Takashi Tetsuya Part 14: A New Level Of Power!

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kenta: now...that's more, like it!

*he quickly takes out his sword and slashes takashi in his back causing blood to rapidly spew from the cut*

*takashi falls to his knees*



tsubaki: *inner thoughts: what!? i-i was sure takashi had got him, if hes up then he must have activated his tetsuya!*

*chakra starts heavily radiating from kenta*

kenta: *psychotically looking around as if he was paranoid* were's that other brat!? i must kill him as well!

*tsubaki appears in front of kenta 10ft away from him*


kenta: well look who decided to come out of hiding hahaha

tsubaki: i didn't go through 3 years of training too not fight you.

kenta: hahaha *he uses his chakra to draw his swords to him like a magnet and he grabs both of his swords*

*tsubaki looks at takashis lifeless body*


*flash back*

*setting: takashi and tsubaki sitting up in there beds in the chunin exams emergency room*​

tsubaki: tell me takashi, why is it that your not worried about the match are you not afraid of death?

takashi: well i see it as, if my dad was a tetsuya and your a tetsuya then i think of us, well... i think of us as brothers. sure we may not have gotten off at a good start but we both have the same blood running through us. if helping out my brother means i have to risk my own life, then ill do it with out thinking twice about it.

tsubaki: why?

takashi: well i never had a brother so as far as im concerned i consider you as part of my family.

tsubaki: you shouldn't be so naive. don't forget that it was only 2 hrs ago i was trying too kill you.

takashi: it was a mission its not like you had a choice. besides if the clan is bad enough to make you and my father want to leave then you can't be all bad.

*setting: present*

*tsubaki looking at takashis body*​

tsubaki: *mumbling to him self* takashi, you forgave me despite the fact that i tried to kill you and you accepted me as family. i will not let you die in vain.


kenta: whats a matter saying a prayer before you die?

tsubaki: *inner thoughts: im going to force all of my chakra into my right arm for one final attack*

*tsubakis right arm starts glowing with chakra*

*tsubaki looks up at kenta with his sharingan activated*


kenta: whats with his eyes? *kentas body pulses*

*tsubaki vanishes and appears punching kenta in the face and kenta fly's backwards from the punch*

*tsubaki then vanishes and appears behind kenta and kicks him in his back and kentas body fly's forward from the kick at a fast rate*

*tsubaki then appears in front of kenta charging his arm full of chakra as kenta is flying towards him*

*tsubaki then punches kenta in his stomach releasing all of his chakra at once and kenta goes flying half a mile through the forest smashing through dozens of trees*

*kentas body finally stops and tsubaki falls on one knee from using too much chakra*

*kenta groans slightly from pain and the groan fades to laughter*


*his laughter fills the forest and tsubakis eyes widen in shock*

tsubaki: h-how? that was... that was all i had...

*kenta appears in front of tsubaki walking towards him*


kenta: nice try *he smiles at him*

*tsubaki falls on his hands and knees*

kenta: begging for mercy before you die? how tragic.

*he draws one of his swords to him and grabs hold of it*

kenta: now die!

*kenta charges at tsubaki with his sword in his right hand*

*he goes to quickly strike tsubaki and his sword stops just a few centimeters away from tsubakis forehead*

*takashi appears holding the blade of kentas sword with his right hand and a huge amount of chakra radiating from him*


tsubaki: *inner thoughts: he, he activated his tetsuya, no this is different he hes almost 2x as much chakra as kenta, he must have mastered it. but when?*

*takashi breaks off the tip of kentas sword and stabs kenta in his stomach with the tip of his own blade*


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tell me what you think.

thanks for reading.
 
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amazing. only thing i can say. you should really keep it up. there are only a few things like starting your sentances with capitals (i'm bad for that in comments, but pretty good when starting a thread), using 'to' instead of 'too', a few places where there could've been more punctuation, but nothing major. i noticed that at the end tsubaki's name color changes to what takashi's was. is there a reason for that, or is it just a mistake? anywho, amazing chapter, and keep up the good work. one of these day's i should get to work on the next chapter of any of my three fanfics that are going right now, if i ever want to start either of my other ideas
 
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