i didn't like it at all soz here are the reason's why
1. bad quality try to make it better quality then it is now.
2. the clips that you were using didn't go well together ( i mean the time skip) also using the same clips over again when not needed.
3.add effects, i didn't see any effects in that vid at all except for the title page part and the ending, but those dont really count.
4. too short, try making it longer yes it take's forever to make a decent vid that goes for a decent amount of time. but it's why you see such good AMV's is because they take there time, so try taking your time in the next one until your completely satisfied
maybe go on youtube and have some tutorials to help you out a bit more as well, it helps alot
i liked the song choice it was good and the timing was okay i guess but yeah.