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The Mockingjay

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
(Custom) Explore a friends home (3)
(Custom) Comfort a friend (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 13/09/23
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information:

Approved by Imperfect. No Artifact awarded.
 
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Never

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Explore an abandoned site (2)
- Deal with a Traumatic Event from your past (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
13/09/23
Relevant mission links:
Post 1
Post 2
Additional information:

Approved by Imperfect. Artifact awarded. (12 + 1)

(Mukō: Yūryō) – Void: Charged
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A Void Infused modification that does not act as an Accumulator or Spender; rather, it passively increases the user’s maximum Void Infusion cap by 1. This can be stacked with other Charged Void Infused Artifacts, including itself if the user owns multiple copies.
 
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Ghost-Data

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Mission Rank: A
Story Element(s) Chosen: Survive a Bounty Hunter ambush at sea
Date(s): 08/11/23
Mission Link(s): https://animebase.me/threads/gaikotsu-bay-255.757188/post-22127847
Additional Information: Bio [update] is approved now, but I had done the mission with the [previous] version while waiting.

Approved by Imperfect. Artifact awarded. (35 + 1)

(Mukō: Chikara Chūnyū) – Void: Power Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user uses a technique with a damage value greater than 100 they have a 35% chance to gain a single Void Infusion; this can occur a maximum of once every two turns. This chance is increased to 60% when a damage threshold of 150 is met.
 
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Vayne

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Players involved: Vayne
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Meet with an old friend
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Aug 30 - Aug 31
Relevant mission links: This and following 4 posts
Additional information:

Approved by Imperfect. Artifact awarded. (48 + 7)

(Mukō: Hogosha Seishin) – Void: Guardian Spirit
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user’s familiars, defined as Elemental Familiars, Summonings (excluding unique summonings like the Gedo Mazou and Statue of Hamura), Aburame bugs, or Inuzuka Ninken suffer 50 or more damage in a single instance this Void Infused Artifact has a 50% chance of activating. Upon activation the user will gain a single Void Infusion and their familiar, as defined within this Void Infused Artifact, will be healed for 40 Health Points.
 
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The Pervy Sage

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Players involved: Ignia
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

Recover a Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard from the Moon Isle (188), site of a gigantic violet crystal emerging from the earth (C-Rank Mission).

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 22/09/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/moon-isle-188.756203/post-22129161
Additional information:

Approved by Imperfect. No Artifact awarded.
 
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Skorm

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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

  • Extract a depleted apothetic crystalline shard from Moon Isle (2 - C-rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 22/09
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A


Approved by Imperfect. No Artifact awarded. (68)
 
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Gutsy

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Extract a depleted apothetic crystalline shard from Moon Isle (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/09
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/moon-isle-188.756203/page-9#post-22129197
Additional information: N/A

Approved by Imperfect. Artifact awarded. (54)

(Mukō: Chikara Chūnyū) – Void: Energy Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user successfully restores at least 10% of their maximum chakra pool in a single turn they have a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.
 
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Sinthorus

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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Survive a trap set for you (A)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/09/2023
Relevant mission links: [1]
Additional information:
Bijuu Mission (Final one T_T)

Approved by Imperfect. No Artifact awarded. (83)
 
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Imperfect

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Mission Rank: B-Rank (3).
Story elements chosen:

Find and gather ore to forge a God Slaying Tool. (3)​

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/ 09/ 2023
Relevant mission links: Here.
Additional information: God Slaying Tool ore gathering mission.

Approved by Imperfect. No Artifact awarded.
 
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The_Empire

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Recover a Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shards
Date of beginning & conclusion: 09/23/2023
Relevant Mission links: X
Additional Information:

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've received an Artefact! (53)

(Mukō: Mukō no Tsuyosa) – Void: Strength of the Void
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Activated passively at the cost of one Void Infusion; Strength of the Void increases the potency of the user’s next five offensive techniques by 20 damage.
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Vayne

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Players Involved: Vayne
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: -Help your allies recover
Date of beginning & conclusion: 25 Sept
Relevant Mission Links: https://animebase.me/threads/uraraha-014.755831/page-2#post-22129274
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Failed.
Unfortunately, even for a D-rank, a single paragraph that vaguely covers the depth of the storyboard element is not sufficient enough by precedented standards. Next time, maybe include a little build up aimed at the discovery of your friends' conditions, such as diagnosis of their injuries and tending to each of them individually, rather than simply writing in broad groupings of your actions. Thank you for your understanding!
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The Mockingjay

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Players Involved: Never & The Mockingjay
Mission Rank: S
Story Elements Chosen:
-Fight someone much stronger than you
Date of Beginning & Conclusion: 19/09 - 21/09
Relevant Mission Links:
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3
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Mission Passed.
For Mockingjay, this mission has been downgraded to an A-rank. While the criteria of the element was met from both participants, Never seemed to primarily dominate the flow of this encounter almost entirely, including the damage and threat to life received as a result. While Mockingjay did temporarily find themselves in a suspenseful circumstance, it amounted to roughly only a small handful of paragraphs out of the entire mission before you handedly overcame the threat with minimal expense on your part, which suits the standards of an A-rank, but falls quite short of an S-rank, unfortunately.
No Artefacts were Awarded. (73, 82)
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:


  • Examine the depleted crystalline apotheotic shard (C-rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 25/09
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A


Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (100)
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The Pervy Sage

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Players involved: Ignia
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

Examine the Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard (C-Rank Mission).

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 25/09/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/moon-isle-188.756203/post-22129283
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've received an Artefact! (28)

(Mukō: Chikara Chūnyū) – Void: Energy Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user successfully restores at least 10% of their maximum chakra pool in a single turn they have a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.
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Mirai

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Players involved: Mirai
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

  • Have a heart to heart with one’s Bijuu (B)
  • Reunite with one’s family in Irkalla (B)
  • Engage in combat against the Void creatures (A)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9/19/2023 - 9/25/2023
Relevant mission links:

1. https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/post-22129059
2. https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/post-22129280

Additional information: Bijuu Mission & Irkalla Mission Bonus from Arc.


Mission Passed.
Mission was downgraded to B-Rank. Unfortunately, out of the three storyboard elements submitted, the single A-ranked element I found to be insufficient in depth and emphasis throughout the course of the mission, especially by comparison to the two B-ranked elements, as well as the overall length of the mission does not meet the standard of length expected of an A-rank.
No Artefact was Awarded.(95)
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus!
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Deal with a traumatic experience
Date of beginning & conclusion: 09/25/2023
Relevant Mission links: X
Additional Information: Mika remembered an experience that changed his life for the good or the bad only the future knows.

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (77)
As a note and recommendation, when tackling these sorts of elements again in the future, try to focus a little more on the conflict resolution involved in the element. Not much was "dealt" with in this element apart from "be strong, keep going" as a general theme, but a lot was sufficiently covered relating to the traumatic experience itself.
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Gutsy

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

Examine the Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard (C-Rank Mission).

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 26/09/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/moon-isle-188.756203/page-9#post-22129320
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've received an Artefact! (60)

(Mukō: Ikari Wasure San) – Void: Wrath of the Forgotten One
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: Activated at the cost of a move and a single Void Infusion; unleashes a torrential maelstrom of natural flames from the user’s position up to mid-range. Inflicts 80 damage, but can be increased by 40 additional damage if the user applies a second Void Infusion to it.
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Identify the thief and try to get answers or figure out why he/she is stealing
Date of beginning & conclusion: 09/26/2023
Relevant Mission links: X
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Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've received an Artefact! (13)

(Mukō: Kenkō Chūnyū) – Void: Healthy Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user heals themselves successfully for at least 40 health in a single turn they have a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.
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Never

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Unlock & use very advanced Ninjutsu (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
21/09/23
Relevant mission links:
Post 1
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (88)
As a note and recommendation, in the future when approaching these sorts of elements, please consider giving a little consideration to the full scope of the element itself. While you did show sufficient reflection on the "use" of the advanced Ninjutsu, you seemed to just "get it" on a whim and paid little interest to the self-analysis that could have been explored from the "unlock" side of the element.
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