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Right! Remember don't be afraid to ask questions :).

Alright so the next technique is highly situational and quite difficult to set up. You'll probably immediately recognize this as the technique Zabuza used on Team 7 in the very early days of the Manga/Anime. It was also used by Kisame. You begin by weaving a few hand seals and then spreading out your dominant palm to shape the water prison. Now, perform the technique and then lets open up discussion about it :). Read the description carefully.


(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water by waving the Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare → Hands spread in front palms out. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This technique requires a sufficient amount of water, which can be provided by expelling it from one's mouth. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself. Water clones can be used in preparation for the technique, which block an opponent's attack and trap the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.
 

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Zabuza is irrelevant. Hail Kisame!

Hell Autarch weaved the Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare handseals and.. I have a question before I complete my description. Can my descriptions be like normal or super long like last time?
 

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Zabuza is irrelevant. Hail Kisame!

Hell Autarch weaved the Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare handseals and.. I have a question before I complete my description. Can my descriptions be like normal or super long like last time?
I expect detail. Just talk about the molding of your chakra and shape manipulation of the technique. It doesn't have to be a wallie but I do expect effort. It shows that you understand how it is used.
 

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Ordered to perform the Suiro no Jutsu, Kazuya immediately complied. He applied pressure to the sphere of chakra, present at his lower torso; the sphere of chakra was perhaps the essence of life that existed in every Ninja. His body set out almost immediately, as it drained physical energy from the living cells that were present within his body and spiritual energy from the thoughts that resided within Kazuya's mind. The physical and spiritual energy was gathered at the chakra coil, and churned, to perhaps merge it with one another in order to strengthen Chakra. Otherwise, it would not have been possible for Kazuya to properly perform a jutsu.

When it was about time, the chakra was molded and compressed; as Nature Transformation was applied upon it; leisurely altering the properties of the chakra. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. He was well aware by now, that he had been successful in altering the properties of his chakra and channeled it to the surface of his skin, that is the epidermis. Perhaps.. Why not Kazuya's palm? Why not?

Nevertheless, Kazuya carried on; weaving a series of handseals that verily are so damn irrelevant that I won't even copy paste them here like I copy pasted the first two paragraphs. Once Kazuya had done so, he applied shape transformation to the chakra whilst increasing the viscosity of his chakra. At the correct moment, he decided to thrust his palm outward releasing a sphere of chakra that quickly gathered around Drackos, surrounding him completely and trapping him in an inescapable sphere of chakra.

Now.. DIE!

OMG OMG HI DRACKOS. MY REPLY SUCKS IK. .-.
 

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Ordered to perform the Suiro no Jutsu, Kazuya immediately complied. He applied pressure to the sphere of chakra, present at his lower torso; the sphere of chakra was perhaps the essence of life that existed in every Ninja. His body set out almost immediately, as it drained physical energy from the living cells that were present within his body and spiritual energy from the thoughts that resided within Kazuya's mind. The physical and spiritual energy was gathered at the chakra coil, and churned, to perhaps merge it with one another in order to strengthen Chakra. Otherwise, it would not have been possible for Kazuya to properly perform a jutsu.

When it was about time, the chakra was molded and compressed; as Nature Transformation was applied upon it; leisurely altering the properties of the chakra. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. He was well aware by now, that he had been successful in altering the properties of his chakra and channeled it to the surface of his skin, that is the epidermis. Perhaps.. Why not Kazuya's palm? Why not?

Nevertheless, Kazuya carried on; weaving a series of handseals that verily are so damn irrelevant that I won't even copy paste them here like I copy pasted the first two paragraphs. Once Kazuya had done so, he applied shape transformation to the chakra whilst increasing the viscosity of his chakra. At the correct moment, he decided to thrust his palm outward releasing a sphere of chakra that quickly gathered around Drackos, surrounding him completely and trapping him in an inescapable sphere of chakra.

Now.. DIE!

OMG OMG HI DRACKOS. MY REPLY SUCKS IK. .-.
You didn't have to go THAT depth in detail. And no your reply doesn't suck. Have some confidence lol.

Anyways, just a note. The sphere isn't simply chakra once its released. Its very much water made of water chakra. Now, so good note on the viscosity on the technique. You're definitely right about that that the water used in this technique is made in such a way that the pressure is incredibly high once trapped making movement nearly impossible. Which is why if you do get trapped in this technique you're quite limited on options as you can't weave hand seals, you can't actually move your body, or anything of the sorts. Although you're still quite capable of releasing chakra from your body which is how you would escape from this and defend yourself. Now when you're using this its quite situational and hard to set up. I personally have never set this up before and on top of that there is a better version of it (B-Rank) which we will learn later.

Anyways, questions?
 

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Oh gawd, I am late again.

So, what technique does one use to get out of this jutsu?
Sup, so my training style can be either of two ways. After I post the technique you would simply need to do a performance and analysis of the technique and if im happy with what you have provided we can continue onto the next. From reading your descriptions so far they are quite good, so this is likely the better method to use.

However if I am consistently unhappy with your reply we will switch to a template based training that outlines the techniques more clearly, though we could start with this method from the offset if you wish.

You also have the option of RP style training if you prefer, which is likely better suited to the first method. The choice is yours and then we can begin :)
 

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Sup, so my training style can be either of two ways. After I post the technique you would simply need to do a performance and analysis of the technique and if im happy with what you have provided we can continue onto the next. From reading your descriptions so far they are quite good, so this is likely the better method to use.

However if I am consistently unhappy with your reply we will switch to a template based training that outlines the techniques more clearly, though we could start with this method from the offset if you wish.

You also have the option of RP style training if you prefer, which is likely better suited to the first method. The choice is yours and then we can begin :)
The First Method preferably.
 

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The First Method preferably.
Alright then, lets continue on with the techniques.

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

Focus your chakra throughout your body and manipulate it into forming water, effectively turning your body into a liquid. Although this technique is an effective defense against physical attacks, it is still vulnerable to energy based attacks such as lightning. I also believe it counts as one of your substitutions in a battle.
 

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Kazuya complied, and began weaving his chakra. He began converting his chakra, introducing the element of Suiton by altering its properties. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. Kazuya then proceeded to channel this chakra throughout his body, drastically increasing the level of water present within his body; bringing his cells to turgid-conditions. Utilizing Shape Manipulation, and Nature Transformation; Kazuya effectively turned his body into a liquid and subsequently turned into a puddle of water.
 

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Kazuya complied, and began weaving his chakra. He began converting his chakra, introducing the element of Suiton by altering its properties. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. Kazuya then proceeded to channel this chakra throughout his body, drastically increasing the level of water present within his body; bringing his cells to turgid-conditions. Utilizing Shape Manipulation, and Nature Transformation; Kazuya effectively turned his body into a liquid and subsequently turned into a puddle of water.
Good performance, though ill need an analysis of the technique as well. Just the advantages and disadvantages and anything else you notice about the technique.
 
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Good performance, though ill need an analysis of the technique as well. Just the advantages and disadvantages and anything else you notice about the technique.
Advantages
  • Is an effective jutsu that can be utilized to defend against incoming Taijutsu or Kenjutsu attacks, considering the fact that it transforms the body into liquid state and hence impervious to such attacks.
  • Can be used to slip through 'small holes' or even solid barriers [Not Fuiin etc] etc, any such opening through which the user would in solid state be unable to path through.
Disadvantages
  • The user cannot attack whilst in this form.
  • The Jutsu is ineffective against techniques involving 'chakra', and leaves the user highly vulnerable to Raiton Jutsu.
  • The user could possibly even 'evaporate' if a Katon Jutsu is used against him.
 

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Advantages
  • Is an effective jutsu that can be utilized to defend against incoming Taijutsu or Kenjutsu attacks, considering the fact that it transforms the body into liquid state and hence impervious to such attacks.
  • Can be used to slip through 'small holes' or even solid barriers [Not Fuiin etc] etc, any such opening through which the user would in solid state be unable to path through.
Disadvantages
  • The user cannot attack whilst in this form.
  • The Jutsu is ineffective against techniques involving 'chakra', and leaves the user highly vulnerable to Raiton Jutsu.
  • The user could possibly even 'evaporate' if a Katon Jutsu is used against him.
The bolded above isn't quite correct, this technique is an effective defense against solid and tangible attacks even though they still contain chakra. However its weakness is energy attacks such as fire or lightning which would still affect you in your watery state. Next technique.

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Channel your chakra into the earth in front of you and build up a small amount there. Then form the tiger hand seal and slam your foot on the ground, manipulating the built up chakra into forming a thin jet of water that can slice through solid objects with ease. This is a decent attacking technique, it does not have a large area of effect though which means it can be easier to dodge and it is limited to enemies who are still on the ground due to the way it travels.
 

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Well, during my fight with the Pervy Sage, I got sealed by this jutsu because apparently the chakra arms could still pull me in regardless of whether I became liquid or not.

(Kinjutsu: Edo Fūmetsu) - Forbidden Technique: Impure World Seal Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps their hands, causing a coffin, much like the ones used in Impure World Reincarnation, to erupt from a portal near the opponent. The coffin opens up, and ghostly arms reach out from the coffin and catch the opponent. If they successfully catch the opponent, he will be immobilized and unable to react. The arms drag him into the coffin and take him to the netherworld, a dimension separate from reality and which can only be escaped from via Space/Time techniques.
Note: The arms reach only up to short range of the coffin's position
Note: This technique can only be used twice per battle.


Kazuya complied, and began kneading his chakra. He began converting his chakra, introducing the element of Suiton by altering its properties. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. Kazuya then proceeded to channel this chakra into the earth, and weaving the Tiger handseal, simultaneously stomping the ground and releasing a thin jet of water.

Advantages
1. Can be effectively used to defend against incoming Taijutsu attacks.
2. Can easily slice through most objects with ease.
3. Does not require a water source.

Disadvantages
1. The handseal, and the subsequently slamming the ground gives away the element of surprise.
2. Can easily be defended against using a D Ranked Earth Technique.
 

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Well, during my fight with the Pervy Sage, I got sealed by this jutsu because apparently the chakra arms could still pull me in regardless of whether I became liquid or not.

(Kinjutsu: Edo Fūmetsu) - Forbidden Technique: Impure World Seal Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps their hands, causing a coffin, much like the ones used in Impure World Reincarnation, to erupt from a portal near the opponent. The coffin opens up, and ghostly arms reach out from the coffin and catch the opponent. If they successfully catch the opponent, he will be immobilized and unable to react. The arms drag him into the coffin and take him to the netherworld, a dimension separate from reality and which can only be escaped from via Space/Time techniques.
Note: The arms reach only up to short range of the coffin's position
Note: This technique can only be used twice per battle.


Kazuya complied, and began kneading his chakra. He began converting his chakra, introducing the element of Suiton by altering its properties. Kazuya concentrated on power and control, increasing the fluditiy of the chakra whilst decreasing its viscosity however maintaining a certain level. Kazuya then proceeded to channel this chakra into the earth, and weaving the Tiger handseal, simultaneously stomping the ground and releasing a thin jet of water.

Advantages
1. Can be effectively used to defend against incoming Taijutsu attacks.
2. Can easily slice through most objects with ease.
3. Does not require a water source.

Disadvantages
1. The handseal, and the subsequently slamming the ground gives away the element of surprise.
2. Can easily be defended against using a D Ranked Earth Technique.
That is correct, since the water substitute technique is vulnerable to chakra and energy based attacks. Very good on the water cutter, next technique.

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

Channel your water chakra into your mouth and build up a small amount there. Once you have done so focus the chakra outwards and use nature manipulation to release a wave of water. Shape the wave so that it is focused and with multiple uses you can even carve out rock. This is a simple technique and can be useful due to its quick nature.
 
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