[Approved] Story of The flying ocean

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Basic Information
Name: Kaito
Nickname: The Flying Ocean
Gender: Male
Age: uknown
Clan: Yotsuki

Looks: Slim and muscular physique, brown skinned bald, average height usually wears ninja pants and shoes with muscle beater shirt, and armor vest and ankle weights carries a pair of steel nunchaku as primary weapon.

Personality: energetic, loyal, caring,silly, brave, honorable, giving and optimistic with a good sense of wit and knowledge of things though at times can be laid back, and oblivious of some things. Loves training and testing his threshold. he Is always ready and able to protect those he cares for as well as helping those in need.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance: Konoha, Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: S-jounin
Specialty:
Elements: Lightning
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Earth: None

Fire: None

Water: None

Wind: None

Lightning: Learning


Background Info.
History:

Born in his Village Kaito was always an eager young lad who wanted to be a great ninja to fight along side with his comrads and to serve his village. At the young age of 8 he has had an affinity towards the ninja arts and especially Taijutsu and dreamed of becoming a great Taijutsu Master and Teacher and so he trained very hard to become skilled.

Six Years later One night while on a Mission with his team to corner a powerful Rogue ninja that uses powerful Genjutsu and Ninjutsu techniques, they get caught in a trap. Kaito manages to fight his way out as well as trying to save his team however his efforts were futile and his team members are killed with the exception of one who runs to tell the village of what has happened. While on his way to the village the rogue ninjas team captures the ninja and holds him ransom.Kaito not aware of what has taken place has continued to pursue the Rogue ninja alone and they engage in a great battle, Kaito loses. The Rogue ninja respects the fact that Kaito was able to give him such a great challenge and so instead of killing him, he places Kaito in an intense Genjutsu Technique which renders him unconscious and a loss of his memories.


His Village Raikage grows worried and anxious and dispatches a search team to seek Kaito and his team out. They find the other ninjas bodies dead, Kaitos and another team mates body missing. They assume the two has killed the team and fled. The search team return to the village and inform the Raikage of what they have seen. The Raikage confused and hurt refuses to beleive that Kaito has killed his own team mates, has ninjas search for them to find the truth. One day the Raikage receives a letter from the Rogue ninja stating he has one of his ninja captive and demands a money ransom. The Raikage immediately has his greatest ninja meet the Rogue ninja, the transaction takes place however they see that kaito is not with the rogue ninja, and so they question him he tells them of what he has done, and so the pursuit to find Kaito continues.


Later the ninjas of the village find Kaitos location in which he last encountered the Rogue ninja, there they find kaitos armor and equipment but no Kaito. The Raikage orders to let the other countries know of a missing ninja sending out a letter with Kaitos description and info. Kaito awakens later the next morning and finds himself lost and confused, not remembering anything that has happened, he walks off wandering the woods and finds a fresh waterfall in which he bathes and places back on his clothing in which he washes also, then departs. An Elderly but strong and able body man from Konoha is wondering the forests leisurely on his horse not far from the village and stumbles upon kaito stumbling the forest hungry and tired as ever, the old man without hesitation helps Kaito up on the horse and offers him some food and drink, Kaito without hesitation accepts the generous offer and they ride off.


The old man takes him to Konoha to tell the Hokage of the venture, the Hokage a bit skeptical, has Kaito questioned of his name, origin and where he is from etc, Kaito remembers nothing. He is then further interogated in which they find that he has his mind sealed with a complex seal. The Hokage learns this and still skeptical has a letter sent out to the countries asking of a missing ninja. She soon accepts Kaito as part of the village warning others to not let there gaurd down, of course not knowing that Kaito poses no threat and is far from a violent person. Now part of the village Kaito begins to train there with Maito Gai's team, excelling due to him already having Taijustus experience and furthering his knowledge in taijutsu. He later becomes part of the Anbu of Konoha.


Seven years pass, Kumogakure and Konoha receive each others letters, and acts immediately. One day when kaito returns from an anbu mission the Hokage tells him of what has transpired, they talk for a great period of time and Kaito is happy and pleased of what he has learned, however nothing still does not sound familiar, with the exception of a man he last saw before he was knocked out. Later the Rogue ninja and his team strike again, kidnapping from both villages and demanding a ransom and power. Both villages take action, Kaito is part of the mission and encounters the Rogue ninja and his team. The Rogue ninja and his team are surprised to see Kaito still alive and matured. A battle takes place, kaito bests the ninja and the ninja requests to restore Kaitos memories of his past before he dies, Kaito allows him to do so however does not kill the man, as the man has not killed Kaito in the pass and because of this he has become a great ninja. The other ninja from the two villages has the eyes removed from the rogue ninja and places him and his team to be locked away for life seperate from each other.


Kaito and returns to his original village not forgetting his other family and at times visits them. Konoha and Kumogakure form an alliance after the ordeal.

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Theme Song and Background Music:









Battles

Won: none
Lost:
none

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Specialty: Taijutsu expert, uses lightning ninjutsu techniques to amplify his attributes such as defense, speed and attack. also able to use the 8 gates technique though he currently able to unlock only 6, he is training to unlock all 8.
Elements: Lightning, Fire
Your ninjutsu: Basic Ninjutsu skills and can use some fire and is experienced in using lightning.
Take this out... youve learnt no elements, or the 8 gates...
 

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Also i have been trying to post music from youtube in my biography, and have not been successful, may i have some assistance please? Thnx in advance
 

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You're a chunin, not a jounin. Remove it both in your rank and in your history.

You place a YT vid by copying everything behind the first '=' symbol in its URL and then paste it between YT-tags (the ones left from the spoiler tags)
 

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You need to place the link between YT-tags => [YOU*TUBE][/YOU*TUBE] (remove the * symbols).

Add the first element you want to learn and these ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Then I will approve it.
 

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You need to place the link between YT-tags => [YOU*TUBE][/YOU*TUBE] (remove the * symbols).

Add the first element you want to learn and these ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Then I will approve it.
okay thnx i'm going to work on these things thnx again
 
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