Sonic origins: Chapter 2 episode 1 Sonics curse return of the darkness

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note the people in the above list i am honoring them for allowing me to push on through with my fanfic. (lawliet) i am the creator and author all material is mine, and mine alone. however ikikouchiha did a character line in the first one if it counts then she is in with me for next months fanfic competion

also i removed killer vision, hinata020 because they had nothin to do with this and also... i did it because i wanted to make it acceptable and not against the rules (please forgive me guys i'll add on the next ones)
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season 1
title: the new enemy
episode/ chapters 1/ 12





Sonic barely is able to catch Lux as he falls, his quills are burned and turn a little black for the sulfur inside the breath of the Lizards of Iblis. Sonic runs but the lizards follow, he manages to find a cave and runs in it. using a power ring he flies into the cave. Sonic then lays Lux on a rock inside the cave taking his chaos emerald.

sound of the blue and green chaos emeralds energy

Sonic (he throws both in the air and catches them) i'm going to use this, i will give them back later (he said with a cold tone as he walks out of the cave)

Sonic rushes out of the cave and grabs both emeralds, they begin to glow as the lizards get closer. Sonic puts one in his pouch on his side. he begins to have energy swarm around him. he glows yellow but his eyes remain green. the lizards charge at him, but he moves at such speeds all they catch is ground.

Incomplete super sonic *good thing i learned this from shadow a while back, now which one to take out first* YOU! (he points at one of the largest one but his finger goes limp and his eye buldge out white as he is stunned)

The giant lizard steps out and reveals itself to be Bio hazard. Sonic face is that of terror and sheer fear, but he quickly regains the old so confident self.

mean while at a unkown location near a lake


???: time to begin the war
???: yes mobius is been how should you say it?.... boring now of late
???: silence both of you, i will smite the next that speak'th the name mobius
??? & ???: yes mi lord, or should i say king Solaris

he walks to the water of the lake, he points his hand up and bright light appears and begins to boil the water. revealing a temple, along with a stone hedgehogs with crowns on their heads.

Solaris Behold! the temple of veyla, a goddess considered pure and light, but i will bring the night to mobius so my light can shine in the dark (he declared pointing a black chaos emerald at the light source in the temple)

Back at the Hazard location


Sonic and Hazard trade blows left and right, sonics white gloves are stained with green blood. Hazard shakes off a kick to the face and charges Sonic to the ground however snic curls up in a ball and rolls away and bounces of a tree hitting Hazard in the face.

Sonic dang, he is durable this was a very bad idea. even if i can enter this mode without the chaos emeralds i am no where near as strong as i should be. (he said with a heavy breathing)

the beast roars as Sonic dodges him, the beast's laser attack misses by a mile. Sonic and him stare at each other waiting for each to make move when Sonic feels his body heat increase. his heart and chest pump blood and air rapidly through out his body. a light forms in his hands and he combine the two sphere like objects, by will. He then throws both arms forward unleashing a torrent of chaos spears.

end of chapter

for the record i write them by myself i put my closes friends in here to honor them for giving me the courage to write them
 
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the hazard is sure is tough :( i hope sonic gets those chaos emeralds so he can even the playing fields.
great job bro. i like this even better than the 1st one:D

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Thank you bro. I admit, this was unexpected, but great. Sonic is one of my childhood favs and you've continued the epicness. Also, I love the way you detail combat. I suck at doing that. Great job!
 
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