[Nin] Storm Training

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Alright so what do you think is Storm Release? Don't feel compelled to do intense research or anything, I'll fill in the gaps for you. But as a general concept, what do you think it is? What chakras go into creating the Storm element?
 

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I think storm release is a fusion of water and lightning that has multiple effects based on the form your using it in. For instance the most basic application of storm release is to create forms of Lazer beams that can "flow" or essentially move from their initial path towards an opponent's position. The second application is a manifestation f black storm clouds that absorb chakra of anything it touches
 

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Yup! That's basically it. Let's start with the first two A-Rank techniques. Just give me your thoughts, analysis, whatever basically. These aren't too tough. Ask any questions you may have as well.

(Ranton: Reizā Sākasu) - Storm Release: Laser Circus
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several bright beams of electricity that shoots at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the users hands as they use this technique.

(Ranton: Raiunkōha) - Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals the user uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close. But a wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away.
Note: Cloud of rings lasts 2 turns
 

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The first ability seems pretty straight forward, you create layers that shoot out at the opponent with the halo being nothing more than added flavor, it actually seems a little underpowered for an A rank shouldn't the layers be able to "flow" around attacks similar to water? The second ability is a little more interesting as it creates thunder clouds that encircle the user both defending him and supplying him with an offensive option to use lightning based Justus through the cloud.
 

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The first ability seems pretty straight forward, you create layers that shoot out at the opponent with the halo being nothing more than added flavor, it actually seems a little underpowered for an A rank shouldn't the layers be able to "flow" around attacks similar to water? The second ability is a little more interesting as it creates thunder clouds that encircle the user both defending him and supplying him with an offensive option to use lightning based Justus through the cloud.
Yeah, you could probably argue that the beams can flow around another technique as long as you keep it logical. If the other technique is huge in scale, probably not. That said, make sure you have appropriate defenses in place to be ignoring that other technique.

(Ranton: Burakku Hantingu) Storm Release: Black Hunting
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Seemingly using the maneuverability of Storm Release: Laser Circus technique, but employing the use of black lightning instead of normal lightning, the user sends out several panthers which are guided towards the opponent, slashing them as they pass. The panthers then merge into a single, giant panther behind the opponent, which bites them and then explodes.
Note: Can only be used by Darui

( Ranton Ougi: Rankiryuu ) Storm Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulance
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After doing a sequence of 4 handseals (Rat→Dragon→Hare→Tiger) the user releases a burst of red chakra in the form of a gigantic collumn of energy that rises high into the atmosphere above him. As soon as he does so, huge cold thunderclouds gather and swirl around and above the user, covering the whole battle field. As the pitch black thunderclouds gather high above the user, the whole atmosphere becomes charged with static energy. After some time, having gathered enough thunderclouds and lightning energy, the whole energy is unleashed upon the ground descending in the form of a collum of energy (similar to the one initially triggered). As it touches the ground around the user, the collumn explands outwards, taking advantage of the moisture in the air to travel up to long range, hitting everything while clearing the skies in the process. The energy destroys anything in its wake, leaving nothing but an empty wasteland behind. Because of the massive range and chakra needed to perform this technique, the user can only make use of it a limited amount of times.
Note: Usable only twice per battle.
Note: Takes one full turn to charge completely.

(Ranton: Arashi no Ju Hōō) Storm Release: The Ten Phoenixes Of The Storm
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After the user does the require hand signs, this technique will create three light blue phoenixes that are big as Sasuke's Hawk. The phoenixes are sent at the user's will to attack the opponent in whatever direction and angle the user chooses.
Note: Usable twice a match
Note: Courtesy of Korra.

Last three.
 

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the first technique is the easiest to describe the user creates black panthers using the principles of the storm technique "Lazer circus" and Black lightning that rush at the opponent, when their cut down they seemingly rejoin into a bigger panther that bites down on the opponent from behind. only question i have about this is why they didnt specify how many panthers can be made through one technique it seems like an oversight.The second technique sounds like its just one big storm bomb, alot of handseals and steps have to be made to see this through to its natural course, first the red column of energy goes in the sky then thunderclouds have to be formed before even more columns can come down from the clouds to touch the ground AND THEN it explodes. it honestly sounds like a very slow move if you dont have the right set up for it.


The third technique sounds like its basic elemental ninjutsu shaping only this time its a phoenix, would be cool if the phoenixs had some regeneration effect but nah their just regular constructs
 

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the first technique is the easiest to describe the user creates black panthers using the principles of the storm technique "Lazer circus" and Black lightning that rush at the opponent, when their cut down they seemingly rejoin into a bigger panther that bites down on the opponent from behind. only question i have about this is why they didnt specify how many panthers can be made through one technique it seems like an oversight.The second technique sounds like its just one big storm bomb, alot of handseals and steps have to be made to see this through to its natural course, first the red column of energy goes in the sky then thunderclouds have to be formed before even more columns can come down from the clouds to touch the ground AND THEN it explodes. it honestly sounds like a very slow move if you dont have the right set up for it.


The third technique sounds like its basic elemental ninjutsu shaping only this time its a phoenix, would be cool if the phoenixs had some regeneration effect but nah their just regular constructs
Looking good then. You're all done here. You've completed Storm Release training.
 
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