Storyboard Mission Submission

[Pervyy]

Players involved: Slacker
Mission rank: C
Story Elements chosen:

- Search for possible cures.

Date: 16/04/2020 - 18/04/2020
Relevant mission links: Here -> Here (It's all consistent posts in the same thread)
Additional info: Ventured to the land of sin to find answers, in doing this it just helped me realise IT'S A TRAP

Mission Passed. This was a bit scattered and thin, but sufficient roleplay is there.

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[Shinta]

Players involved: Shinta
Mission rank: A
Story Elements chosen:

-Obtain first hand experience of the severe effects of the virus.

Date: 19/04/2020
Relevant mission links: ~>Here<~
Additional info: This is a Cursed Revenge Story Arc.
Also earning 3 points for the Tsumi Event by becoming fully infected.

3 points ( and a stimulus of 1500 kumi )
Getting or having a severe case of Red Fever. This is a one-time payment to each individual.

Infected via contat with Banri ~>Here<~

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Running tally of Tsumi event points:

2 ~>mission passed + 1 for interacting with mission<~
2 ~>mission passed<~
3 ~>for getting severe case of infection<~
Total of 8 points as of posting this mission

Mission Passed. You additionally get the stimulus payout.

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[Pervyy]

Players involved: Slacker
Mission rank: S
Story Elements chosen:

Defeat a huge horde of undead without destroying the bodies.

Date: 25/04/2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/nankaidō-island-137.756151/post-21999777
Additional info: Claiming the landmark for the clan in the process.

Mission Passed.

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[Scarlet_Blaze]

Players involved: Taisho
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

• Set up camp
• Do some moderate meditation to improve focus

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 30/4/20
Relevant mission links:
xXx Link xXx
Additional information:

Mission Passed. You also win a D-rank artifact. It can be submitted in the Custom Artifact Submission Thread or redeemed for Ryo.

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[Pervyy]

Players involved: Slacker
Mission rank: B
Story Elements chosen:

Make an enemy of the Clan disappear

Date: 28/04/2020 - 30/04/2020
Relevant mission links:

https://animebase.me/threads/south-east-kinai-island-147.756160/post-22000403

https://animebase.me/threads/mission-make-an-enemy-of-the-clan-disappear.774697/#post-22001175

Additional info: N/a

Mission Passed.

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[Hammock]

Players involved: Hammock
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 1 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. You also win a B-rank artifact. You can submit it in the Custom Artifact Submission Thread or redeem it for ryo.

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[NightKiing]

Players involved: Professor Shino
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: • Explore an infected location
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 1 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: First cursed revenge mission.

Mission Passed.

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[Scarlet_Blaze]

Players involved: Taisho
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

• Do a good deed
• Hear rumors about the virus origins

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 02/05/20
Relevant mission links:
xXx Link xXx
Additional information:

Mission Passed. Keep it up. Just watch the detail in higher missions. You're doing fine so far though.

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[Lytes]

Players Involved: Lytes
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen: Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 2 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

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[Six Paths]

Players involved: Six Paths
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

• Deal with a problem in a tactical manner, instead of through direct confrontation

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/03/2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: NA

Mission Passed. Great job, a great story, and a very good mission. You also get an A rank custom artifact. It can be submitted in the Custom Artifact Submission Thread or redeemed for the mission value in Ryo by linking back to this post in your accounting.

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[Korra.]

Players Involved: Korra.
Mission Rank: D
Story Elements Chosen: Do a favor for a villager (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5/3/2020-5/4/2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/graveyard-of-sin-115.756128/post-22002801

https://animebase.me/threads/graveyard-of-sin-115.756128/post-22002802

https://animebase.me/threads/graveyard-of-sin-115.756128/post-22002803

https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-8#post-22003017
Additional information: N/A

Mission Failed. Needed a bit more from each participant.

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[Twilight]

Players involved: Twilight
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Defeat a small group of undead
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5 May 2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/south-east-kinai-island-147.756160/
Additional information: First cursed revenge mission and build up story for NW clan

Mission Passed. Watch a lot of the setup roleplay. For higher rank missions it can end in failure.

Also, next time, link directly to the mission. You linked to the thread itself and I had to search for it.

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[Lytes]

Players Involved: Lytes
Mission Rank: D
Story Elements Chosen: Hear rumors about the virus origins.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: First cursed revenge mission.

Mission Passed. Nothing to say, a good effort for a D-rank.

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[NightKiing]

Players Involved: Professor Shino
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements Chosen: ¤Hear rumors about the virus origins.
¤Defend your employer from bandits
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Cursed revenge mission

Mission Passed. Honestly, you did very well getting the first element out there in the first paragraph or so seeding out the rumors. Usually, people put in too much set up, but you got right into the element using it as your set up. Good work.

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[Lytes]

Players Involved: Lytes
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen: Defeat a small group of undead
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Cursed revenge mission.

Mission Failed. Too much time was spent on setup, and not enough toward the guiding element. You start fighting the undead all the way down in paragraph five, that's four whole paragraphs of set up for an eight paragraph mission. That's half of the mission that is off-topic, or idle when it comes to the storyboard element. This isn't enough for a B-rank and as a suggestion read through the Storyboard Mission Criteria, if you haven't, you need to devote almost your entire mission to the storyboard element especially so for a single element mission.

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[Twilight]

Players Involved: Twilight
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen: Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/south-east-kinai-island-147.756160/#post-22005164
Additional information: NW Clan mission

Mission Failed. This was extremely close to passed, there was just too much set up. The more setup roleplay you use, especially for B-S rank missions the more likely they are to fail especially for single elements like this. A single element mission like this should be at minimum 75% about what you're directly doing to accomplish the task you've set out for your biography.

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[Lytes]

Players Involved: Lytes
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements Chosen: Deal with bandits looting
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Cursed revenge mission. Ties into previous missions.

Mission Passed.

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[NightKiing]

Players Involved: Professor Shino
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen: Defeat a small group of undead.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Cursed revenge mission.

Mission Failed. Not enough for a B-rank. A bit too much opening narration not relating to the element itself.

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[Lytes]

Players involved: Lytes
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Explore an infected location
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10 May 2020
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Cursed revenge mission. Ties into previous missions.

Mission Passed. Watch the detail for higher rank missions. This one had barely enough.

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[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission rank: S
Story Elements chosen:

• Destroy an entire landmark to prevent spreading the virus [Custom arc 13 element - 5]

Date: 10/05/2020(Beginning) - 11/05/2020(Conclusion)
Relevant mission links: 1 | 2
Additional info: N/A, Claiming LM 77 for Tsumigakure.

Mission Failed. This didn't meet the requirements of an S-rank, there was too much opening narration. The destruction didn't start until halfway through the second post. That's a lot of time to be off-topic toward the guiding element. Also to claim land for the most part it needs to be a landmark adjacent to the village's territory. The only exclusion being colonies in Tobusekai.

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