!” She flew with her wings towards us and shot out acid that corroded all the villagers and buildings it touched. We dodged it, but it was difficult indeed! I can’t believe what an opponent of such anger and power, yet she didn’t use her water jutsus that much. I guess I didn’t give her time!
She closed in on me and I used my last jutsu I could use, “WATER STYLE: TWIN DRAGON BULLET JUTSU!” My trump card wetted her wings hindering her flight.
“SMART ASS! YOU HAD ONE OTHER THING TOO? WHATEVER THOUGH!” She extended her stinger as she fell, no doubt full of poison, at me! My demise was imminent! “DIE!”
At just the right moment, Hi used the Great Fireball Jutsu and blasted the stinger away. “I’LL NEVER WATCH A PERSON I LOVE DIE IN FRONT OF ME AGAIN!” {End} How surprised I was! He actually loved me! I felt the same, but that wasn’t the time to say so. Another brawl would take place. {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhxPgUywaWk&feature=related} “CHIDORI!” A clone of his was already climbing on her back and stabbed her in the face!
“F***ER! WATER STYLE: GREAT TYPHOON JUTSU!” The biggest water torrent I had ever seen flew down on him and could have easily killed him if it were for his most powerful fire justu shielding him with Fire Style: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet.
“LIGHTNING STYLE: GREAT THUNDER CLAP!” I had never seen such a ferocious technique! I was almost blinded from the white light and my ears bled from the shrill! It sliced very far into her body!
“YOU ACTUALLY PIERCED THIS ARMOR OF CHAKRA? SUCH...A MONSTOCITY! NOW THIS WHOLE VILLAGE WILL DIE! SORRY KAKUZU, YOU WANTED TO DO THIS, BUT IT’S MY TURN TO SHOW EVERYONE THE TAILED BEAST BOMB!” {End, and play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dsZxeNY-Ntg} She flew high into the sky while being extremely wounded and charged a frightful amount of chakra!
“Hi, we need to try to protect this village! How?”
“Ama! I’ll protect you!”
Shibuki jumped up, drank some weird liquid from a vial, and said, “THIS MY VILLAGE, I WILL PROTECT WITH MY LIFE! WATER STYLE: …”
“TAILED BEAST BOMB!” A huge blast of chakra shot out of her mouth, a blast so huge it could destroy the entire village!
“COLOSSAL WATER WALL!” Shibuki finished. The entire river rose to protect the village and Hi used his Fire Dragon Jutsu to conjure many fire dragons to guard the village. Then, he grabbed me and sprinted away. Nestled in his arms I watched in horror how the bomb shot through the colossal wall and his dragons. Even though it was weakened, it could destroy most of the village! What powers Jinchuuriki have! An explosion occurred. {End} The waterfall village lay in ruin Shibuki was in a critical state and Fu was back to her human self, panting.
“Ama, go take care of Shibuki with your medical ninjutsu and aid the people!”
“No! I’m tired of the women getting the insignificant jobs! This village’s ninja can handle that! Simply because you don’t know how to heal, I’ll heal Shibuki, then fight with you!”
“But!”
“NO!” My feminist fury persuaded him to do as I asked. I healed Shibuki to a stable, but critical state. (We learned later that the liquid he drank was “Hero’s Water”, water that grants great power, but serious harm) His body survived the blast! I ran out to help and to my surprise Hi wasn’t fighting Fu! {Of course: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7EwmduB_gI}
Another man, with a red scythe stood across from him!
“Kakuzu! Leave these ones to me! I want to slaughter them! You take that damn Jinchuuriki from your village, and we get the f*** outta here!”
“Hidan, don’t be reckless!” calmly replied a man with a waterfall village headband, but crossed out! He leapt away to Fu. They both wore black cloaks with red clouds! (We later learned that these people were members of a criminal organization, the Akatsuki!)
“So, let the slaughtering BEGIN!”
Next time! Hidan VS Hikusa! Who will win? Will Shibuki be ok? Does anyone even care about him? Will Ama fight? Find out in Chapter 11!
Here are the other chapters:
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