[Taijutsu Training] Blade Hyuga and white flash

[-Blade-]

Lets get this started
*Bows to show respect... "Lets make this fun" Runs at you and slides to kick your left leg i then spin on the palm of my hands to sweep kick the other leg as you are busy with the first kick*

 

[System001]

As you come at me with your sliding kick i change my center of gravity with a wide and crouching stance i then grap your leg that you try to slide at me with and use the force that you came at me with to swing you around 180 degree's before letting go sending you skidding away i then jump into the air and deliver a drop kick to your abdomen/solar plexus leaving you winded

my bad for being late i didnt realise you guys had already posted

 

[Scorps]

Continue one until i tell you to stop...more energy. White Flash, try simpler moves in the beginning or you'll find it very difficult to keep track

 

[-Blade-]

*As i am thrown i grab a kunai and stab it into the ground holding on as i slide back, as you come down for the drop kick i hold the kunai up which would stab you in your leg*

 

[System001]

As I see you lift the kunai towards me I sswivel the leg I was going to kick you with giving me enough momentum to swivel out of the way and land in a hand stand a couple feet away I then push off my hands and somersut backwards getting completely out of range of you and your kunai I then wait a few meters away waiting for you to stand up

 

[Scorps]

Nice! I've seen enough! Reguarding free form both have the basic amount of skill. nothing wrong, nothing that special.

For free form my advice is to work on your knowledge of anatomy and movement. Try to imagine every single move you are describing and every single move your enemy is describing. Don't, ever, fail to mention which leg or arm you are moving and from were to were.

One thing you should do is find out vital deadly spots in the human body and try to aim for those.

Now, the difference between free form and jutsu taijutsu is that the moves made as jutsu are mostly guidelines for your movement. So you should see each "jutsu" as a guideline for a movement you need to explain and describe with the same detail.

First one is a well known one:

(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death
Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and explosives separately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and force able punches it into the enemy's behind.

Lol. The description couldn't be more descriptive. Now, even Naruto was able to find a creative and effective way of using this technique. Can you?

 

[-Blade-]

*I take a kunai and place it between my fingers making the tiger seal and infuse it with lightning chakra using chidori nagashi i then run behind Flash and jam it up his butt releasing the lightning paralyzing him*

 

[System001]

I have to shove my fingers up blades behind -_- what a drag...and I have to use it in my own creative way ill give it a shot of course hmm

I reach into my ninja pouch and draw a kunai with coord attached from my pouch I charge towards blade from behind and making the tiger handseal while holding my kunai I stab blade up...the behind while letting go of the kunai with my right hand and using my right hand to wrap the. Ninja wire all the way around blades leg wrapping the wire just below his knee but still higher than his ankle
As he reacts to the 1000 years of death by doing the natural reflex of trying to jump into the air I pull on the cord sending blades right leg to launch out from behind him leaving him of balance and mang him land in a splits formation with his left leg forward and right leg behind him

 

[Scorps]

*I take a kunai and place it between my fingers making the tiger seal and infuse it with lightning chakra using chidori nagashi i then run behind Flash and jam it up his butt releasing the lightning paralyzing him*

I have to shove my fingers up blades behind -_- what a drag...and I have to use it in my own creative way ill give it a shot of course hmm

I reach into my ninja pouch and draw a kunai with coord attached from my pouch I charge towards blade from behind and making the tiger handseal while holding my kunai I stab blade up...the behind while letting go of the kunai with my right hand and using my right hand to wrap the. Ninja wire all the way around blades leg wrapping the wire just below his knee but still higher than his ankle
As he reacts to the 1000 years of death by doing the natural reflex of trying to jump into the air I pull on the cord sending blades right leg to launch out from behind him leaving him of balance and mang him land in a splits formation with his left leg forward and right leg behind him

White... S&M much? Well, think about poison, explosion tags, heating the kunai through fire chakra, etc etc

Questions babes?

 

[System001]

S and M?

 

[-Blade-]

1 question...
What are the effects of mine

 

[Scorps]

S and M?

nvm ^^

1 question...
What are the effects of mine

Well, its a good use. you'll paralyze your enemy...if you can manage to use that jutsu ^^


Now, i teach taijutsu in a different way than most senseis. I'll post 3 to 4 techniques and i want you both to describe how you do them and use them in combos with one and other (use the techniques in a fluid combo if possible). Remember to target vital areas and use the techniques as generic guidelines and not static moves. Creativity and clarity are essential. Right?

You are to target my clones *makes 2 clones*. My clones are very special and they won't disperse if hit and will remain active throughout the whole training, one for each. I call the right one Teddy and the left one Babe.

Now, first ones:

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest

(Konoha Reppu) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack that is a comprised of a leg sweep.

(Konoha Senpu) - Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user makes a jumping spin kick up high and while opponent has ducked makes a mid-level kick that connects in the rib cage area.

 

[System001]

tough one hmm
I charge towards teddy quickly closing the distance I do a jumping roundhouse kick with my right leg going counter clockwise doing a full 360 degree turn and when your clone ducks I follow up with a mid level kick with my left leg swinging my leg straight forward instead of in a semicircular motion ending with my foot jabbing into their left ribs I then push of of they're abdomen and do a backflip using your clone as a vertical spring board sending leaving me around five feet from teddy with teddy hunched over and staggering backwards from my blow
I then charge towards hunched over teddy and jumping kick him in the solar plexus with my right foot after my foot lands in his chest I spin in a clockwise motion with my foot still extended pushing off with my left leg and landing on the floor in a press up formation with my legs facing hunched over teddy and my head facing away from him I then do a clock wise "windmill" sweeping teddys sweeping teddys left leg high into the air with my left leg sending him hurtling backwards and causing him to land on his back
I then spring upwards and deliver a dropping punch to teddys temple (or if I must his chest)

 

[-Blade-]

Guess that means i take Babe...Why you chose that name i will never know -_-

*I run toward the clone at full speed and punch him in the chest with my right hand enough to throw him off balance, as he is stumbling i do a jumping 360 roundhouse kick with my left leg that the clone ducks i then aim my right leg at his rib cage knocking him back as i spin around on my left leg i do a sweeping leg kick knocking the clone to the ground, i then jump up and do a canonball kick to the clones stomach*

 

[Scorps]

tough one hmm
I charge towards teddy quickly closing the distance I do a jumping roundhouse kick with my right leg going counter clockwise doing a full 360 degree turn and when your clone ducks I follow up with a mid level kick with my left leg swinging my leg straight forward instead of in a semicircular motion ending with my foot jabbing into their left ribs I then push of of they're abdomen and do a backflip using your clone as a vertical spring board sending leaving me around five feet from teddy with teddy hunched over and staggering backwards from my blow
I then charge towards hunched over teddy and jumping kick him in the solar plexus with my right foot after my foot lands in his chest I spin in a clockwise motion with my foot still extended pushing off with my left leg and landing on the floor in a press up formation with my legs facing hunched over teddy and my head facing away from him I then do a clock wise "windmill" sweeping teddys sweeping teddys left leg high into the air with my left leg sending him hurtling backwards and causing him to land on his back
I then spring upwards and deliver a dropping punch to teddys temple (or if I must his chest)

Guess that means i take Babe...Why you chose that name i will never know -_-

*I run toward the clone at full speed and punch him in the chest with my right hand enough to throw him off balance, as he is stumbling i do a jumping 360 roundhouse kick with my left leg that the clone ducks i then aim my right leg at his rib cage knocking him back as i spin around on my left leg i do a sweeping leg kick knocking the clone to the ground, i then jump up and do a canonball kick to the clones stomach*

Because babe and teddy are awesome.

Now, both failed to a great extent. Try separating the moves into paragraphs sentences. Also, none did the dynamic entry. And white flash, mind telling me what the solar plexus is?

Try again and sperate each move into a given paragraph. Its much easier that way.

 

[System001]

I thought I did my jumping kick when I hit I'm in the solar plexus also
A solar plexus is a spot on your body just above your tummy and just below your lower chest
If you were to poke yourself in your solar plexus you could kinda feel a little bit but just noticabley winded
If you got punched there medium your going red :|
If you get punched there by mike tyson or ali your on the floor crying(depending on how old you are) or just not able to breathe
its a very tender place I suppose if you got stabbed there you'll probably die

Okay I charge towards teddy and launch off with my left foot sending me about a foot into the air hurtling towards teddy
I then extend my right foot while twisting my body counter clockwise and place my right foot on the ground as my right foot makes contact with teddys solar plexus
Sending him sprawling backwards and hunched over and leaving me with my right foot outsreteched and my chest and head turned to the left

I then bring my foot back to the floor and charge towards teddy once more doing a I lauch of with my right leg and do a 360 degree clockwise spin in the air left leg extended keeping my balanced like a rudder and as my body almost finished the full 360 the inside of my foot and ankle is just about to connect with teddys legt temple until he ducks
As he ducks I bring my left leg down and in turn smash my right leg upwards making my knee connect with a spot just underneath teddys nose
With great intensity from the fact that he was duccking and in turn bringing his face closer to my knee which was coming upwards
Leaving teddy with a broken nose

With my left leg firmly planted on the ground I draw my right leg and right arm backwards then whip my right leg forwards and in turn my right fist punching teddy in the throat while stepping into my punch with my right leg which I whipped forwards
Leaving teddy in immsense pain spluttering

I then in a fluid and graceful motion drop down onto my right knee
And extend my left leg forward leaving me in a sort of squatting position
I then push of the ground with my right knee while drawing my left leg backwards. And then swing my right leg while extending it anticlockwise
Hitting your clone just below his knee on the back of his leg pulling his left leg forward with my right leg sending his center of gravity to change to his chest which is now falling backwards causing him to land on his back

I then lift him up and break his nose back into position
"Thanks teddy"

 

[-Blade-]

*I run toward the clone at full speed as i **** my right arm back, as i get closer i begin extending my arm so that when i get close enough my punch would knock Babe off balance and punch him in the chest with my right hand enough to throw him off balance*

*as he is stumbling i do a jumping 360 roundhouse kick with my left leg that the clone ducks as i land on my left leg i then aim my right leg at the left side of his rib cage knocking him back a few feet*

*i spin around on my left leg again as i do a sweeping leg kick with my right leg as he is stumbling knocking the clone to the ground*

*as he is on the ground i then run up a nearby tree and push off as i extend my right leg out focusing my weight im my right leg as it carries me down toward Babe and dropkick the clones nose*

 

[Scorps]

*I run toward the clone at full speed as i **** my right arm back, as i get closer i begin extending my arm so that when i get close enough my punch would knock Babe off balance and punch him in the chest with my right hand enough to throw him off balance*

*as he is stumbling i do a jumping 360 roundhouse kick with my left leg that the clone ducks as i land on my left leg i then aim my right leg at the left side of his rib cage knocking him back a few feet*

*i spin around on my left leg again as i do a sweeping leg kick with my right leg as he is stumbling knocking the clone to the ground*

*as he is on the ground i then run up a nearby tree and push off as i extend my right leg out focusing my weight im my right leg as it carries me down toward Babe and dropkick the clones nose*

I thought I did my jumping kick when I hit I'm in the solar plexus also
A solar plexus is a spot on your body just above your tummy and just below your lower chest
If you were to poke yourself in your solar plexus you could kinda feel a little bit but just noticabley winded
If you got punched there medium your going red :|
If you get punched there by mike tyson or ali your on the floor crying(depending on how old you are) or just not able to breathe
its a very tender place I suppose if you got stabbed there you'll probably die

Okay I charge towards teddy and launch off with my left foot sending me about a foot into the air hurtling towards teddy
I then extend my right foot while twisting my body counter clockwise and place my right foot on the ground as my right foot makes contact with teddys solar plexus
Sending him sprawling backwards and hunched over and leaving me with my right foot outsreteched and my chest and head turned to the left

I then bring my foot back to the floor and charge towards teddy once more doing a I lauch of with my right leg and do a 360 degree clockwise spin in the air left leg extended keeping my balanced like a rudder and as my body almost finished the full 360 the inside of my foot and ankle is just about to connect with teddys legt temple until he ducks
As he ducks I bring my left leg down and in turn smash my right leg upwards making my knee connect with a spot just underneath teddys nose
With great intensity from the fact that he was duccking and in turn bringing his face closer to my knee which was coming upwards
Leaving teddy with a broken nose

With my left leg firmly planted on the ground I draw my right leg and right arm backwards then whip my right leg forwards and in turn my right fist punching teddy in the throat while stepping into my punch with my right leg which I whipped forwards
Leaving teddy in immsense pain spluttering

I then in a fluid and graceful motion drop down onto my right knee
And extend my left leg forward leaving me in a sort of squatting position
I then push of the ground with my right knee while drawing my left leg backwards. And then swing my right leg while extending it anticlockwise
Hitting your clone just below his knee on the back of his leg pulling his left leg forward with my right leg sending his center of gravity to change to his chest which is now falling backwards causing him to land on his back

I then lift him up and break his nose back into position
"Thanks teddy"

Very good. But White flash try to make it a bit more simple and use punctuation. Its very hard to read your descriptions.

Also, note that you must always try to find a way to make your movements fluid. If you hit the head you can't then punch the belly with the same fist. I mean, you can, but its a dumb move. If you hit the head with your left fist your following move would be best to be a jab into the traquea (neck) with your right one. Try to visualize every move.

Also, some spots are quite delicate and tender and will prove more efficient for you to target. Examples:

Eyes
Nose
Ears
Traquea/Neck
Arm Pit
The end of your sternum both the upper end and the lower end
The upper quadrants of your abdomen
The groin
The back of your knees
the aquiles tendon
the wrists
the lower back
the back of your neck


Now, i want you both to try and research the web (nothing too technical or complicated) and give me 5 examples each of what can be triggered by hitting some of those places. ^^

 

[System001]

Hitting someone in the Traquea/neck can cause your adams apple to crush back in on your windpipe cutting off your air supply,it doesnt take much force to collapse.
Depending on the force applied a opponent may be sent spluttering and gasping
Be inable to breathe
or even need immediate medical attention

Arm Pit:
Due to the large amount of nerves found in the armpit punching someone there will probably stun theyre arm and cause moderate pain
if the right pressure and force was applied however it could even go as far as diabling your arm permanatly, There are rumors that someone punching you in the armpit will make you poop xd. Trivia: A boxer was said to have killed someone from punching them in the armpit however in actual fact it was because his opponent had a ruptured pancreas and later died in hospital,but due to the fact that the boxers finisher move was a punch to the armpit called heart punch the press decided to roll with the idea that he had been killed from the armpit punch

Wrist
Due to the wrist having quite a few nerve points and being a vital point for blood flow(its one of the few points in your body where you can feel your pulse due to arterys) if the right amount of pressure is applied it can make your opponent woosey light headed or maybe as far as to drift in and out of conciousness however for most the effects the pressure will have to be applied constantly

Nose
Due to the fact that the nose is made of cartilliage and not bone it can be broken easily.
If you are punched in the nose your cappillaries are likely to be weakened causing your nose to bleed,Your eyes will also usualy water when punched in the nose making it hard to focus on a enemy or anything for that matter

Groin
For a male being hit in the groin is verry painful,due to the fact that it is a very tender place with lots of cappeliaries and of course nerves, a male can even die from being kicked in the groin from trauma being so bad it leads to the formation of blood clots which will often cause problems in other parts of the body causing death

written in my own words and some of them guessed

 

[-Blade-]

Groin-Well getting hit here would definantly immobilize you for a bit since it is probably the most sensitive part of any mans body also since there is nothing to protect it, it is an easy target to go after if you are a tad bit quicker than your opponent

Back of knees-Getting hit here could cause you to lose your balance and also is a key part to breaking down any opponent this would literally bring your opponent to their knees and off balance basically giving you an upper hand

Trachea-Getting hit here is always bad and will always result in one of two things either leave you gasping for air barely able to breath, or death from a crushed windpipe

Eyes-Really shouldnt need an explanation but this would leave you sightless (even Goku got pummeled a bit while he was blinded in SS4) and leaving you to use solely your offer senses which most people arent that good at using and you could be about to take a killing blow and literally not see it coming

Nose-This could screw you up too a bit being that the nose is also a very sensitive spot that is not protected by any bones it also has reactions that react on their on such as getting hit you cant stop from closing your eyes for a bit your eyes will also water on their own leaving you open for another attack