[Other] State of dreaming

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Little by little
Pieces of reality
Drips across my face
Along with the rain
Alone with myself
I'm soaked to the bone in guilt
On everything I look at I am not the same as I used to be
Where was I when this transition happened
Was I really that far gone
Faces fade away just like memories
Sleepy
Sleepy hollow
Inside solitude
Happiness here
But confusion lies dormant
What becomes of me
If you can call this me
I think you can
I mean what else do I have
The piano plays silently in the background
While I sit here and think
Beautifully going up and down the notes scorching then fading as though haunting my existence
My inner Shell
Shedding as though a snake adapting to the environment
Excitement flows threw me as the keys have been hit
This is an enticing feeling
Now it's just been taken away
Left is the faintness of the adrenaline that was here just a second ago
Bracing myself of what might happen next
But truly realizing you can never be truly prepared for the future
Anything can happen
This Melody is sad but beautiful
The irony is that it makes me feel at peace but at the same time my mind and emotions are racing
Racing to that finish line though never wanting that feeling to stop
It's a high
An excellent twist don't you say
As the music slowly fades away
Little by little
As reality starts to hit me
 

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Woah, I love it.
I was getting alot from it.
At first I thought Identity issues, then...I got...overwhelmed with the future...maybe the transition was about adulthood.

I loved it though.
 

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Woah, I love it.
I was getting alot from it.
At first I thought Identity issues, then...I got...overwhelmed with the future...maybe the transition was about adulthood.

I loved it though.
its a little of everything but key element is time and sound

because sound (music) is making noise for a period of time.. during this time my feelings are running amuck and reacting to the song.. letting my emotions run lose is sort of euphoric so it feels like a state of dreaming but as the song comes to an end ... euphoria starts to fade and reality starts to kick in.. also the idendity confusion is best described to how there r (usually) 3 parts 2 a song and each of them have thier own feelings (apart from overall message) lol i hope im making sense


i wish i could start a poetry blog place but idk how or where to do that lol
 

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its a little of everything but key element is time and sound

because sound (music) is making noise for a period of time.. during this time my feelings are running amuck and reacting to the song.. letting my emotions run lose is sort of euphoric so it feels like a state of dreaming but as the song comes to an end ... euphoria starts to fade and reality starts to kick in.. also the idendity confusion is best described to how there r (usually) 3 parts 2 a song and each of them have thier own feelings (apart from overall message) lol i hope im making sense


i wish i could start a poetry blog place but idk how or where to do that lol
I sort of understand it. lol
 
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