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(Suiton: Kōka Suijin) - Water Release: Hard Whirlpool Water Blade
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes the water under the enemy explode, launching them into the air. Then the user jumps above the enemy and creates a large whirlpool around his arm, striking the enemy with it and creating a large water explosion.
Note: Water source required.

A multiple performance jutsu. The user will create a water pool under the opponent and launch them in the air, at the same time they are launched the user will also jump and appear from behind generating a large amount of water around his arm and strike the opponent. Causing a very large explosion of water. Evasion is tough mid-air as well as it is very deadly for a jutsu. The opponent will have several broken bones and surviving this jutsu would be tough. Now this is a combo in itself but being able to distract the opponent before hand is best. Also if you are ever launched in the air, it will not cause harm, the damage comes from the punch. Best thing to do while mid-air is create a armor, or try to blow away.

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Release: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the Ram → Horse → Bird the user is able to create a technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Note: Requires a nearby water source

Okay after doing 3 hand seals the user will manipulate a near by water source close range of them and manipulate it to spin around the user as a tornado. The main purpose of the vortex is to simply defend from incoming attacks since it can be used as a barrier as well as if the opponent is hit by the barrier it can easily impale them as well as push them back due to the force it gives off. The user is able to move around up to long range and can attack multiple opponents. They move at regular speed so they are traceable with the naked eye. Two obvious ways to counter is the opponent will be open to lightning attacks as well as you can simply hurt the base of the vortex on the ground so making the ground shake will force it to disperse and lose shape. Their are many other counters. You can't do any other jutsu attack while performing this technique and must keep focus on it. Also as seen when used in the anime you can see through the vortex making it able for you to move freely.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

Okay now this jutsu is very similar to the weaker version and in our RP we use it the same way. The main difference is the opponent will create a giant orb of water that covers the whole area. But that is useless and mainly a double edge sword since you might hurt the opponents movement the same is done with you. The only major difference is if you have a Kisame bio who can swim and breathe under water. So basically this used the same way as the previous one just much more water, ocean like actually. As well as the water is spew with intense speed and powerful vortex that it can crash into the opponent and hurt them as well as drown them underwater. Note this is a streaming technique so you will constantly have to release it which can be dangerous.
 

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(Suiton: Kōka Suijin) - Water Release: Hard Whirlpool Water Blade
Perform the technique: As I perform gushing water imprisonment I channel more suiton chakra into the water, making the water explode as it forms under them sending flying airborne as I jump quickly above them, channeling water chakra around my right arm forming a whirlpool around it as I haul back and punch my opponent square in his chest, creating a large water explosion which cracks his chest plate...
Creative uses/strengths: I like this jutsu, no seals giving away my intentions so it happens very quickly. Being able to launch the enemy into the air like that can cause so many issues cause as you said, evasion is tough in mid air. creating water under the enemy or even trying to lure them onto a water source is key, so Im glad it doesn't have any seals or this wouldn't be very useful. I'm wondering if you could use this (just the water explosion part) and continue onto another jutsu without doing the jump attack part.
Drawbacks/counters: Simply requiring a water source to use, which makes it another one of those situational type jutsu's. And as you stated above, I'd prolly just attempt to get out of the way while in mid air or harden my skin with earth to counter this one. All in all a good jutsu which I will use eventually

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Release: Tornado of Water
Perform the technique: As I see my next opponent on the beach, I gather and mold my suiton chakra while performing the Ram → Horse → Bird seals, releasing my chakra into the nearby lakes water, drawing the water around myself in a large spinning water vortex around myself, expanding to mid range in size as it slams into him sending him flying off into the middle of the lake where he learns "If you can't swim, you bound to drizzound"...
Creative uses/strengths: Liking that this one is mid range in size, that adds to what you can do with this, and add in that you can run with it and it's a pretty large spinning smashing battering ram. Being able to stop S rank katon is nice also, and this creates quite the large water source to immediately move onto another water jutsu attack. I also like that you can see thru it
Drawbacks/counters: Pretty much like above, Its main downside is needing a water source, but also having to keep focusing chakra into it, and to counter I'd probably do like you said with Lightning, Chidori thunderclap the user inside the vortex or create an earthen structure in the middle of the water flow disrupting it

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Perform the technique: I gather a massive amount of suiton chakra as I perform the Ram seal, releasing the chakra by spewing out large amounts of water that crash into my enemy as huge waves, forming a small oceans amount of water which I manipulate into a giant or, basically drowning both of us xD Just kidding, of course I use another suiton jutsu to propel myself above the orb to fresh air...
Creative uses/strengths: 1 seal, loads and loads of water, this is a good jutsu. Able to slam the enemy around and also drown them, flooding the terrain drastically altering the field of battle. This ones got it all. Though I don't think I would continue on with that orb part like you said.
Drawbacks/counters: I'd say really the only drawbacks I see is using the orb part (unless you have a Kisame bio) and having to constantly stream chakra into it, and as for countering it, it would be hard to do while under it. Either attacking the user before he can complete the jutsu or getting up above it would be the best bet, maybe earth great moving core to quickly raise up above before it can flood out the area
 

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Hola` Smoove. I never understood why you stop replying, and Vex didn't flake out, it was NK who lost his Sensai status and Vex was his Senpai so he was unable to continue
Oh yeah, I forgot he was NK senpai. >_<

I thought Vex would have told that I dropped the training due to RL stuff. I was replying slow to all my trainings, so I had to drop it because I didn't want to hold you back from finishing suiton. But look how many months ago that was, and you're still not finish with suiton. If I was still here your ass would have still been in C ranks. Lol
 

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(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns

One of my favorite techniques. The user will do the four required hand seals and manipulate a water source around the area to create a large wolf like beast. Its large in size and power. It can deal some serious damage by either releasing a stream of water or sending a torrent of jet claws towards the opponent as a projectile both B-Rank in power. It can be handy for us as a last resort and to always stay on the offense. Now of course to control the beast you must keep focus, which is safe to say it can harm you especially from snick attacks. So the best thing you can do is have clone or ally to keep it stable and moving. It can also be used to defend attacks since its water is very dense and hard certain attacks it can intercept. Note the beast remains on the field for 3 turns until it disperses or the opponent decides to destroy it. Simple counters is trying to lose the beasts shape. One method is making mud appear from under to lose its balance and tip over. From an attack they are quite simple and straight forward walls, evasion methods, overpowering attacks, ect. Combos are many with this tech as well.

(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, creating a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air. After firing the enemy into the air, pool of water shoots numerous water bullets at the (now airborne) enemy while the user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals which forms the water in the pool into a water dragon which attacks the target, grabbing it and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques.

One of the most advanced techniques in the water section and a personal favorite to use. The user will summon a pool of water under the opponent and then have it rise a rapid pillar which will send them high into the air. As they are in the air the user will manipulate bullets of water from the pool previously to shoot at the opponent impaling him as well as making things virtually impossible for movement while getting hit. After the bullets have hit the opponent while he is still in the air, the bullets will reform right behind him, after doing the three hand seals, and create a large water dragon which attacks him from behind where the opponent will be unable to even notice the dragon. So they will most likely not expect or notice the dragon, the dragon will crash them from behind and carry them back to the ground with tremendous force. This jutsu as you notice has many steps to it and can be taken advantage of when to counter, the best time is when you feel the water on your feet to try and make a counter as soon as possible, don't wait when you are sent in the air for you the bullets will already be sent as the hand seals are being done so manipulating chakra will be too soon. So make sure you try to counter while the water is on your feet and while being launched you execute it. You can though create a dense armor which can help withstand the attacks as well or you can use a wind stream to quickly evade back. Its hard to make combos something basic is to distract the opponent before using this jutsu. Its a destructive jutsu and can easily harm the opponent if caught. Its a great jutsu in terms of range as well, basically anywhere the opponent is they can use it on the terrain when it comes to range.

( Suiton: Arekuruu Hayase ) - Water Release: Raging Rapids
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their skills with Water Release, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around their enemy with a swing of their arm that sends them flying upwards and then dispels it with another hand gesture. (Requires a water source).
Note: Tobirama and Mei terumi can perform this without a water source.

Similar to previous techniques. While the opponent is on a water source or close to it, short to mid range to be exact. The user will simply swing their arm and cause a water vortex to appear around the opponent. The water will then shoot the opponent high into the air, the impact it gives off when it sends the opponent in the air is where the damage happens. Certain combos can be when the opponent is in the air to send a air attack like dropping lid to crash them back down onto the ground. After they are sent in the air though you must do one more swing of the hand to stop the vortex releasing it so you can move onto the next jutsu.
 

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(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Perform the technique: I gather and mold my water chakra I perform the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram seals, manipulating my chakra into a water source in front of me creating from it a giant wolf-like beast of water, who swings one of it's mighty claws left to right releasing a torrent of water that washes my enemy backwards...
Creative uses/strengths: Well, I'd have to agree with you that it's best to have a clone use this as you have to maintain it, with that being said, I'd love to use a good lightning release with this, perhaps the one where you raise your hand imbueing the clouds above with lightning chakra for strikes at the enemies location as the water beast is used by a clone to douse the enemies area simultaneously electrifying the water so even if the lightning misses, they will still be shocked thru the water. Pretty simple to form and can stare down S rank fire
Drawbacks/counters: On this end, I think it's kinda weird to use an A rank water jutsu, that can only do B rank damage with it's water streams. That, needing a water source, and having to maintain focus on it are it's only downsides, but I like that a previous water jutsu's water could easily be used as a medium for this, making combo'ing it with another water attack a more viable option. As for countering I'd say skewing it from below with B rank earth outta do the trick, along with disrupting it's shape via World shaking or another jutsu


(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Perform the technique: I gather and mold my water chakra as I clap my hands together and slam them to the ground, creating a large pool of water below my enemy that gushes upwards lifting them into the air as I manipulate the pooled water below to form water bullets which slam into and impale my enemy from behind all over. As they are impaled, I perform the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat seals, turning the pooled water below into a water dragon that rushes upwards grabbing my opponent in it's jaws, and slams itself into the ground violently slamming the user into the ground in the process...
Creative uses/strengths: I'd have to say this one is hard to use with other jutsu's as a combination attack because of how many steps are involved, this jutsu is a combination attack in itself. Though I would say using something like World shaking to distract or unbalance the target first would help in completing this attack. I do like that it does not require a water source and can quickly throw the enemy upwards thwartin their evil plans. I'd prolly use this without using the dragon part at the end, just moving onto another attack perhaps from directly above
Drawbacks/counters: I'd say all the steps needed after the enemy is launched upwards, it gives plenty of opportunity to counter if not worded properly. I'd think it best to do as you said and try to escape before being launched upwards as if it is worded right, the chance for escape once propelled upwards is narrow, and if hit by the bullets it gives the person enough time to use the seals and make the dragon

( Suiton: Arekuruu Hayase ) - Water Release: Raging Rapids
Perform the technique: As my enemy nears a water source, i quickly gather and mold my water chakra, manipulating it into the water forming a vortex of water around them, waving my hand upwards which launches him high into the air, then waving my hand downwards dispersing the water sending them crashing back to the earth in a violent thud, bouncing once or twice from the fall...
Creative uses/strengths: I like it, once they are lifted airborne and released another quick wave of the hand sending lightning chakra above can strike them from above before they hit the ground, an excellent jutsu for combination attacks as thats just one way it could be done. Being able to lift them upwards with a simple wave of the hand is cool, as that can occur faster than seals and only requires 1 hand instead of 2, so it could be used even if one arm is damaged. Can even cut off their attacks as it encompasses them first before sending them upwards
Drawbacks/counters: The needing a water source is it's biggest drawback, however this would be used in specific situations so thats not a big deal, after all there are plenty of water jutsu's that create water that could be used before hand. As for countering I'd say using Wind streak while airborne to regain control or escaping when the water begins to pool around you in the vortex.



I can't thank you enough for getting my training going again, I was sure it would be staled forever ^_^ Thanks man!
 

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So, I don't have a particular template for you to fill but what I require from you is to answer questions I have and also use terms of nature and shape manipulation whilst performing techniques.

First of all, gather suiton chakra within your body and focus it within your mouth. As you do so inhale the air around you before exhaling the chakra. By usage of nature manipulation generate water and with usage of shape manipulation form a thin stream of greatly pressurized water which is capable of even cutting rocks.

(Suiton: Suidanha) Water Release: Severing Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing the Tiger hand seal, the user will quickly exhale a very thin stream of pressurized water that will be able to cut even rock. The most noteworthy feature of the technique is how fast the stream is and how sharp it can be. By moving his head, the user can alter the jet's cutting path, creating longer cuts or affecting bigger targets.
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Now tell me what is speed of performance when it comes to this jutsu as well as why would you rate it as such speed. When judging the speed of performance I'd like for you to take into account the amount of time it is needed for preparation of technique as well as time in which it reaches opponent. Hand seals take quite some time and thus make a technique slower to perform. Speed can be either Slow,Medium or Fast. Also tell me Adv and Disadvantages of this jutsu.
 

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(Suiton: Suidanha) Water Release: Severing Wave
I begin by gathering my chakra, molding it's nature to suiton as I focus the chakra into my mouth while inhaling and performing the Tiger seal, manipulating the chakra's shape as I spew it out forming a razor sharp thin pressurized jet of water as I swing my head at an angle upwards from left to right, slicing my opponent in half across their chest area...

I would rate this jutsu as fast because of having one seal, which could be stated to be perform at the same time as the gathering/molding of the chakra/inhaling, making this a pretty quick jutsu to execute, and extremely difficult to avoid short ranged. Mid-Long ranged it's alot more counter-able.
The advantage of this jutsu is how powerful and deadly that stream of water is, combined with how fast it can be created. However the downside is also how thin the stream is, making possible counters more easy as avoiding the streams line of fire will effectively counter it, with that being said, short ranged this could end a match instantly as severing ones opponents head off would be like a hot knife thru butter for the jet stream..
 

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Nice job! :yay:

Now complete opposite of the technique we just learned.


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Gather suiton chakra within your body once again before focusing it within your mouth and gullet. As chakra reaches your mouth and gullet release it whilst using nature manipulation to generate actual water and shape manipulation to form a stream. Now this stream should be capable of ripping through most of the obstacles in its path because of how concentrated it is. With usage of this jutsu, once is capable of flooding up to large sized depression of the battle field without taking much time to do it.

(Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.
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Once again tell me speed of performance and tell me how would you use this jutsu in battle.
 

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Thanks! ^_^


(Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
I begin by gathering and molding a great amount of chakra into my chest, manipulating it's nature to suiton as I inhaled a large breath, manipulating the water chakra into a dense stream as i exhaled the chakra form my chest which quickly slams into my opponent and floods the field of battle, drowning them as the lay unconscious from the force of the stream of water hitting them...

I would also rate this as fast, though it doesn't have any seals, it does state in the jutsu that you have to great amounts of chakra, athough in the video it did happen pretty quickly. An advantage is exactly that, no seals, and the fact you can greatly alter the terrain and the piercing capabilities of the powerful stream. The disadvantage, is simply have to gather so much chakra, other than that this is a great technique which is fast and powerful, and field altering. I cant think of anymore disadvantages
 

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Thanks! ^_^


(Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
I begin by gathering and molding a great amount of chakra into my chest, manipulating it's nature to suiton as I inhaled a large breath, manipulating the water chakra into a dense stream as i exhaled the chakra form my chest which quickly slams into my opponent and floods the field of battle, drowning them as the lay unconscious from the force of the stream of water hitting them...

I would also rate this as fast, though it doesn't have any seals, it does state in the jutsu that you have to great amounts of chakra, athough in the video it did happen pretty quickly. An advantage is exactly that, no seals, and the fact you can greatly alter the terrain and the piercing capabilities of the powerful stream. The disadvantage, is simply have to gather so much chakra, other than that this is a great technique which is fast and powerful, and field altering. I cant think of anymore disadvantages
Although nice job, thanks for writting extra but you didn't answer my question. <_> So once again, how would you use such a jutsu in battle? There is no need to write advantages and disadvantages if I don't ask you to do it, unless of course you like writting it, I don't mind but you'll have to answer all the questions I asked.
 

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Sorry bout that ^_^ If I were to use this jutsu in battle, I would either use it as a first move so it goes thru uninterrupted, or another idea, after useing earth great moving core to lower the terrain under the enemy 100 meters, one could use this to fill in that with water making escaping it even more difficult. Or I'd use this to blast away a powerful fire stream heading at me, continuing on to hit the enemy as well
 

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Nice job!

And last technique of S rank.



This is one defensive technique. Firstly gather suiton chakra within your body and focus it within your mouth and gullet. As you do so release the chakra from your mouth as you use nature manipulation to generate water and whilst using shape manipulation form a torrent.

( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.

Tell me speed of performance and advantages and disadvantages when it comes to this jutsu!
 

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( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
As my enemy prepares his Fire jutsu, I begin gathering chakra, converting it's nature to Suiton as I concentrate it to my mouth and gullet, breathing in a deep breath, and as I breath out I manipulate the shape of the water chakra to form a dense torrent in front of me which intercepts the enemies Fire attack dousing it's flames leaving me unscathed...

The speed of performance is pretty fast for this one. I've had this used against me when I used a quick S rank Fire jutsu and thought I had the victory in the bag....nope, instant water barricade lol. It's on the high end of Fast imo. The advantage is it's defensive strength and the speed at which it can be formed, even stating it's a "near instantaneous barricade" in the description further adds to it's speed of performance. As for disadvantages, I'd say this don't have one that I can think of, other than not being Forbidden in rank.
 

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( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
As my enemy prepares his Fire jutsu, I begin gathering chakra, converting it's nature to Suiton as I concentrate it to my mouth and gullet, breathing in a deep breath, and as I breath out I manipulate the shape of the water chakra to form a dense torrent in front of me which intercepts the enemies Fire attack dousing it's flames leaving me unscathed...

The speed of performance is pretty fast for this one. I've had this used against me when I used a quick S rank Fire jutsu and thought I had the victory in the bag....nope, instant water barricade lol. It's on the high end of Fast imo. The advantage is it's defensive strength and the speed at which it can be formed, even stating it's a "near instantaneous barricade" in the description further adds to it's speed of performance. As for disadvantages, I'd say this don't have one that I can think of, other than not being Forbidden in rank.
The only disadvantage I see is that you won't be capable of seeing your enemy once you release it. But because you are Valentine that shouldn't effect you in any way :)

Anyhow awesome job! =D We are done with Water release!
 
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