[KG] Storm w/Noni

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Aight LOL, the next is realize how storm works as we explained. Obviously everything needs to be proper to its use. Here is a good check list to make sure you got it.

- Energy based, so its very fluid
- The color can either be red or blue
- You can use lasers or clouds (the clouds can be dark in color with blue electricity or even red)
- It can appear anywhere since its mobile like water (battlefield, thin air, from the body of the user, etc)
- Its offense is capable of shock, paralyzing/numbing, and ripping apart solid structures


Also another tip, using outside inspiration (different manga for example) can be a use for making storm techniques.

Did you get that?
 

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Here is the proper basis when describing techniques.

- How you create it
- From where you create it
- Its properties
- How it can used in a fight
- What it can't do
- Restrictions (notes)

Anything questions? Obviously more advance the tech you want to create, the longer it will be and vice versa.
 

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Here are your tasks now. Go to the canon list, and show me different techniques you think can be made into storm techniques. Just post me the name, not the full techniques. Best look at energy based, and water/lightning techs. Add as many as you can, they should be unique and useful.

After this task, we will do the final task and move onto them techs.
 

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Reza Bakuhatsu no Jutsu ) - Laser Explosion Technique

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle


(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness

Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
 

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Cute list. Here is a list you can look at for help.



( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar


(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
(Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Release: Waterfall Basin
(Suiton Hijutsu: Kirisame) - Water Release Secret Technique: Mist Rain
(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique
(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion

This is a basic list, just use it for inspiration and looks. Get that creative mind going. Anyway, ask me any questions and then we will continue onto the techs.

Hope these ideas helped >_O
 

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(Ranton: Reizā Sākasu) - Storm Release: Laser Circus
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several bright beams of electricity that shoots at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the users hands as they use this technique.

Analyze this technique for me z.z
 

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This technique is one of the most famous ranton techniques, basically by gathering chakra in your hands, you release it and create multiple laserbeams, sending the lasers towards the enemy. The lasers i belive can be guided, to avoid obstacles and such, so its a quite handy technique. Works both long range as well as close and whilst performing it, your hands are kinda surrounded by this white light. on the minus side, The bright nature of the traveling beams makes it hard for the user to maintain visions of the opponent whilst performing it and it will be very difficult to perform this technique on a moving target.
 

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The brightness won't attack any vision, its cosmetic at best. Though it might be used as a flashlight to see in the dark as you attack, and you can aim it. So it can be used well depending on the environment. Also if the target is moving, you can guide the lasers, so you can still use it. Storm is fluid, it allows that. Any questions?
 

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The brightness won't attack any vision, its cosmetic at best. Though it might be used as a flashlight to see in the dark as you attack, and you can aim it. So it can be used well depending on the environment. Also if the target is moving, you can guide the lasers, so you can still use it. Storm is fluid, it allows that. Any questions?
Oh...well that's awesome! No questions.
 

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I gather a great amount of chakra in my hands and begin to manipulate it into my newly found, uniqe Ranton chakra, by combining my lightning and water natures. as i have the right amount i release it around my arms and as i do so they start to glow white, before releasing several blue beams heading towards a dummy and striking it on multiple places.
 

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Pretty good. Here is the next tech.



(Ranton: Raiunkōha) - Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals the user uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close. But a wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away.
Note: Cloud of rings lasts 2 turns

Analyze first.
 

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Alright so very straightforward, the user would create thunderclouds to surroundhimself and these clouds would then be used either offensivly or defensivly, for example by fireing blasts of lightning or preventing the oponent from closing in on you because the clouds generate electricity. nothing more to say really.

I do got a few questions doe. How fast would the blasts of lightning move and to what range would they reach? Also what rank would the blasts count as?
 

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How fast would the blasts of lightning move and to what range would they reach? Also what rank would the blasts count as?
Pretty fast, same pace as regular lightning. So lightning is considered the fastest element. However, time frame is what dictates speed and such for the most part. It can still be detected and countered either way. They can go up to short range. And the blast?? Hmmm, I think its safe to say A-Rank. But I'm ask scorps just to be sure.

Now perform it.
 
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