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[Mirai]

(Magen: Inku no Masutaa Irasuto) Demonic Illusion: Illustration of the Ink Master
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Type: Offensive
Rank: A - Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description A rather simple yet powerful genjutsu but can provide for a wonderful opening if used correctly. The user will make three hand seals while channeling chakra into the brain of the enemy. Once down, the target will see the user change form and turn into actual paper from a book. The paper will fly directly towards the target instantly surrounding them in an array of paper. The pages will circle the target and once done will forcefully join onto the targets body. The target will then hear the voice of the user uttering words in the head of the enemy but the words start to get louder and louder, causing the target to experience mental stress from the attack. In reality the target is unharmed but is suffering from intense mental stress and if not broken in the next turn will suffer fatigue and mental exhaustion for 1 turn due to the large strain the illusion leaves on the target after which the illusion ends. The user can also make the genjutsu more unique by adding things such as when changing into paper they can make it seem to be on fire or adding smoke while creating fake heat or causing them to cough from it. This adds to some uniqueness based on usage of the technique and is only restricted to the imagination of the user .

*Can only be used twice per battle*
*No genjutsu above A-rank next turn*

Analyze this for me please and tell me something unique about it. Ill send in some of my own info once you do

 

[Yuse]

As you mention its a rather simple technique but a nice one. The user turns into paper from a book which then surrounds the enemy as they then attach themselves to the target. Once attached the target will here the voice of the user gradually get louder which is what causes the actual mental stress. Which leaves the target under intense mental strain for a turn. The unique part of the jutsu is that it has the addition of adding an effect to the papers, that's limited only by the users imagination. Thus allowing me to use the jutsu in a multitude of ways from having the papers be set on fire to having them dripping with sticky syrup water to even having atem transform to sand paper, get it sand? No, alright anyways it a really nice gen. I have only one question if I were to to add things to the paper like setting it on fire or ect would that translate to effects felt by the opponent? Would they feel like they were burning/ the heat and ect?

 

[Mirai]

The user can also make the genjutsu more unique by adding things such as when changing into paper they can make it seem to be on fire or adding smoke while creating fake heat or causing them to cough from it

Indeed it does

 

[Yuse]

The user can also make the genjutsu more unique by adding things such as when changing into paper they can make it seem to be on fire or adding smoke while creating fake heat or causing them to cough from it

Indeed it does

Cool, no more questions. Thank you