Takashi Tetsuya Part 15: The End

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*takashi breaks off the tip of kentas sword and stabs kenta in his stomach with the tip of his own blade*



*flash back*


*setting: chuunin exam emergency room*​

takashi: hey tsubaki, what did the clan do to make you hate them so much? it's okay if you don't want to tell me.

tsubaki: they treated me and my family like gold when my father was hokage. we never wanted for anything we never did with out. but then, after the night my father died we were treated like scum. they told us that we had nothing left to offer them and that they had decided to kill me and my family. so we gave them all of our money and we gave them everything we had!

*he grips his bed sheets as a tear falls from his face on to the sheet on his bed*

tsubaki: but then one day, we had nothing left to offer them, they sent me out on a mission to bring food to the village. little did i know that the mission was just to get me out of the way. and when i had completed my mission i came back to my home looking forward to seeing my mother and sister but when i walked in my home, i had seen with my own eyes what they had done. my mother and my little sister was dead.

*takashis eyes widen*

takashi: im, sorry tsubaki

tsubaki: they kept me *tears start flowing from his eyes dripping onto his bed as he tries to fight them back* they kept me only because i had something to offer them. i had the chance of becoming the hokage for a village i hate!


*a few moments pass as they think in silence*

takashi: tsubaki, become hokage and we will change the way of our clan. we will make them see the error of there ways that's a promise!

tsubaki: ta-takashi

takashi:tsubaki i want you to promise me that you will become hokage.

tsubaki: ...i promise.

*setting: present*


*takashi turns his head back and looks at tsubaki with eyes that are a cross breed fusion of sharingan and byakugan*


tsubaki:*inner thoughts: whats with his eyes? is this a new level of sharingan that im not aware of?*


takashi: we will change the way of our clan and make them see the error of there ways, that's a promise.

*takashi then punches kenta in the face sending kenta flying through the air 12 feet away*

*kenta does a series of back flips in the air in an attempt to catch him self and lands on his feet*

*as soon as kenta lands takashi appears in front of kenta with his right elbow in his stomach*

*kenta bends over from the blow and takashi spins around and round houses kenta in the face sending kenta flying through the forest smashing through trees*

*as kenta fly's through the forest takashi appears running along side kenta and grabs his neck carrying kenta forcing him to crash through more trees*

*takashi then takes kentas neck and throws him upwards several feet in the air*


takashi: *while running in kentas direction* *inner thoughts: i can sense his chakra hes still alive*

*takashi vanishes using the light technique and appears high in the air in front of kenta with his right arm morphed into stone and cocked back with chakra heavily radiating from him*


takashi: TAKE THIS!


*he punches kenta in the face and kenta soars through the air at hundreds of miles per hour and he smashes through the barrier*

*kentas body smashes into the ground killing him instantly as takashi vanishes in the air and appears standing on the ground next to tsubaki back to back as the stone on his right arm crumbles away*


*time skip to the last remaining hour before they can leave the forest*
*setting: morning with tsubaki and takashi standing up facing each other*

takashi: well tsubaki,i think its time now its been three days and only one person can leave the forest. if both of us come out we will be killed.

tsubaki: *a tear rolls down his cheek* takashi, you should be hokage instead of me. you shouldn't have to throw your life away because of something that happened to me!

*takashi smiles at tsubaki*

takashi: you promised that you would become hokage remember? besides
im not cut out for all of that responsibility stuff anyway haha

tsubaki: i just, didn't know how much i thought of you as a brother until now.

takashi: you shouldn't worry about that. there going to be sending out a search team soon so i better get started on my escape.

*he makes 12 hand signs, and bites the thumb on his right hand causing it to bleed*

*he presses his thumb against the tips of his fingers on his right hand and then he places his thumb on a tree and marks it with a strait line of his own blood. he then presses the rest of his fingers on the tree and a light starts to glow from his blood*


*takashi starts glowing as his body starts to fade*

tsubaki: takashi, thank you for everything. i really will miss you. please take care of your self.

*takashi smiles at tsubaki as he fades away completely*

*setting: on a bridge that leads to grass village*
*weather: raining*​

*a bright light glows from the center of the bridge and as it fades takashi appears on his hands and knees. he stands up and and looks at the floor of the bridge*


Takashi Narrating: I can never go back to my village and can never see my family or friends again. and so I must change my name and go to a new village far away to live. *he smiles* hmmm how about, Toshiro...yeah... i think i kind of like that name.

*setting: hokage mansion akari looking out a window looking at the rain with byakugan eyes looking at takashi one last time*​

akari: *whispers* takashi, i love you my son.
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END OF SERIES


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thank you to all of my fans.

there will be a new series sometime next month or at the end of this one.
i just need time to do plotting.

but thank you for reading till the last chapter.

tell me what you think.
 
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:T_T: you touched me right here. <3 that was such a great story man, i seriously almost cried (don't feel bad, i don't cry at much. the last thing i can remember crying at was my grandfather's death six years ago). anyways, that was a great series, and if i ever learn the art of animation, I'm animating that just because of the deep sotry-line. great ending to a great series. good on ya' mate! never once have i regreted suggesting that you should write fanfics!
 

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oh dude i get it!

his father had to leave his family because of the hokage thing and thats why he said that he would call him self toshiro.

but dude you have always succeeded at pulling emotions out
good job man
epic ending to an epic series

and you seriously diserve more fans of this ff
 
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