[CFS] Surreal Palm
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Alright, so that's the one where you turn into animals. I'll make it simply Full and Partial variations, and I need to make sure you aren't limited to a single animal.
I have another idea, based on the famous evolution of mankind drawing, where you rebirth multiple tiimes in a line, as you move, so that each of your previous reincarnations get's the damage from any genjutsu you might be suffering from.
Then we need some S rank techs, I have the one idea for the salvador dali's pomegranate's painting, but I'd like some other ones
I have another idea, based on the famous evolution of mankind drawing, where you rebirth multiple tiimes in a line, as you move, so that each of your previous reincarnations get's the damage from any genjutsu you might be suffering from.
Then we need some S rank techs, I have the one idea for the salvador dali's pomegranate's painting, but I'd like some other ones
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So, imagine a scenario where you're blinded or your hearing is impaired. You simply sway your hand in front of your face and the blindness vanishes. Or you could kinda grab the air in front of your face, pulling the blindness into one spot and then you could throw it at the opponent, placing him into his own illusion. Regarding the hearing, if you're in a genjutsu where you can't hear anything, you could just pretend to pull out ear plugs out of your ears to restore your hearing. Obviously, these would be the same rank or stronger than the illusions placed on you, so they could cancel out the current ones.
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What do you think of these?
And would any of you like to submit this one?
( Shu-rute: Uchuu Kata Shita ⋔ Kujira ) Surreal Palm: Under the Uberous Universe ⋔ Cosmos
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Allows the parting of the world to plunge the chaos into oblivion. The user will stretch out both arms, and, with them, part the whole world in half, along with any illusion ( of the same rank ), plunging both into the void of the world between both halves of the physical realm. In this void, the targets won't be able to move, as they briefly behold all the wonders of a foreign and marvelous galaxy, filled with countless constellations and astronomical phenomenons, along side cosmical behemoths, oceanic-like creatures floating in the void as if it were a black sea, before the practitioner slaps both hands again, crushing the targets between both halves of the now tilted world, wedged between physical realm and void, passing out from the mental damage. The void lasts but mere seconds, but it's wonders are engraved in the target's memories. While the illusion can target multiple people, within range, each will see the world part exactly in the middle, in a straight line between themselves and the practitioner.
Once the user slaps both hands together, closing both halves, a blast of chakra is released, up to short range, all around or in a single direction. This chakra blast, S rank in strength, can be composed of raw or acquire an elemental nature from the user.
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Can't use Genjutsu in the same turn*
*Can't use Surreal Palm Techniques for two turns*
*Blasts follows elemental S/W*
*Can't use techniques belonging to the nature of the blast used on the next turn*
( Shu-rute: Ittenbari Ubuge ⋔ Nou ) Surreal Palm: Perishing Persistence ⋔ Memory
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 ( +5 per turn active )
Damage Points: 40
Description: Allows the softening of the chaos to collapse one's notions of a time, space and a fixed cosmic order and achieve balance. The form consists of up to 5 physical motions which in turn soften and bend the world around, inside the illusion. Everything melts down and liquefies, and the practitioner guides the abstract goo of the fabrics of reality through the physical motions. Easiest way to comprehend this illusion is to think of the affected objects, which can be anything, including the whole realm of the illusion itself as a slimy substance that, when immobile, looks exactly as the original ( the ground, a tree, the sky, the user, the target ) but, when moved, behaves like slime, even if it retains the same colors and textures. With this softened reality, the user is able to wrap the target in tight gooey hands, impossibly stretch oneself or make one's limbs like rubber, to make one's physical attacks more unpredictable, etc. After the five motions, which can be a combination physical strikes ( hence the damage ) and binding illusionary wraps, the user is free to perform a finisher where the practitioner will place him/herself behind the opponent, back to back and, holding the neck and the legs, clutch the opponent backwards, breaking their back with a lever motion, disrupting the genjutsu, or simply move on to other attacks, leaving behind a constricted opponent within an illusion.
*The user may divide the 5 motions between multiple turns, spending chakra for each and counting as a move towards the jutsu count*
*Non-Finisher usages leave the target binded for 2 turns before the genjutsu ends. This does not require extra chakra, it's merely lingering genjutsu*
*Each physical strike disrupts the illusion for a fraction of a second, unless it's after the 5 motions, where any fitting physical strike will disrupt the genjutsu as normal*
*Can only be used 4 times per battle*
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And would any of you like to submit this one?
( Shu-rute: Uchuu Kata Shita ⋔ Kujira ) Surreal Palm: Under the Uberous Universe ⋔ Cosmos
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Allows the parting of the world to plunge the chaos into oblivion. The user will stretch out both arms, and, with them, part the whole world in half, along with any illusion ( of the same rank ), plunging both into the void of the world between both halves of the physical realm. In this void, the targets won't be able to move, as they briefly behold all the wonders of a foreign and marvelous galaxy, filled with countless constellations and astronomical phenomenons, along side cosmical behemoths, oceanic-like creatures floating in the void as if it were a black sea, before the practitioner slaps both hands again, crushing the targets between both halves of the now tilted world, wedged between physical realm and void, passing out from the mental damage. The void lasts but mere seconds, but it's wonders are engraved in the target's memories. While the illusion can target multiple people, within range, each will see the world part exactly in the middle, in a straight line between themselves and the practitioner.
Once the user slaps both hands together, closing both halves, a blast of chakra is released, up to short range, all around or in a single direction. This chakra blast, S rank in strength, can be composed of raw or acquire an elemental nature from the user.
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Can't use Genjutsu in the same turn*
*Can't use Surreal Palm Techniques for two turns*
*Blasts follows elemental S/W*
*Can't use techniques belonging to the nature of the blast used on the next turn*
( Shu-rute: Ittenbari Ubuge ⋔ Nou ) Surreal Palm: Perishing Persistence ⋔ Memory
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 ( +5 per turn active )
Damage Points: 40
Description: Allows the softening of the chaos to collapse one's notions of a time, space and a fixed cosmic order and achieve balance. The form consists of up to 5 physical motions which in turn soften and bend the world around, inside the illusion. Everything melts down and liquefies, and the practitioner guides the abstract goo of the fabrics of reality through the physical motions. Easiest way to comprehend this illusion is to think of the affected objects, which can be anything, including the whole realm of the illusion itself as a slimy substance that, when immobile, looks exactly as the original ( the ground, a tree, the sky, the user, the target ) but, when moved, behaves like slime, even if it retains the same colors and textures. With this softened reality, the user is able to wrap the target in tight gooey hands, impossibly stretch oneself or make one's limbs like rubber, to make one's physical attacks more unpredictable, etc. After the five motions, which can be a combination physical strikes ( hence the damage ) and binding illusionary wraps, the user is free to perform a finisher where the practitioner will place him/herself behind the opponent, back to back and, holding the neck and the legs, clutch the opponent backwards, breaking their back with a lever motion, disrupting the genjutsu, or simply move on to other attacks, leaving behind a constricted opponent within an illusion.
*The user may divide the 5 motions between multiple turns, spending chakra for each and counting as a move towards the jutsu count*
*Non-Finisher usages leave the target binded for 2 turns before the genjutsu ends. This does not require extra chakra, it's merely lingering genjutsu*
*Each physical strike disrupts the illusion for a fraction of a second, unless it's after the 5 motions, where any fitting physical strike will disrupt the genjutsu as normal*
*Can only be used 4 times per battle*
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Lili-Chwan
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Excellent contribution, mr newly appointed NB medical nin. not even a comment of praise. I incorporated your idea in Sapien's Scion
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Oh, I like these two a lot but I'm not that sure about the apple thing. I don't really get it. O_O And the other two that you submitted are very good. You pretty much thought of everything.
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It's like you move around, but your face, in the illusion, stays in the same spot, floating around. This face has all your senses so, any blindness, deafness, etc that the opponent causes will be transfered to it, leaving you unharmed.
The grid of apples is more like background beautification, and also for the opponent to focus on, so that I could align my eye sight with them, as they look at the apples xD
You two! How do you even dare to get that far without me >_>
I am really liking the Cosmos one. Outstanding job Lili! I have one question though, about the "Perishing Persistence ⋔ Memory"-one. Can you give me an example of a battle scenario in which you are going to use it?
I am really liking the Cosmos one. Outstanding job Lili! I have one question though, about the "Perishing Persistence ⋔ Memory"-one. Can you give me an example of a battle scenario in which you are going to use it?
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There's plenty of usages for this technique. It's a B rank, so it can be used as a standalone technique against C rank an bellow, it can be used to manipulate B ranks and it can be used to add to A ranks and above. Let's call it Solo, Duet and Choir usages.
Solo Usage: Imagine throwing a fist, and, to your opponent, it appears as if your while arm is melting and waving, making it harder to block. Imagine you rising your hands and the ground melts upwards, like a goo that wraps around your opponent.
Imagine pulling your fists inwards, and with them, your opponent feels his belly being expanded and dilated towards yourself, which causes discomfort.
Duet Usage: Imagine being binded by Tree Binding Death, you simply bring your arms outwards and the branches melt away from you. And then you motion your arms forward, and the melted/liquid branches are shot towards your opponent.
Choir Usage: Imagine something that is wrapping around you, you then jump upwards and melt your whole body. The wrappers are trying to binding you, but you're already out of range of the initial ropes, so they simply wrap around your residues, freeing your senses to keep on going.
Solo Usage: Imagine throwing a fist, and, to your opponent, it appears as if your while arm is melting and waving, making it harder to block. Imagine you rising your hands and the ground melts upwards, like a goo that wraps around your opponent.
Imagine pulling your fists inwards, and with them, your opponent feels his belly being expanded and dilated towards yourself, which causes discomfort.
Duet Usage: Imagine being binded by Tree Binding Death, you simply bring your arms outwards and the branches melt away from you. And then you motion your arms forward, and the melted/liquid branches are shot towards your opponent.
Choir Usage: Imagine something that is wrapping around you, you then jump upwards and melt your whole body. The wrappers are trying to binding you, but you're already out of range of the initial ropes, so they simply wrap around your residues, freeing your senses to keep on going.
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