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So if I wanted to seen as how I have smoke mastered I could simply use multi smoke clones and when you proceed to use the multiple whips to attack that then the clones disperse leaving smoke on the field I then utilize smoke bind jutsu and apprehend you while simply using a low level fire attack to burn you to a crisp.

That would be a smart way to counter as well if you ask me.
 

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Franky speaking, not much knowledge about Smoky stuffs ._.

I hope the technique is clear so that we can move on.

You don't care about my Ice-cream do you :|
 

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Lets continue now that I have finished my icecream
 

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Applied Science Time, I would like you to prepare a 3 move combo to attack my clone, out of the 3 jutsu atleast one should be a water technique that you have learned so far.

Brings a 5KG pack and starts eating eat while you do the hard work.
 

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Kirio: good it looks as though the master has stayed in one spot for the time being. I shall put a stop to there miserable live for betraying the code. Kirio begins kneading a large portion of chakra inside her body and expels a massive stream of flame out frm her mouth which soars with immense heat towards the her master.


(Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.


I begin by taking a kunai and holding my hand up cutting ever so slightly With the kunai to show my enemy how serious I am I then wipe the blood across my face with a demonic warrior look in my eye's giving off a serial killer like state of mind to anyone nearby. Thus creating an effect of wanting to kill and not caring about my own body in the process I just want to see blood by any means necessary. After which I toss the kunai at you as not to keep it on me because of the trackers scent ability's.

(Sakki) - Killing Intent
Rank: D - S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 10 - 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Killing Intent is simply the user giving off their pure killing intention, and having it affect their opponent and others around them up to the point of paralyzing them. When the Killing Intent is particularly strong, it can even give the victim visions of their own gruesome death. This can cause the Killing Intent to be confused with a genjutsu, despite not being a genjutsu at all.
Note: Intensity of technique depends on the rank of the user



Whilst anylizing the situation I perform the tiger seal and raise my left hand into the air and create an orb of water above my hand which can send out whips of water to subdue or potentially harm my teacher. Using multiple whips I track your movements and proceed to lash out with force.


(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.


going with these three as the last two techniques support the first one pretty well it is not a instant keep pressure on the enemy combo but rather a think about what my enemy may try to do attack. Also I managed to pick techniques which all have the same range ability meaning that I could utilize any of these at any range or even while advancing a little.
 

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Correct me if wrong but the killing Intent technique that you posted is out dated, the below one is the new one.

(Sakki) - Killing Intent
Rank: D - S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Killing Intent pertains to the ability of the user giving off their pure killing intention and having it affect their opponent and others around them up to the point of paralyzing them. When the Killing Intent is particularly strong, it can even give the victim visions of their own gruesome death, nausea, pain, etc. This can cause the Killing Intent to be confused with a genjutsu, despite not being a genjutsu at all; simply a showcase of intention and power. The target will feel as if facing an overwhelming enemy and, even if not a sensor, will suddenly feel the pressure of the users chakra and its magnitude, making the effect that much more dramatic. To effectively be used, the user needs to focus on his target and concentrate on the killing intent towards it, meaning that one must see the target and be focused on it. The strength of the Killing Intent is dependent on many factors and go through several levels. If a difference in rank smaller than 2 ranks exist, the enemy will feel only the pressure and the ominous presence of their dark intentions. Its enough to lose your grasp on a weapon or stay clinched to it (depending on the situation) or even to hesitate in an attack, stumble or mess up a handseal, all depending on the situation and proximity. The effect is small and normally not that significant but can be effectively used to pressure enemies into making a mistake. If a difference of 2 ranks or more exist, the enemy will be frozen, almost unable to move as the overwhelming killing intent dominates their own conscious and riddles them with nightmarish versions of death. The paralyzation gradually weakens as time passes and can only be maintained while the user is focused on the target. The further away the target, the weaker it is and it can only fully paralyze a target within short range. Similarly, the more targets one focuses on, the weaker the effect is in each one (divinding the effects equally between the number of targets). Lastly, the stronger the user is in relation to the target, the stronger the effect will be. The target can counter Killing Intent directed at it through pain, "mind cleansing" techniques or their own Killing Intent.
Note: Intensity of technique depends on the rank of the user, distance to target and number of targets one is focusing on
Note: Can only be used once
Note: Lasts only while the user is focusing on it and while focusing on it the user can't mold chakra
 

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Could be not sure I am still working on ninjutsu with Malcolm and the one I used what was he posted.
 

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Well I am right then, so your move is discarded as Killing intent can no longer be used in the manner you did, so please make an another move while keeping this in mind.
 

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Kirio stands nice and firm sweat glistening off her voluptuous breasts as she builds up a steady proportion of chakra and proceeds to make the tiger handsign while focusing on a visual image of myself from my purple hair all the way to my perfectly formed butt I then cast my chakra out and form a clone of myself which stands firm as well with purple hair and a nice round booty while her hair shines in the sun. Standing a foot apart from the real Kirio.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Kirio Clone: good it looks as though the master has stayed in one spot for the time being. I shall put a stop to this banter for a short while. Kirio clone begins kneading a large portion of chakra inside her body and expels a massive stream of flame out frm her mouth which soars with immense heat towards the her master.


(Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.

Kirio:
Whilst anylizing the situation after the fire stops I perform the tiger seal and raise my left hand into the air and create an orb of water above my hand which can send out whips of water to subdue or potentially harm my teacher. Using multiple whips I track your movements and proceed to lash out with force.

(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

Notes to be said on this attacking at the same time would be senseless as fire and water the fire would just be a hindrance to my last technique which is why I wait till after the fire technique finishes and follow up with the water still having a shadow clone left on the field. Also a water clone cannot use B rank water techniques so shadow clone was the way to go.

I could use lightning like how you described but I don't wanna copy what you already told me.
 

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Okay I like the fact that you know about the water clone limitation so very well with that stuff and one other limitation associated with that clone is that it can only go up to mid range so less mobility.

Now the main problem in your move was mentioned by you only, now why does one create a clone?

One creates a clone to perform a combo or attack from multiple sides at he same time, now your move is nothing more than giving advantage to your opponent due to two reasons.

1. the moment you create clone he will go offensive on you leaving you to defend from his technique, but with a clone you can easily attack and defend at the same time but yes you will have to defend if he attacks and if he creates a clone himself, well them your numerical advantage over him is fished.

2. okay if yow wanted to attack one after the other then why make a clone?, you did not want to follow my lighnting water combo but it is not my idea it is a common sense to use water with lightning as they linked with each other, fire is just opposite of water and I don't say it is wrong to use fire and then water, its all cool but all that I can't understand is the purpose of clone and now you say that you will remain with a clone, well let me tell you only a noob will give a easy time with a such a move.

In all the move is not upto the mark, you could use your clone to send a water attack towards your opponent while you yourself send a blast of lightning towards him from the sky and many more ways to attack, the key is attack from multiple position or a good powerful combo which puts pressure on them.

Hope I am clear?

Now would you like to perform an another combo or continue with the next jutsu and promise to perform better the next time I tell you to perform a combo.

The choice is yours for the time being.

Side note- I looked your description of yourself and your clone u.u
 

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Yeah after i made the choice of moves i was like damn i could have done other things but i was too busy at work to change it and yeah your right about all fronts of what has been said i will do better next time.
 

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(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.


A great water technique, now the reason it is good is that it requires the use of single hand seal thus it is fast, does not require water source........ figure the rest yourself it’s like I am telling you all the pros, I told you two so at least tell me one more, I will add the reaming stuffs but I hope you find them all out.

Now on its working part, well do a single hand seal while molding your chakra in your mouth and then release it in form of a large sphere, you can also opt for 3 small spheres which move at much fast pace, it leaves the area soaked with water once it explodes on contact.
 

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Strong points

  • - Insert info - requires minimal handsigns these can be crucial points when you don't have water as a specialty.
  • - Insert info - can be used in two different ways one big sphere or three smaller spheres
  • - Insert info - the smaller spheres are faster than using one bigger sphere. Range of these are great as well.

Weak points

  • - Insert info - okay just like how some techniques lose power by branching I wanna think that making 3 spheres is lowering the power but still making it faster.
  • - Insert info -leaves the battle field soaked as they explode can be beneficial and both bad for later attacks.
  • - Insert info - hmm watch out for a lightning counter attack. Not sure how you send these spheres towards your enemy as shots from the mouth or by hand and chakra

Combinations-strategies follow up with lightning as this technique leaves the enemy and surrounding radius soaked
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.


Ways to counter:
(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
I think this would work as you told me the best defense sometimes is a good offense.
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Any questions?

As I stated above does the branching rule apply here when splitting a jutsu down to make more of the attack.
 

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It is released from the mouth it is there is the description part and my explanation, nice combo and defense.

Please elaborate on your second weak point.


When branching the jutsu it attack points are equally distributed among the three.

you forgot to write how you perform it, so please do that also.
 

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Beginning by doing a single handseal and moulding Suiton chakra in my mouth. I open my mouth and expell three small spheres of water from my mouth which shoot out across the battlefield at my enemy the first two directed at both shoulders and the third at the groin. upon contact with the enemy the sphere's explode leaving the field in a rain like drenched state which is then suitable for a pretty badass raiton technique to fry some fishy's.

I stated in my description about the water soaking the field and how.
 

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(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

Okay, this one is easy to perform and does not require a water source, just begin by doing a tiger hand seal and create a jet of water right in front of you, this jet of water will then charge towards your opponent at great pace, it is strong enough to slice through solid rocks.
 

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Kirio begins by performing a single handsign Tiger seal. Then she proceeds to form a jet of water in front of myself sendng it across the earth as it travels towards my enemy cutting through anything in it's path.


Strong points

  • - Insert info - requires minimal handsigns
  • - Insert info - can cut through the ground and other stuff like trees small rocks etc
  • - Insert info - very fast and simple
    -also no water source required

Weak points

  • - Insert info - cannot control the paths it takes basically a straight shot.
  • - Insert info - will only reach to mid range.
  • - Insert info -

Combinations-strategies
I would follow up this attack with a wind attack probly this one

(Fūton: Kaze Rasen Yaiba Rendan no justu) - Wind Release: Wind Spinning Blade Barrage Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: A more advanced version he user uses their Giant Folding fan or Giant Fan and swing it forwards at the target creating a single spinning disk of wind that ressembles a demon wind shuriken. A non wielder of the Giant Folding Fan or Giant Fan can perform this technique with use of four hand seals and releasing wind from their mouth and using shape manipulation to form the disk of wind.


Ways to counter:
Hurricane wall may redirect this or even stop it in its tracks
Or maybe rock scale slab never used that one before.
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What is with Juvia in the image o_O *Gray runs away*

I did not quite understand the purpose of the combination technique, fine use a wind attack but why this one? and why not lightning.

If wind why not direct it towards the opponent from sky instead of an head on attack, this way it is hard to deal with.

(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

I never used this technique in battle to begin with, Now it required 6 hand seal and after that you create spinning column of water which you shape manipulate into a snake with an awesome jaw, now this snakes follows your enemy and binds them while twisting around them and then go on to swallow them, it then turns into water wave and carries them away, yup it was pretty much self explanatory but still...................... okay now my views, it’s a great tech although it has no damage dealing capacity, mainly because of its range and you can always charge it with raiton to make it BS ;)
 

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Kirio begins by performing the sequence of handsigns needed. Then she proceeds to form a column of water which manipulates into the shape of a large snake. The snake slithers out over the ground and wraps around my enemy from the ground up then proceeds to lock it's jaws over the head of the enemy. The snake then disperses creating a wave of water which washs the enemy away.


Strong points

  • - Insert info - does not require a source of water. decent scale size will leave the battlefield soaking wet
  • - Insert info - has a double effect creating a wave after binding and somewhat chomping/wave.
  • - Insert info - easy to follow up and combo with lightning also this technique is probly able to be controlled directional wise.

Weak points

  • - Insert info - to many damn handsigns.
  • - Insert info -larger scale supplementary which is probly slower than most binding attacks.
  • - Insert info - does not do damage but will leave that area suitable for a lightning attack.

Combinations-strategies
I would follow up this attack with a lightning to shock and awe effect. Any low level attack which can be shot out.

B]Ways to counter:[/B]
Well I believe countering this would be a mud wall because of the double effect of creating a wave afterwords. So you would wanna block the wave from getting to your area. Or you could user a simple ice attack to freeze this snake while moving.
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it is moderate in terms of speed.

If you have yuki clan bio then yes, there is more to earth techs then mud wall u.u

(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: An advanced version of Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough in which the user can summon up to three sharks at once rapidly to advance on the target, and can cause severe internal injuries.
Note: Requires a water source

You should be familiar to this one as you have already learned its parent jutsu, now instead of one you go on to create 3 sharks by using more chakra, these shark are comparatively slight bit more stronger.
 
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