Taka vs Team Azula (One-shot) Zuko VS Sasuke

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Zuko vs Sasuke



Taka


Sasuke Uchiha
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Team Azula


Zuko
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Theme Song​
*Fight until the Genjutsu*



*Genjutsu*



*After Genjutsu*


*Ending*




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Fire lights up around the squared arena, complementing the darkened sky. Smoke goes up into the clouds, and the wind begins to blow.

The Firelord removes his headpiece and robe.

The International Criminal removes his Akatsuki robe.

Zuko: "I've had enough of you. When this is over, you'll be put away for good."

Sasuke: "Try me."

Zuko: "If that's how you want it, then I've got no problems with it."








Zuko pulls out his infamous Blue-Spirit swords, and in response, Sasuke pulls out his sword. Zuko and Sasuke both jump in the air, swords clashing, and land on the opposite side of where they were standing. Zuko looks at his swords, and one of the blades break. Sasuke's sword is un-damaged. Quickly, they turn around and dash at one another. In a clash, Sasuke begins to use his lightening style and amplify it through his sword.

Zuko: "Lightening? That's how he broke my sword. Not again."

Zuko swipes Sasuke's feet and knocks him down. He attempts to stab Sasuke's head, but he dodges every blow. Sasuke then jumps, grabs Zuko's wrist, and punches him in the face.


Sasuke: "Are we done yet?"


Zuko stands back up.


Zuko: "Not yet."







Sasuke lunges at Zuko, but Zuko guards using his sword. Quickly, he kicks Sasuke's stomach, pushing him back, and goes to decapitate Sasuke, he barely nibs Sasuke's hair, allowing Sasuke to stab Zuko's stomach.

Zuko: "Grhhh!"

Sasuke: "Hmph."

(Sasuke goes to pull out his sword, but when he touches it, he is electrocuted.)

Sasuke: "Lightening release?"

(Sasuke channels his own with the sword, but is pushed back.)

While pulling the sword out, Zuko: "Your lightening comes from your body...mine comes from nature."

Sasuke: "No more games."

*Sasuk activates his three tomoe sharingan*

Zuko: "Those eyes....It's like he can see through me."

(Sasuke makes a handsign)

Sasuke: "Fire Syle: "Fireball jutsu!"

Zuko: "Two can play this game."

(Zuko makes a ball of fire and throws it at Sasuke's Fireball, making the ball bigger by powering it with a stream of flames. The fire clashes, and when the smoke clears, Zuko runs and kicks Fire at Sasuke)

Sasuke: "Fire release is useless against me."

(Sasuke jumps over the fire and attempts to kick Zuko in the head, but Zuko uses his arms to create a fireshield, in which Sasuke then uses a small bone of his Susano'o to block it. A small clash emerges, but Sasuke throws rapid shuriken at Zuko. Zuko shoots fire to block them, but during this Sasuke charges his chidori and runs at Zuko. Zuko continues to shoot fire, but Sasuke dodges to the left and right to avoid them. When Sasuke gets closer, Zuko creates a Fire wall. Sasuke analyzes it with his Sharingan, and shoots a Chidori stream against the wall. The stream travels back to Zuko's hands, causing him to break the wall. Sasuke then dashes at Zuko with his chidori, but Zuko breathes Fire at Sasuke, causing distance to be made between the two.)


Sasuke: "Physical attacks are getting me nowhere..."

Zuko: "I have him."

(Zuko runs at Sasuke, jumps in the air, but when he does, Sasuke looks up and activates his Mangekko Sharingan, while casting Zuko in a genjutsu.)






















Fire brews all around a downed Zuko.


Zuko: "What is this? Where am I?"


(Zuko looks around, but see's nothing.)

Zuko: "Uchiha!"

(Zuko sees Mai, Ursa, Azula, Ty Lee, and Ozai on his right side-In that order-)

Zuko: "Mai! Mother!"

(Zuko runs towards his mother, but a black flame comes from the ground and separates them.)

Zuko: "What is this?"

(Zuko turns around and sees Katara, Aang, Sokka, Sukki, Toph, Appa, and Momo)

Zuko: "Katara! Aang!"

(Zuko runs toward them, but a black flame also separates them)

Zuko: "What is this?!"

(Zuko looks forward and sees his Uncle Iroh.)

Zuko: "Uncle!"

(Zuko runs toward him, but another black flame appears.)

Zuko: "Where are you?"

Sasuke's voice: "Here."

(Zuko turns around and sees a huge develish monster. Sasuke's Susano'o. His face fills with shock)

Zuko: "What are...you?"

Sasuke: "An avenger."

(The Susano'o punches Zuko down. Zuko gets up and looks up at his Uncle, only to see him melt via the black flames.)

Zuko: "UNCLE!"

(Zuko turns around and see's the same happening to Aang and his friends)

Zuko: "Aang! Katara!"

(Zuko quickly turns to his right, but sees nothing wrong.)

Sasuke: "The people you love most. What if they all were killed in front of you?"

Sasuke: "Your friends."

(The flames consume Ty Lee.)

Sasuke: "Your sister.)

(The flames consume Azula.)

Sasuke: "Your loved one."

(They consume Mai)

Sasuke: "Your own mother and father. In front of your very eyes."

(The flames consume Ozai and Ursa. Before being consumed, Ursa says something to Zuko.)

Ursa: "I love you, Zuko."

Zuko: "Mother!"

(Ursa melts away, and Zuko begins to cry)

Sasuke: "Agony...Pain....it all hurts. Unlike me, you won't experience it for long."

(Sasuke and his Susano'o appear infront of Zuko)

Sasuke: "Hmph."

(The Susano'o punches Zuko repeatedly, while Zuko's life flashes before his eyes, with every cough of blood)

Zuko: "Mai......Mother.....Uncle....."

(Susano'o punches him one last time)

Zuko: "I'm....sorry....."
















(Sasuke releases the genjutsu, and Zuko falls from his jump, lifeless.)

Sasuke: "Although I doubt you'll be able to move for days, I made sure the jutsu paralyzed you."

(Sasuke walks up to Zuko, and lightening begins to stream through his arm)

Sasuke: "Hmph."

(Sasuke goes to stab Zuko with Chidori, but Zuko uppercuts Sasuke in the face, knocking him down.)

Zuko: "I'm not sure what you did, but I made sure to breathe and exhale my fire inside of me, like my Uncle taught me. Fire comes from within."

(Zuko jumps and does a leg drop, surrounding his leg in fire, but Sasuke uses his Susano'o's ribcage to protect him. Zuko bounces off, but lands on his feet.)

Sasuke: "All of your attacks are useless."

Zuko: "Was that...part of the monster in the dream?"

(Zuko grabs his stomach, where it was stabbed earlier.)

Sasuke: "You're already hurt, while I'm spotless. Pathetic. But still, this is over."

(Sasuke's eyes begin to glow, while one begins to bleed.)

Sasuke: "Amaterasu!"

(Black flames surround Zuko, from above)

Zuko: "The flames from the dream?"

Sasuke: "Let this dream become reality."

(Zuko grabs Sasuke's dropped Sword while the flames attach him. He strikes one, but the sword is eaten up.)

Sasuke: "These flames destroy everything."

(Zuko shoots his own fire at them, while running towards a building, but the black flames just consume them and grow. Zuko dashes inside the building.)

Sasuke: "Hiding? Give me a real challenge!"

(The flames surround the building, and in seconds, destroys it. Sasuke walks into the crumble, and looks around. Suddenly, Zuko appears from the rubble and, with fire surrounding his hands, tackles Sasuke through a another building wall.)

Zuko: "Give up! Now!"

Sasuke: "Hmph. Try me."

(Zuko punches Sasuke in the face numerous times, but Sasuke's grin doesn't vanish)

Zuko: "What are you smiling about?"

Sasuke: "Look up and see."

(Zuko looks up while a huge black flame comes at him. At the last second, Zuko dodges out of the way. Sasuke, however, just eliminates Amaterasu and it re-enters his eye. Zuko takes this chance and stabs Sasuke with a pipe.)

Zuko: ".....Finished."

Sasuke: "We've only begun."

(Sasuke disperses into lightening.)

Zuko: "A....clone?"

(Zuko looks back at the arena and see's Sasuke standing on the edge of a roof)

Sasuke: "Let this herald your end."

(Lightening begins to spark in the sky, and combine with each other, creating some type of dragon monster that goes back into the clouds)

Sasuke: "Kirin!"

(The lightening beast comes down towards Zuko. Zuko stares at it in awe, while it comes at him.)

Sasuke: "The ending is here."

(Zuko makes a pose, extending his left hand first. The beast collides with his arm, but he sucks up all the energy)

Sasuke: "I-impossible!"

Zuko: "C-can't hold this!"

(Zuko begins to glow and spark, but before he explodes he sends the beast back at Sasuke. Zuko is pushed back and slams into the rubble. When the smoke clears, Zuko looks up in shock)

Zuko: "The monster in my dream?!"

Sasuke: "Comes to life. Susano'o!"

(The devilish creature shoots an arrow covered in Black flames at Zuko, but Zuko dodges it. However, the flames expand and trap Zuko into a square)

Sasuke: "I wouldn't want you running away. Amaterasu!"

(The flames fall in towards Zuko and attack him. However, sparks fly and destroy the flames)

Sasuke: "What?!"

(Zuko stands up, with lightening and fire flowing around his body)

Zuko: "That lightening creature....I absorbed some of it. Now..."

Sasuke: "We fight for real."

(Zuko breathes fire everywhere, and uses his feet and arms to fly in the air. He creates a dragon like monster from fire and Lightening.)

Zuko: "You're finished!"

(Zuko shoots a bolt of lightening at Sasuke, but he counters with an arrow. However, Zuko shoots a massive flame at him quickly following the explosion. Sasuke, his eyes bleeding massively, creates a same size Amaterasu. They explode and push them both back to the edge of the mountain.)

Sasuke: "*Huff* *huff*"

(Sasuke falls to his knees and coughs up blood)

Sasuke: "Susano'o.....it's too much...."

Zuko: "*Huff* *Huff*"

(Zuko's skin begins to burn a little)

Zuko: "This....power......it's...killing me..."

Sasuke: "I expected more from you, but you're worthless.....like everyone else."

Zuko: "I'm not worthless! I.....I'm the Firelord!"

(Zuko, still in his form, runs at Sasuke. Sasuke, intact with Susano'o runs at Zuko. They collide and a massive explosion occurs)



















Smoke surrounds a mountain with no buildings....all rubble...



Sasuke is laying down, his shirt and skin burned. He's bruised all over.


Suigetsu, Karin, and Jugo arrive to Sasuke's aid.


Jugo: "Is he....?"

Karin: "Don't say that! Sasuke!"

Suigetsu: "He's really damaged. He might make it though. Maybe. I'll cool him off using my Water Prison Jutsu, but if we don't get him to Madara quick....It's over."

*Jugo picks up Sasuke and they looks around*

Karin: "Who could have done this?"

*They teleport away*











A fire balloon arrives.....

Zuko is underneath rubble, his ribs and arms broken.....


Mai, Azula, and Ty Lee arrive.


Mai: "Zuko! Azula, Ty Lee! Help me get him out of here!"

(They dig Zuko up)

Ty Lee: "His shirt is burned to a crisp. His skin has minor burns. Why isn't he burned too?"

Azula: "As Firebenders, we can control the flow of fire around us, if it's around our skin, I mean, but This fire has to be self-inflicted....Unlike his scar. Zuko wouldn't have hurt himself though....He must have used somesort of fireshield to protect him...."

Mai: "Stop talking and help me!"

(They help Mai pick Zuko up)

Ty Lee: "Be careful. His arms and ribs are broken. Who could've done this?"

Azula: "I don't know, but it had to be someone powerful. More powerful than any of us....This place is a mess."

(They carry Zuko to the balloon and put him on a stretcher)

Mai: "Zuko. You'll be okay. I know it."

(Mai puts her hand on Zuko, and he barley grabs hers. Mai smiles, and starts to cry)

Azula: "Mai? Crying? Emotions aren't your style."

Ty Lee: "Love does it too people."

(Azula puts her arm around Ty Lee)

Azula: "I hope that doesn't mean I'm going to be tearing up soon..."

(Ty Lee giggles)​







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Review please.


I couldn't post all of it in one post due to some error. I don't know xd And I'm so sorry for the other thread. My history saved my Fanclub one, and I clicked it instead of Taka Vs Team Azula, which I typed in prior to writing this. All one big problem. Sorry for mulitposting, but I didn't want to ruin the story lol



Thoughts?



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Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it.
 

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Although Sasuke would pwn Zuko in a real battle you made them seem to be on even terms.
Besides Zuko dodging Amaterasu everything was on point.
Zuko redirecting Kirin back at sasuke was epic as well.
 

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Although Sasuke would pwn Zuko in a real battle you made them seem to be on even terms.
Besides Zuko dodging Amaterasu everything was on point.
Zuko redirecting Kirin back at sasuke was epic as well.
I agree. Sasuke would win in a flash lol, but my Zuko faness shall not let him! xd



And which dodge? The others where like running, but one when he and Sasuke where on the ground, it was a dodge. They way I see it was Zuko was SUPER fast for that second, or Amaterasu was SUPER slow. Either one.


And thanks:)
 

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Well, Nice one of story with good background musics, i like both Avatar and Naruto so much, but i noticed, that you used the Firelord's place for location at the time of Sozin's Comet, so in that case Zuko would (much-less) easly wo against Sasuke, well nvm, Thank you for the story :)
 

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Well, Nice one of story with good background musics, i like both Avatar and Naruto so much, but i noticed, that you used the Firelord's place for location at the time of Sozin's Comet, so in that case Zuko would (much-less) easly wo against Sasuke, well nvm, Thank you for the story :)
Actually, it is the Palace, but not when the comet occurs. It's after the finale. But the comet would make my story more believable lol But it's not there.

Thanks man. Glad you liked it:)


Zuko for the win!



Anyone notice how I somehow put in a little TyZula hint in this epic battle story? They're in all my Avatar stories lol


Oh and I'm a fan of Batman xd As you can see by the songs. I used some other scores in another one of my stories.

Ty Lee's visit, I think. Check it out xd


Oh, and check out my monster, Crowning. It's in my sig. It's an Avatar story. First one in a trilogy.
 

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Awesome, that pretty much showed Sasukes character as well xd

I watched Avatar as well a few years back, weren´t they going to make another story in the same world?
 

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Wow :D I loved that! I read it twice xd
My favorite part was when Zuko redirected Kirin. I could picture that perfectly! Keep going, AZ, you're doing great :D

Why not do Aang teaming up with Naruto against Ozai and Pain? :p
It'd be funny to see how Aang and Naruto get along, haha. Great work, once again!!
 
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