[Other] Sorrow In The Rain

Ryu Kishi

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Born from pain, i stand
now cast alone in the rain.
Only do i hear the lonely
howl of the wind;

It sings a song that holds
my soul within.

The raindrops fall upon
My face, drowning my sorrow, my disgrace.

I see a shadow, crouched In the distance;

I call out to it, "speak your
Name now, demon of the
Dark."

It turns to me and
Says, "i am your own heart."

"Taken by the dark, i was
Left here to rot, now i
Look upon a ruin, slowly turning
To dust."

I reach to the stars hoping
The clouds will part, but
Sorrow clings, and the shadow
It laughs.

It says; "do not pray for the rain
To stop, for they are my
tears; and forever will they
drop."

And now i stand alone
In the rain, only to hold
onto my sorrow, my pain
 

fiend

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Sombre and Beautiful dude :). Especially stanza 5,6,7:-
I call out to it, "speak your
Name now, demon of the
Dark."

It turns to me and
Says, "i am your own heart."

"Taken by the dark, i was
Left here to rot, now i
Look upon a ruin, slowly turning
To dust."

Good job dude :).
 

Hotaruko

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nice one ryu :) i like the despair in it
 
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