Takashi Tetsuya Part 5: The Legendary Taijutsu Master!

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this is part 5 the continuation of part 4, if you would like too read part 4 the click here


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Takashi Tetsuya Part 5: The Legendary Taijutsu Master!

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akari: and this next mission makes that one look easy.

kuro: easy?

akari: while you guys were gone we got word of a gang of horrible bandits terrorizing villages and stealing from them.

kuro: that's awful

akari: yes, and whats even more horrible is that they have a body guard.
and...he is a master at taijutsu. his name is Ryuu he is listed in the bingo book as a rogue ninja from the land of beasts he is highly skilled and no one has ever beat him. right now he is heading back too his old village for some unknown reason.

kuro: so is that were we should head too?

akari: yes, it should take you 2 days to get there if you head out now.

kuro: alright.

"setting: on a big hill beside a village"
"time: night time"



hotaka: hey sensei i can see the village!

kuro: good it looks like we made it with enough time to catch a bite to eat.

takashi: great im starving.

*they then head into the village*


kuro: this place looks deserted.

*they then hear an old man screaming*


old man: thank goodness its the grass ninja, you have too help us.

kuro: what happend!?

old man: it was Ryuu him and his gang came back too the village!

*a kunai comes out of no where and is heading for the old mans head*

*takashi goes to deflect it but kuro catches it before takashi gets to it*

kuro: takashi, you shouldn't waste your energy before a fight begins.
*he then looks up at a tall building and sees a figure jump down*

Ryuu: so, it looks like they sent grass ninja, I'm surprised that they only brought one team.

kuro: takashi, hotaka, okay team battle formation 3!

*takashi vanishes*

*hotaka activates his sharingan and vanishes*

*kuro vanishes*

Ryuu: ha, do you really think that will work!
*Ryuu then vanishes*

*Ryuu then reappears in the air with his left foot kicking takashi in the face and his right foot kicking hotaka in the stomach*

*kuro then reappears with a kunai in his right hand about to strike ryuu*

*ryuu then grabs kuros wrist and knees him in the chest*

*as kuro is falling to the ground he catches him self and does a back flip and lands on his feet*

kuro: *inner thoughts: hes good, there's no doubt about that*

Ryuu: your going too have to do better than that!


kuro: *inner thoughts: why is he wearing such a thick jacket when its 80 degrees out?*

Ryuu: whats wrong? you done already? cause im just warming up!.

hotaka: sensei, im seeing something glowing from his jacket.

kuro:chakra?

hotaka: yeah, but this chakras more thick then what i usually see.

kuro: *inner thoughts: maybe there's a weakness and hes using that jacket of his to hide it*

kuro: takashi?

takashi: yea sensei?

kuro: battle formation 2

takashi: gotcha!

*takashi sticks his right hand out and uses his left hand to form a 2 finger seal*

*chakra clay starts forming in his right hand*


*it morphs into a handle of a sword and then the clay starts forming a blade*

*the clay hardens into stone*

kuro: good, it looks like you can morph the clay nicely.


kuro: im sorry to make you use this technique when its not finished yet but i have to protect the old man. but at least you got the stone jutsu down. so you ready?

takashi: yep

kuro and takashi in unison: battle formation formation 2!

*takashi sticks both of his arms strait out like a bird*
*he then moves to another spot on the ground using the light technique, and he keeps moving back and forth from the spot he moved to, to the spot he started in and now there are 2 images of takashi*


kuro: *inner thoughts: by moving so fast back and forth using the light technique he can keep refreshing his image to the point where it appears that there's two of him, so when his opponent goes too attack one of the takashis he will think that its a clone so when he goes to attack takashi all takashi has to do is keep using the technique and keep moving back and forth and then when ryuus attack goes through takashi then that leaves an oppening for takashi to strike*

Ryuu: ha, a shadow clone huh?
*ryuu goes to punch takashi*
*ryuus punch goes through takashi*
*takashi rams his sword through Ryuus stomach*


Ryuu: you....little...

takashi: looks like you were to late.

Ryuu: well kid, it looks like you got me...

Ryuu: * takes off his thick jacket*

takashi: wha- just what the hell are you!?

kuro: uh! what the hell is he?

ryuu: im...an experiment...

kuro: an experiment?

old man: *the old man comes out of hiding from behind kuro and starts telling a story*
10 years ago, there was a war between this village and the land of fire. the land of fire is a powerful village who wanted are land and started saying that we were just wasting it. we were all scared that they would come to our village and wipe us out. we had little technology at the time but we made great use of it. we took took our greatest ninja and transplanted his body into genetic engineering we had created a machine that was built with the ability to wipe out an entire village at will.

Ryuu: and thats all anyone ever thought of me as after that, a....machine.

kuro:...why didnt you stop them?

Ryuu: i didn't know what they were doing. they told me that my organs were in bad shape and that they could fix them, it wasnt untill i woke up from the operation that i found out what they had done.

old man: it was best for the village.

Ryuu: best for the village?.... DID YOU EVER ONCE THINK ABOUT WHAT WAS BEST FOR ME!? DID YOU EVER THINK ABOUT HOW I FELT!?
NO! i had a family!, i had friends! and after they saw what you did to me, they were so frightened that they wouldn't even look at me....my own kids....my wife she and everyone else called me a monster.
and now...ive become so much like a machine that i cant even cry.
after the war i left the village, it seemed that no one cared about me but then i found people who did. they didn't think of me as a monster and they helped me reach my goal of making friends again so i helped them reach there goal of being great bandits who could have what ever they wanted.
but thanks to your sword, soon the chakra generator in my stomach will run out causing me to die.


*the 4 bandits come out of no where*

bandit 1: it seems your no use to us now.

Ryuu: what!?

bandit 2: i think since hes about to die that now would be a good time too tell him.

Ryuu: tell me what?

bandit 1: that we were just using you to reach our goal hahaha

Ryuu: *looks down at the ground and mumbles* using me? but aren't we...friends?

bandit 3: why would anyone want to be friends with a freak like you?

*the bandits laugh at ryuu*


bandit 4: in fact we were going too kill you once we reached our goal but it seems like that kid right there saved us the trouble.

Ryuu: *ryuu looks at takashi* hey kid...im sorry about attacking your team...*he then looks at takashis sword* can you do me a favor? can you remove that sword, i promise not to attack you or your friends.

takashi: yeah...sure *takashi removes the sword*

Ryuu: can you do me one more fav-

takashi: *takashi hands him his sword*

hotaka: WHAT ARE YOU DONG!

kuro: calm down hotaka, this is something that ryuu feels he must do your too young too understand.

*ryuu takes the sword*

Ryuu: thanks kid.

*ryuu charges at the bandits with takashis stone sword in his hand*

Ryuu: i may be about to die soon but im going to use the last bit of my chakra to take you with me!!!

*ryuu runs through the bandits and stabs the first bandit in the stomach*

*Ryuu then turns the sword and slashes through the bandits body*

*the 2nd bandit throws a kunai at him*

*ryuu catches it with his teeth and throws it back at the bandit wich hits him in the throat*

*the 3rd bandit takes out a sword and holds it in ryuus direction*

*ryuu jumps and lands on the sword he does a back flip and kicks the bandit upwards in the air and ryuu jumps and cuts the bandits body in half*

*the 4th bandit takes off running and ryuu throws his sword at him and stabs him in the back*


Ryuu: *ryuu mumbles* well....i guess im out of chakra *ryuu falls to his knees and slowly falls too the ground*

hotaka: is he...is he dead?

old man: it seems like it...

Ryuu: *quietly mumbles* kid....can you....come...over here.... i want to...ask you for one more favor....

*takashi walks over to ryuu*

hotaka: takashi wait!

*kuro puts his hnd on hotakas shoulder*

kuro: its okay hotaka.

ryuu: when...i came back...too the village.....my family had been....killed during... the war... i know that....my family didn't love me....but i still love them....i would appreciate it....if you could....make sure....that i was burried next to them....

takashi: *pauses* .....sure

Ryuu: thank...you....now....i can....die....happy.....


*ryuu died with a smile on his face that night*


"setting: walking back too the village at night"



takashi: *inner thoughts: Ryuu, you may have been turned into a machine but you had more emotion then any human I have ever known.

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END OF PART 5

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thank you for reading! if you like it then reply and i will begin working on the next part.
 
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That was pretty good. it was great. your stories keep getting better and better, and i love reading them. keep up the good work, and let me know when the next chapter's out. :)
 

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That was pretty good. it was great. your stories keep getting better and better, and i love reading them. keep up the good work, and let me know when the next chapter's out. :)
thank you tbh i was going too stop typing and post it after ryuu said

"ryuu: im...an experiment..."


but then i figured why not just go ahead and type up the whole thing.

and ill tell you when i post the next part.

thanks for reading
 

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thank you tbh i was going too stop typing and post it after ryuu said

"ryuu: im...an experiment..."


but then i figured why not just go ahead and type up the whole thing.

and ill tell you when i post the next part.

thanks for reading
dude, i would've had no choice but too kill you if you did that. :D
 
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