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(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

Would the above technique suffice as a counter for both your newly learned water techniques? And Why?
 

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For the first technique, a doton wall can possibly shield the user from the needles, though the wall can probably be cracked/broken since this suiton tech is higher ranked.

As for the second jutsu, I think it would be a bad counter as the whip is strong enough to break the wall/pillar since it is higher ranked.
 

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For the first one you are correct, a small wall or pillar of earth would be able to counter the water needles.

And for the second, you are incorrect, that technique would be able to counter the water whip as well, remember that water is weak to earth, So any water technique of C Rank would be able to be countered by a D Rank earth technique, though it also depends on the size of the techniques being used, if they are of the same in terms of the size, then the earth technique of D Rank would be able to counter a water technique of C Rank, if the water is perhaps a wide wave of C Rank, then a simple shield of earth wouldn't be able to completely counter the water technique, but there are various means and ways to counter and accomplish what ever if you just be creative and come up with your own unconventional counters, that would have to work also of cause.

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(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram โ†’ Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.

"Start by performing the required hand seals while gathering your water release chakra within your body, you then release the water chakra in the form of a sticky liquid, and spew it onto the ground, causing the entire section you soaked in the syrup to become a trap of sorts, able to restrict your opponents movements once he steps into the syrup, go ahead and give it a try."

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(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.

"Gather your water chakra while performing the tiger hand seal and focus the water chakra into a nearby source of water, you then maintain an image of yourself in your mind and cause the water chakra to form the water into a clone of yourself, give it a try."
 

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(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Performing the Technique: J begins to gather his chakra. He then begins to mold it to water chakra while weaving the hand signs: Ram โ†’ Tiger. Immediately after, he then spews the water from his mouth in the form of a sticky liquid onto the ground, causing the entire section he soaked in the syrup & traps his opponent.

Advantages/Disadvantages: An advantage is that my opponent will be unable to move and will be vulnerable to any follow up attack. A disadvantage is that this can be countered by channeling one's feet before they are "caught" in the syrup.

Technique Speed: Depending on whether this jutsu is prepared or not. If it is, I would rate it as medium/slow as time is wasted when preforming hand signs, using more effort to generate suiton chakra without a water source and gathering a lot more syrup than normal. If I did have a water source but prepared it, I would rate is as medium due to the hand signs and whatnot. If I had no water source but didn't prepare it, I would rate is as medium due to the hand signs and the effort used to make suiton chakra. If I had a water source and didn't prepare it, I would rate it as fast.

(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Performing the Technique: After finding a good water source, J weaves the tiger hand seal while molding suiton chakra; Simultaneously, he concentrates on what he looks like. Soon after, a water clone of himself is seen emerging from the ground.

Advantages/Disadvantages: Advantages are that this jutsu only requires one hand seal and that it can perform up to C-Rank water jutsus [Water clone making a water clone? Lol jk]. Disadvantages are that the water clones can only go short distance from it's user and that it can ONLY use water jutsu.

Technique Speed:I would rate this as fast due to it having a water source provided and only one hand seal is needed.
 

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(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.

"Stand on that nearby lake by focusing chakra to the soles of your feet, then gather your water chakra and channel it into the water just behind my clone, then proceed to form a bullet of water with which you use to attack my clone, give it a try"

-Creates Clone-
 

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(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Performing the Technique: While standing on top of a lake, J begins to gather his suiton chakra and channels it into the water. After doing so, he then proceeds to form a bullet of water and fires it at Yashiro's clone.

Advantages/Disadvantages: An advantage is that this jutsu has enough power to kill/maim a person in one blow & that this jutsu requires no hand seals. In addition, can attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, with other techniques for distraction and this technique is very versatile. A disadvantage is that it requires a water source.

Technique Speed: I would rate this as fast due to the fact there are no hand seals involved and a water source is provided for you.
 

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That performance is lacking, do it over.
 

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While standing on top of a lake, J begins to gather some of his chakra and channels it into the water. After doing so, he then proceeds to manipulate the water beneath him to cause a medium build-up of water to rise. He then uses shape manipulation to from a rapidly spinning bullet of water and fires it at Yashiro's clone.
 
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While standing on top of a lake, J begins to gather some of his chakra and channels it into the water. After doing so, he then proceeds to manipulate the water beneath him to cause a medium build-up of water to rise. He then uses shape manipulation to from a rapidly spinning bullet of water and fires it at Yashiro's clone.

That is better, but I want some more details please, if you lack details, it could work to your disadvantage in an official battle, I will perform this technique for you once, and after that I expect the other technique performance to be more or less like it in terms of details.

While stationery on top of the lake with Yashiro's clone standing before him, J starts to gather some of his chakra throughout the entirety of his body and molds the gathered chakra into water release chakra, J then proceeds to channel the water chakra into a section of the water just behind Yashiro's clone allowing him to manipulates that part of the water and causes it to start rising from behind the clone of Yashiro, within the same motion he uses shape manipulation to form the water into that of a rapidly spinning bullet of water which he unleashes and has it shoot directly into the back of Yashiro's clone.

Check the fine tuning and understand what I expect of my lovely students :p, then let me know when you are ready to move on.
 

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Ah, ok :win:

I'm ready
 

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Let us move on then...

(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

First perform the hidden mist technique, once the mist is fully formed, reflect the natural light with your chakra, and use it to temporarily blind your target, leaving him open to a fatal attack, Note that even though your opponent wouldn't be able to see, he could still smell, hear and feel, so if you want your final attack to work you would have to be smart and try and use the best possible way to attack without allowing your opponent enough time to attack, perform a 3 move combo with this technique, the hidden mist technique and a fatal technique of your choice.
 

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(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Performing the Technique (3 move combo):
Still standing on a lake as his, Neji raises his right arm and makes a begins to concentrate. He begins to gather his water chakra and steadily releases it in the form of a thick mist; activating the Hidden Mist jutsu.After doing so, he uses his chakra to reflect natural light that manages to temporarily blind his opponent; leaving them vulnerable.
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dลjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

With his enemy now blinded until the mist is cleared, Neji begins to think in quick decisiveness. While remaining hidden within the hidden mist technique, Neji gathers his Gentle Fist chakra and releases it into the nearby lake. He then condenses a small amount of water for use, and uses shape manipulation to transform the water into needles; In which he strikes his opponent with great accuracy.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By using their gentle fist chakra control, a hyuga member may condense nearby water and shape them into needles to launch at the target.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.


Advantages/Disadvantages: An advantage is that it blinds my opponent as long as I keep the mist going. A disadvantage is that this, along with the Hidden Mist, it can't blind a Byakugan user.

Technique Speed: I would rate this as fast as all I have to do is use shape manipulation to allow light in to blind my opponent.
 
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By causing a pillar of earth to form before you, with the below technique, do you think it would work to counter this technique?

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth
 

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you mean against the sight deprivation?
I don't think that would be useful.
 

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Very well :), the target would still be in the mist therefore blocking his sight of the user of the eyesight deprivation technique would probably not work, because he is still within the mist, but I think its a 50/50 gamble.

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(Suiton: Suishลha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.

Gather your water chakra and clap your hands together while also releasing the gathered water chakra, and cause a spiralling vortex of water to form out of nowhere, the manipulate the vortex into attacking my clone, give it a go...

-Creates Clone-
 

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I was thinking the same thing Lol I mean, the pillar isn't going to block the light

(Suiton: Suishลha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Performing the Technique: While standing long range from his opponent, on top of the lake, J starts to gather a lot of his chakra and channels it within the water source below him. After doing so, he gathers some chakra into his hands before clapping them together. Momentarily, a large spiraling vortex of water appears out of thin air between J and his opponent. He then uses chakra manipulation to make the water vortex cataract into a powerful wave that spans wide and sprees toward his opponent and blasts them away.

Advantages/Disadvantages: Advantages are that this jutsu requires no hand seals, spans up to long range and can either be a C or B-Rank technique. A disadvantage is that it can be blocked out by a doton technique.

Technique Speed: With a water source I would rate this as fast/medium as I have to create the vortex and then attack my enemy after transforming it into a wave. Without a water source, I would rate this as slow due to the concentration to create the water chakra, create the vortex and finally the wave.
 

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Would this technique be able to counter the vortex of water? And why?

(Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.
 

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Yes because it would protect the user all around within a dome of earth, which is stronger than water.
 

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Very well then.

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(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird โ†’ Rat โ†’ Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Rat โ†’ Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

Gather your water chakra and perform the required hand seals, then release your chakra into the sky and form rain clouds infused with your chakra and continue to manipulate the clouds into raining down droplets of rain infused with your chakra, everything the drops of rain touches across a long range you would be able to sense, give it a try and water the plants.
 

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(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Performing the Technique: While standing on top of the lake, J starts to gather a lot of his water chakra. After doing so, he begins to mold his chakra while weaving the necessary hand seals [Bird โ†’ Rat โ†’ Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Rat โ†’ Snake]. J then, causes drops of rain chakra to fall from the sky and uses it to sense everything within long range water some plants. >.>

Advantages/Disadvantages: A few advantages are that I can sense anything withing the rain's range, no water source is needed & I have a possible water source to use. A disadvantage is that it requires hand seals.

Technique Speed: I would rate this as fast/medium due to the hand seals and the time to make the rain fall.
 
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